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Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2009 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter Five

This right here: "She was full of imperfection, and in his eyes, that was what made her perfect." This is exactly the reason why I believe that Spike is the one for Buffy. The others, they only saw what they wanted to see, not the real Buffy, but some ideal they've got in their heads. Spike saw her - all of her - and loved her for her. The Slayer and the woman, including all her flaws, mistakes, etc.

I absolutely thank you for these paragraphs. They're my whole reasoning in staying a Spuffy fan. :) Great job! I'm still reading through the chapters I've missed, I just wanted to leave a little thanks for that line. Already loving this story!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Five

Waiting patiently for the trials to begin. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2008 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter Five

Awesome story! You always come up with such cool stuff Holly!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Five

The long, laborious journey was vivid and eerie. The dark silence and Spike's death grip on the rope gave me goosebumps, and they didn't subside until his feet finally hit the ground. Larry was vividly described, but his hideousness went by the wayside when he spoke. He was actually quite personable, offering his dire warnings in a pretty companionable fashion.

I'm sure these trials are going to be tough going, and youi're doing a fantastic job setting us up.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Five

Ah good, recited the rules. Better be save than sorry. Spike doesn't know what awaits him.
The encounter with Larry was almost fun but not for Spike. Larry knew how to play him. And now the trials. I fear that won't be easy.
Enjoyed :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Five

Good chappie, I'm really enjoying this fic. Spike is so Spike in this , snarky and funny but realizes how serious it is and is willing to do anything for Buffy .
He loves her so much , it's really heartbreaking.*sighs*

Looking forward to the next chapter . I know it's going to get ugly *shudders* More soon please. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Five

Seems this guardian-Larry talks more than Spike. Trying to trick him in to a mistake I assume..

Waiting to see the tricks he is going to play on Spike so he will make a mistake with one of the three...

Enjoying...

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Five

This is exciting! :) I'm loving the mythological references too. Can't wait for more. :)*

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Five

Intriguing... I wonder what the challenges are going to be? I hope Spike doen't have to be too patient, although he was incredibly patient with Drusilla when he needed to be so perhaps he'll manage...
More please...

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