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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 12:08 am Title: Withdrawal

good characters

Author's Response: Hi kw! thanks for that! :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 07:29 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

loved it - loved the whole backpedaling, rowing down a stream explanation for what he and Angel did and for what happened.

Author's Response: thanks again Heidi for all your reviews! I've reaponded to them all! Looking forward to what you think of the rest of the fic! :) Glad you liked the chapter! some just seem to write themselves and that was one of them :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 07:04 pm Title: Dreaming eh?

Finally!!!

and dreaming.... *chuckles*

Author's Response: Thought that was a good explaination!! LOL

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:58 pm Title: Turning Point

Oh I wanna lay sleeping with my head on Spikes chest too - may I.; )
I was worried the doctor wouldn't let them be togheter after his attempt. So happy you proved me wrong.

Author's Response: I think Buffy would have gone 'Slayer' on the doctors if they tried to keep her out!!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: I'm Sorry...

Oh my god!! Wheres Buffy!!!!

Author's Response: thought that might be your reaction!! Tee hee!!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:43 pm Title: Watching Over You

It is soo sweet, her looking after him. And I really did think Buffy would fix little Spike right up - but I had imagined a more 'hands on' approach. Hope he lets her in soon.

Author's Response: She trying to respect his wishes and wait for him :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: I've Never Been Average

Your hair grows straight up - that was funny, that. Good rapport between them now, but still with little hints of animosity.

Author's Response: Am I sad if I say that that line made me smile when I wrote it? Tee hee!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:26 pm Title: Is It Progress?

Brads a cool dude - and really good at getting through - yay Brad!

Author's Response: Yeah I figured it'd take someone like Brad to get Spike to listen! Gald you like him! :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:17 pm Title: Rejection

excellently written - I think you showed his frustration and anger and fear - really well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying excellently written! *huge grin*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:16 pm Title: Withdrawal

Just a few more days...

Poor Spike! Thank God for Brad, though I can't really blame Buffy and Angel; they DO live in a different world.

More Mabel, please!!! *bats eyelashes* (old habit die hard :-P)

*hugs*

Author's Response: Hi sotia! RL really full on at the mo but hope eyelashes aren't in too much peril - will update asap!! *big hugs*

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:06 pm Title: Crossed Wires

Oh - very good - and very frustrating *grins* can't wait for the reunion.

Author's Response: That was another fun one to write! :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: He Needs You, Buffy

Love, love and adore Dawn - always the more intelligent and pragmatic of the bunch : )

Author's Response: I always see her as being the practical one of the gang! :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:57 pm Title: Bite Me

liked the conversation between Angel and Buffy - I think she should hang up on him more often and a lot - in fact both Spike and Buffy should do that! : )

Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing that chapter with the hanging up etc !! So pleased that you liked it too :)

Reviewer: heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:53 pm Title: It's Too Much...

oh poor Spike...

Author's Response: Things aren't good for our hero!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Consequences

Hi - I've just started reading this and have just gulped down the first chapters so far. This is really wonderful, but also horribly suspenseful. I will just have to keep on reading : )

Author's Response: Hi Heidi! Welcome aboard! thanks for giving the fic a go. And saying wonderful in a review is always going to make me happy!! lol

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 04:12 pm Title: Withdrawal

I really like Brad. Still feeling bad for Spike, but now Buffy's there, that's good. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Hi Pet, Brad is very grounded - something they're not used to!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 08:27 am Title: Withdrawal

I love Brad, he's great. He'll talk some sense into them all. Another great update. Cant wait for when Spike wakes up. :)

Author's Response: hopefully Brad might get a nomination somewhere as he seems popular!! Will try not to keep you waiting too long! :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:00 am Title: Withdrawal

a great update so soon! you made me happy! :)
Angel crying! that made me laugh. didn't expect Brad to be like that but....so did it right! I like him a lot.
so...when's the new chapter coming? hi hi hi

Author's Response: glad the quick update made you happy!! Couldn't resist Angel breaking down - poor Brad that was quite a shock! Glad you like Brad! Got to type up chapter and sent to Carol then will post as soon as it's back :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:49 am Title: Withdrawal

Powerful stuff - good but in a not particularly nice way. Does that make sense. Feel so sorry for everyone at the moment but unless you're going to be really mean there's only a bit more withdrawal to go. This was as good as ever. Now back to RL and how good was that at the end of last week? Have to agree with you about JM on Friday although my high points were Fall of Night and Chocolate Jesus - that was just perfect for him. Did you go on Sunday? If you did, did you get your pic done? My turned out surprisingly well considering I'm in it!! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I know what you mean Sam! thank you. Don't worry I'm not going to be mean! Tee hee!! I had a great time as you can imagine! Were 5 rows from front - dead centre! Fall of Night and Chocolate Jesus were my high points too!! I love FON and Choc J had me cheering like mad (think I embarrassed my pal!! Oops!) My pic is also surprisingly good!! I ended up with 2 for price of 1 as one was off centre and so photographer took another. Didn't expect both to be printed but they were! So I grabbed them and ran!! lol!! Want to swap pics? Tee hee

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 03:23 am Title: Withdrawal

Hi Mabel, I just loved this fic, but poor Spike , and Buffy and Angel to. Have I told you how much I love that Brad, I just love him , I can't wait for more , thank god you write as fast as u do and Carol betas fast and is as good as she is. Great work, and thanks for the picture of JM,tee hee.

Author's Response: Hi Jo! Glad you love Brad - I quite fancy him myself!! lol!! More soon but it may be day after tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 03:09 am Title: Withdrawal

Interesting the chapter was very well done, and I like how your dealing with the situation.

Author's Response: Hi Nicka, thanks for saying that it was well done :) Really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 12:12 am Title: Withdrawal

Forgot to say lucky girl for seeing James Marsters. Did you have a good time? Which I'm sure you did. Did you have any pictures taken with him?

Author's Response: Hi! Yes I had a great time. At Union Chapel he played 2 songs that I really hoped he would - Fall Of Night and Chocolate Jesus. Got a good pic of me with JM will post it on my lj later in week :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 12:09 am Title: Withdrawal

I love Brad, I love Brad, did I mention that I love Brad. LOL He saw that his friend wasn't being treated with the best possible care and he did something about it. You go Brad. Glad that Spike and Brad are good friends.

Not that I blame Angel and Buffy on how they were treating Spike. They really thought it was for the best so Spike wouldn't hurt himself. But sometimes you need to see it in a different perspective. Just like Brad tried to understand theirs and Buffy and Angel understood Brads. I just knew that Buffy wasn't so sure about leaving Spike is a straitjacket. Hugs Buffy, poor girl. Must be hard seeing the man you love go through everything Spike has been going though.



Author's Response: Hi there Guesty! Glad you love Brad! I like him too!! LOL! And I'm pleased that you picked up on the different perspective thing cos Brad isn't used to what is normal for them! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2008 - 10:45 pm Title: Withdrawal

Brad saves the day again. Hopefully after this the withdrawal will go more smoothly.

Author's Response: Yes - Brad is a star!! Keep your fingers crossed Bridget! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2008 - 09:02 pm Title: Withdrawal

Poor Spike, so they made it worse. Angel mostly and Buffy for not checking if Spike was okay. If Spike only hadn't drunk that much blood from the start, it would have lasted longer. :(
Hopefully he'll be over it soon.

Author's Response: Hi Cordyk - glad you picked up on the fact that Spike guzzling the blood didn't help his cause! Thanks for letting me know and will update asap! :)

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