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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hot!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Sorry for the delay, I didn't realize I had a review.

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

You know just once I would like to be pulled over by a HOT cop. But nooooo Ivy gets pulled over by cops who still have frosting on their mouths and who like to accuse me of doing something I didn't do! *sorry for my rant but There are too many over weight police officers in this town!* :)

Author's Response: I know, right?! I have never been pulled over by a hot cop! Now matter how many times I have begged and pleaded with hubby to do so. **pouts** Thanks for the review, Ivy!

Reviewer: spike4theworld Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Great and that last part about where the idea come from *wags finger* kinky lol

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! This was one of those ideas that just refuse to stop bugging you until you write it. Glad you enjoyed! **blushes** And, I've tried to get my hubby to participate, but he's afraid his boss will find out. **sigh**

Reviewer: spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

*pouts* no fair! all the cops around here are fat, donut-chasers LOL

Author's Response: LoL! Feel sorry for you. Of course, other than my husband I don't find any of the other ones that attractive! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sierra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1

wow. that was... incredible for lack of a better word.

haha
amazing.


Author's Response: Incredible...really? Well, thank you very much, Sierra!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome! Very hot!

Author's Response: Thank you Tammy!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I hope this gets a seel soon because I loved this ficc It was really good with a really unexpected ending....

Author's Response: Thanks! I have actually toyed with the notion of making this a series. Maybe.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice job Serenity - excellent fantasy too!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn! And, it's one of my favs...not that I have too many.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good twist; hot too.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to have you back, haven't heard from you lately!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1

This was fantastic, loved the story! Great closing author's note... lol! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I just couldn't help adding that little end note. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1

LOVED IT!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1

You go girl , I cracked up when I read "psst , my husband's a police officer" you are bad and that was very hot.

Author's Response: HeHe! Although he is a cop, I still cannot convince him to try this fantasy...yet. I mean, why else do we live out in the country where no one could see us? Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was hott and lol I must say that lil FYI at the bottom had me rolling on the floor ~^^~ Nice little naughty tidbit

Author's Response: I just had to add that little bit of information! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Pyro63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was HOT!!

Author's Response: Thanks, thought so myself. :) Otherwise I wouldn't be harassing my hubby! LoL!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lucky you! A Hot fic, with a hopefully (for you!) HOT background story!
Is your cop blond by any chance? LOL!
Hint---wear skirts a lot.
Just caught a coupla typos, figured you might wanna know:
***** "...spine as griped the cheeks tightly, nails biting into the supple skin." *****

SHOULD read:
"spine as he gripped the cheeks tightly, nails biting into the supple skin."

DITTO:
***** "...hands on her shoulders and pulled her close; tucking her head beneath his chin." *****
&
SHOULD BE:
"...hands on her shoulders and pulled her close, tucking her head beneath his chin."

AND:
***** "...to make me forget.” Buffy replied, titling her head upwards so that ..." *****

"...to make me forget.” Buffy replied, tilting her head upwards so that ..."

Of course, if I was writing about those gorgeous blue eyes, I'd forget how to spell that word too! Actually, I screwed up twice just editing the correction! LOL!
(Ignore the asterisks, just used 'em for a spacer)

Really enjoyed this li'l shortie fic, quite a good "Nooner" read for an ole lady like me!
I read another something like this once, with Spike a cop and Buffy "convincing" him not to give her a ticket...ahem... However, your descriptive style was quite nice; was quite...REALLY DESCRIPTIVE...ahem...so, was really, well, enjoyed!
Fresh, yet gritty!
You should continue these as a series of "adventures"...
You oughtta see if you could get permission to use that Spike!Cop! graphic that IBE used in TE when Spike did the Cop fantasy thingie. It was one hot graphic; kept it on my desktop for the longest time (til the laptop crashed the first time--I'm still in DellHell) which griped my fiance off big-time (former cop in Clay Co., FLA, a good ole boy)... oh, and on the TMI thing, I read IBE's feedback, and my fella's still got his cuffs...!
Seriously! Would love to look forward to them.
Thanks from the long-term fiance of a former cop as well, who is also a dirty old fic-lovin' lady,
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Hey there, fyreburned! Thank you so much for the fantastic and very helpful review. I finished writing this around five in the morning and my caffeine high had seriously worn off, my proof reading wasn't quite up to snuff. I think I made all the corrections. Feel free to check out my stuff and let me know! I don't have a beta reader since I am usually way too impatient to wait for it to return. Glad you liked the story. It was an idea that just wouldn't leave me alone. Figure that since my hubby hasn't given in to the idea yet, that writing about it would kill the demon for a bit. ;) You're right, that graphic IBE used was very hot, indeed. Thanks again!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh you had it going there until they started talking was wondering why she knew his name, here they only put last names on the badge.

I loved it.

Author's Response: They only put last names on the uniforms here, too. I had to put the Officer Spike in, just seemed to me like a good "fantasy game" name. William by day and naughty Spike by night, or something. Course, he could be my naughty Spike any time of day, really. LoL! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story

Author's Response: Thank you! Happy to hear that you liked it!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wondered if this might be a little fantasy play. Nicely done : ) Cool fic, good smut. (ps - you lucky dawg...)

Author's Response: Yes, it is indeed. Thank you so much for the wonderful review, Heidi.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMFG!!!!!!! Okay, first off - very hot indeed, well done sweety. Second, glad you have a policeman for a hubby - definitely helps with dreaming this fic up,OR, have you done this sort of thing before you naughty girl? (Wouldn't blame you one bit if you did) Giggles. Third - I have to share this, so sorry for the TMI. I lived with my second boyfriend for 2 years, a NY State Trooper - not a very, ahem, creative bloke. I asked him once to use the handcuffs on me and he actually said no. Can you believe it? I mean, what red blooded American man in his right mind would say no to a girl 'asking' him to use handcuffs? *Snorts sarcastic laughter*. Needless to say, I never married him.

Author's Response: Wow! So glad that you liked my little story! Very honored to have such a wonderful author review for me! Yea! Actually, it has been a long time fantasy of mine that I thought would be fulfilled when I met my hubby, but for some reason he won't do it. Guess that applies to your 'what red blooded American man in his right mind would say no', huh? Of course, he's very fond of the handcuffs. :)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent job. I wonder if you took this from a past experience;)

Author's Response: Sadly, I didn't get this from past experience...present unfilled fantasy, yes! I actually printed this story out and took it home to my hubby! :)~ Thanks!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1

lucky Buffy, having a hubby who would join in her fantasy. loved it


Author's Response: Yes, she is a very lucky woman! Glad you liked it, thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1

And I was getting ready to say.. bad cop story.

Can't say kinky sex.. but I assume they like let's say --variety to spike up their lives.
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Now that the muse has had her fun.. please channel her back to Buffy Spike and Poor Riley. I hope Riley wakes up and finds a girl that loves him... and has a heart to heart with our misguided heroine.

Pam

Author's Response: Everyone needs a little variety, right? Glad you liked it, Pam...and yes, I will be getting to work on FP. Don't want to make you guys start rioting. LoL! Thanks.

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1

hot as hell!!!!
love it.
great fantasy!

Author's Response: Thanks, Ivana. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1

hoo u lucky bitch!!! :) lol. i hope u'll write more.

Author's Response: I actually have given thought to a series about this couple, just several little one shots every once in a while. Dunno as of yet. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh! such a steamy little scene... And who hasn't fantisized about a hot young cop... yummy! Well done

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I know that I have always carried around a special little fantasy about a cop. (My hubby!)

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