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Date: 05/16/2007 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Four

Ewww. It seems that almost everyone that works for the Council is sick and twisted. Ewww. Poor Maggie.

"whispered southing things to him" Did you mean soothing?

Update soon. I'm really curious what will happen next, I guess Xander will appear soon.

Author's Response: A Xander fan hmmm? Yeah I guess I got spell chack that again. No reliable beta and long breaks between posting and inspiration make it difficult sometimes and my spelling sucks....LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing, Trinity

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Date: 05/16/2007 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter three

Nice choice of names. I like the new abilities and powers that you gave them. There's just one thing I don't like....Travers as the head of Council...that can't be good (well, we can blame it on the genes that run in that family, lol)

Author's Response: Council needed a new villian in charge and what better than a rebirth of an old enemy? Not sure where it goes from here but I hope the muses tell me soon so i can write more. Trinity

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Date: 05/16/2007 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter two

A bit long history lesson for me, I mean I really could do without the part before the battle in L.A. Xander's decision to come back was a bit of surprise, I wonder what happened with Willow. And Angel....well, to me he really sounds more like Dru. Or did he wise up really quick at the end?


Author's Response: When you know your about to die (for the last time) you react out of the norm some what. In this case Angle just acknowledged what he already knew. Thanks for reading, Trinity

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Date: 05/16/2007 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter One

Good start, interesting. I can say I like your madness, lol. BTW, it was pretty obvious from the beginning who they really are.

Author's Response: (Giggles) I wanted it to be obvious but as they had changed thier names I couldn't just say Buffy and Spike arrived at.....LOL Thanks for reading, Trinity

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Date: 05/16/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter One

Hmm, the Summers women are dead? Different....

Author's Response: dead is a realitive term......(BEG) Trinity

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