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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2013 - 07:01 pm Title: chapter 2

Fun and sweet.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 - 11:29 pm Title: chapter 2

Oh this was very funny. The Beta Bug, will F your Grammar up good and proper.

Author's Response: hubby's revenge on my grammar..

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2008 - 02:36 am Title: chapter 2

hahaha!...that was fun!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 07:07 pm Title: chapter 2

lol, I can imagine B explaining the whole thing to Olivia! :) And the what? cyber sex? will that work? lol

Author's Response: blimey I didn't think I'd get any more reviews for this one, it went up ages ago. welcome to my fic...and thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 12:42 pm Title: chapter 2

That was amusing :)

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very funny! You made me laugh :) I hope the punctuation monster stays away from my computer ;)

Author's Response: my poor husband ( who wrote this and Beta's all my work) swears it livs in my computer:)

Reviewer: ZLB Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 - 07:40 am Title: chapter 2

Interesting solution to this particular problem... but highly entertaining. ~ZLB

Author's Response: thanks glad you enjoyed hrolf

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2008 - 06:42 pm Title: chapter 2

PS: So why aren't you writing more spuffy????? And I can't be the only person asking that question...hmm ;)

Author's Response: Actually, yes you are the only one asking so far! As to why not more, it's not my main area of interest. I do other stuff on other sites and I'm trying to sell books :-) I wrote this as another writer's Beta-reader, and the strain of grammar corrections just got to me :-D Best Wishes, Hrolf

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: chapter 2

OMG!!! What a scream!!! Whacky computer virus hellmouth style...this would've made a great episode in the show, and a great counterpoint to 'Hush' but without the screams of terror and more orgasmic screams for the gang...LOL. I uvd et...

Author's Response: Many thanks; glad you enjoyed it! Hrolf

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1

clever concept

Author's Response: Born of desperation :-) Thanks, Hrolf

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 08:29 pm Title: chapter 2

Now, that was fun :)

Author's Response: Lots of dark, brooding stories around here: I thought something lighter might be good. Thanks, Hrolf

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's a very unique idea. I'm loving this story to bits! :D

Author's Response: Many thanks. I do other stuff elsewhere... Hrolf

Reviewer: Roby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 03:47 pm Title: chapter 2

FUNNY!!! This should be a required reading in English Comp classes! :-)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Life as a Beta reader ain't easy :-) Hrolf

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 10:06 am Title: chapter 2

*edit* what i meant was i got the storyline but it ended really fast so...but i did like it!

Author's Response: Lots of you seem to have missed the second part... then found it... the PC won't apologise (beast) so I will. Glad you liked it; I do other stuff elsewhere, too. Hrolf

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 10:04 am Title: chapter 2

i really don't get the ending but good job. interesting story!

Author's Response: thanks! Hrolf

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 01:08 am Title: chapter 2

Oh that was good... Sorry, I thought you had ended the story on the last chapter! My bad! That was an awesome little fic! Well done!

Author's Response: Thankyou! I do other stuff as well, but not here. Wrote this 'cos my Alpha (well I'm the Beta reader...) does this for real and I just couldn't take much more! Glad you enjoyed. Hrolf

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god... you have to finish this!!!! Don't leave us hanging! Please say this isn't the end! *cry profusely* This was a brilliant idea hun, I giggled all the way through it!

Author's Response: Don't cry too much, you'll get water in the keyboard and then it all comes true :-) Hrolf (more answer coming)

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 01:48 pm Title: chapter 2

You're storie maid me laff.

Their arr sum righters hear what cud benyfit buy reeding!

Author's Response: Ah, you reely got the joke! Glad you enjoyed; I have other stuff on other sites too. Hrolf

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 12:57 pm Title: chapter 2

This was really original! I liked it!

XXX

Author's Response: Many thanks. I write other stuff as well... Hrolf

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 06:54 am Title: chapter 2

Funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hrolf

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1

At first I thought you were making lots of spellingmistakes - until my thick head caught on ; ) Wonder what the virus will do if left unchecked. Fun concept.

Author's Response: Ah: got it right, did I? Glad you enjoyed. Hrolf

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 04:55 am Title: chapter 2

Funny read :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I have other styles and other subjects on other sites... Hrolf

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really funny. Oh, the horrors of lost punctuation!

I did get a little confused where Buffy is talking to Spike and then is at Tara's door, thinking maybe something got cut, but maybe it was intentional: Buffy shook her head. “sOmeth;in'g wi,erd mustf iNd Wil;Ler come in,” said Tara, taking the slayer's elbow and guiding her gently to a settee. “What is it?”


Author's Response: Having Beta'd so many, I just couldn't hold it in any more :-) Yes, you missed a bit: we had to re-post so it might be worth checking again. Not a lot in between and nothing you can't work out from what you have got... Regards, Hrolf

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2008 - 11:13 pm Title: chapter 2

That's a last another way to fight an enemy: Make love not war ;-)
Enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: Ah, you found the rest of it then! I have other sites if you like the style (although this isn't typical me) Regards, Hrolf

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2008 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was fun. *on to the next part*

Author's Response: Unless you got the goofed-up version, that was all there is... might be worth checking. Many thanks, Hrolf

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