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Reviewer: Duchess Michelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Prologue - The Start

I really like this. I thought I'd read it before but now looking at it and reading it I realize that I hadn't. Lol. Well, I really do like it. And I hope you continue it. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Giggles and laughs

They have a bear in the fridge? ~ Good that Spike can't hear Buffy talking to Ana *gg*. I wonder if Buffy will follow Ana's advice now when it comes to Spike.

Author's Response: Hehe, you'll find out in the next chapter.. Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 10:17 pm Title: Prologue - The Start

I wonder what you'll do with this story... if they have a slayer here maybe Spike and Angel are vamps here etc. ~ Till next chapter

Author's Response: I can tell you now that Spike and Angel are really much vamps and the rest you'll jsut have to read when I upload.. :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :P

Reviewer: A-LUCARD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 07:05 pm Title: Prologue - The Start

Obviously, the storyline has been done before, but I never tire of it. Would love to see a different spin from the other similar stories. However, there are a lot of mistakes, which made it very hard to read. You should get a beta to help with spelling and grammatical errors. They can also be a great help in the flow of a story. Good start though! Good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. :P I know that my spelling and so on could be better and it would maybe help with a beta but I don't really know how to get one :P:(.. Gonna try but can't promise anything..

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