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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 - 06:16 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

Enjoyed!

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Date: 09/24/2009 - 11:44 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

Amazingly beautiful story. Loved it!

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Date: 09/24/2009 - 11:41 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

Amazingly beautiful story. Loved it!

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 06:31 am Title: If I Dared You Now?

Very nice! gave me warm tinglings!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2009 - 12:08 am Title: We have to celebrate!

aww extremely cute!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 08:38 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

Sad to see this story go now.
Loved the ending though!

Reviewer: huh? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 08:25 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 04:56 pm Title: We have to celebrate!

This was really beautiful! I loved it! I'm kinda confused with the last line though...it's William that's older right? Either way, I love this adorable piece on Spuffy loving!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:01 am Title: Scared

Awe :) Good they talked about it - it sounds as if it is well now. *grins* And Buffy is even starting with twins; she will be busy :)
~ Hope you're well being the 21st now.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 10:49 pm Title: Scared

No wonder Buffy's nervous! Twins! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Scared

Wonderful! I am excited for their twins.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 12:43 pm Title: Scared

Yay and update. Wisdom teeth huh? I got those out when I was 14 and it wasn't too bad. You're real out of it from the laugh gas and you just want to sleep after its done. It feels weird once the stitches pop out...you get little bits of food stuck in your gums.

Reviewer: cl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 - 03:01 am Title: My Only and Always

I love this story! i can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: My Only and Always

Enjoyed the read, both of the past and the present.
Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: . Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 02:36 am Title: My Only and Always

you've missed the timeline i think

first you say 6.5 years ago, then one month AFTER that, it's 6 years 7 months. Actually, it should be 6 years and 5 months. Further into the future, not the past

Author's Response: thank you so much for pointing that out for me:):) I've corrected the error.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 02:28 am Title: My Only and Always

Really loving this! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 01:36 pm Title: My Only and Always

Great Chapter. I will be keeping an eye on the fic for the next one.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2008 - 03:12 am Title: I Think I Lied

i loved it! this story is just soo cute! the flashbacks are even more adorable!!!!!!! aww please update! i havent seen this story in so long! i hope you update soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2008 - 11:09 pm Title: I Think I Lied

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2008 - 07:04 pm Title: I Think I Lied

They seem to have been in love when younger (as Joyce and Jenny said) but still they had another girl(boy)friend? How did that happen?
But as we know they found a way to each other after all.
~ Till next part, good to hear you're working at the next chapter already.

Author's Response: when they were younger it was more of a close friendship bond.... that grew to be more over the years... neither actually making the first step into becoming a popper couple.

Reviewer: Babs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 11:40 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?

The story is sweet and romantic. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 09:45 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?

Loved the chapter! So sweet! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: grammatical and spelling issues Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:50 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?

I know you say you have a beta, but there are a ton of mistakes both in spelling, punctuation, and grammar in this story. You really need someone else to look over it.

In this chapter, for example, you say "bought" instead of "brought" in the first paragraph, and in the 3rd paragraph, pastor is spelled "paster."

Also, you use possessives when you should use plurals, and misuse their, there, they're and your and you're.

All of this makes your story look as if it was written by a 13 year old.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:17 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?

Ok so your getting a double review here. I loved the first chapter, it showed how shaky their relationship was. And go mum for intervening without making Buffy feel as though she was meddling. This chapter was wonderful too, I love the flash backs, I found myself laughing at all the child silliness. So you got yourself another reader hun, coz I have fallen for this fic. Hook, line and sinker.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?

Good to see Joyce was right; seeing the photos helped Buffy remember. :)
Looking forward to more (of the past and the present)

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