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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 09:44 pm Title: Enter Spike

Good to see an update after this time! BTW, the html code went wrong (see my other review regarding tags), the whole chapter is a link and centered.)

Ah that's how William turned into Spike.
*gg* No wonder Spike had trouble to believe, he looks so different on the picture.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 01:19 pm Title: Finding The Look

I liked the make-over but didn't expect the car accident. Hopefully nothing bad happened.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 01:31 am Title: Finding The Look

Wasn't expecting the car. I'm sure this will be interesting.

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Date: 03/08/2008 - 11:51 pm Title: Needing Something New

I've been excited to find out just how this story is gonna get played out. But, in order for that to happen, I must have more updates! Only a friendly suggestion as I understand RL calls us away from the Realm. One last thing...I am happy to see Buffy already likes William. I usually hate stories in which people have to change for someone to even know they exist.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 10:19 pm Title: Needing Something New

And in this moment Spike was born...
But William didn't notice how sad Buffy was.
Till next part.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 10:14 pm Title: Finding The Fun

So Buffy's plan to have fun clubbing didn't go the way she wanted for William. Unexpected to see Dru cause so much problems.
Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: marre Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Finding The Fun

Really like how is your story developing. Can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 08:48 pm Title: Getting Ready

To the first chapter: You're added a banner with a link to photobucket; that is centered. Doing so you used HTML-Tags. If you post a link, you have to close it again. That's why the whole text is a link to photobucket. Same goes for the center.
See "Something general about tags" for the basics
See "Appearance of text" for bold etc.
See "How can I link to another page?" for the links.
See "Images" for putting a banner up without a link back to photobucket.
Found here!
Good luck!


Mmmh Willow has good eyes :)
Not William's fault to wear the wrong clothes; he has a good excuse. Quick thinking of Buffy to make it better.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 10:03 pm Title: Friendly Advice

I'm not sure what will happen (how William will become what he writes) but I like the start.
(You should fix the chapter though: close the center and the Link tag) < * /center * > and (without the spaces and * ; I hope it shows when I post it.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean. I'm not very good with the coding a lot of these sites use, if you don't mind explaining or can direct me to a website that can do so email me at unbreakably_me at Yahoo. Thanks for your help ~ZLB

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