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Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Six

So far what I've read which is up to this chapter I've liked.

You have clearly explained every myth (whether it be a real myth i wouldn't know) with great skill in your writing. You clearly show Spike's pain and unlike most stories you're not rushing to the fact of getting to Buffy. You are creating a true story. I can't read any further right now, but I'll be back to read some more. I'm dying to know what other trials he comes up against and once upon them what fears of Buffy's he'll have to face.

I like Larry, if he wasn't the one guarding our fave vamp to his love I would probably love him even more. Good job, interesting story line. 5 stars.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

And what type of water would be a vampire's greatest fear.. Are some of these trials Spike must pass... just like Buffy . part of his greatest fears? And .. not real?

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

Wanted to drop a line and let you know that I am enjoying your story. The first trial is turning out to be quite interesting.

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Six

Poor Spike. :-( Looking forward to seeing how he gets past the holy water.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Six

That nightmare was a doozy and it did an excellent job putting me on edge. No matter how amiable Larry appears, he's protecting Hell's rights to Buffy. Spike would do well to stop listening to the demon.

I can't wait to see how you're going to get Spike through this holy water pool and through a doroless wall...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Six

How on earth will Spike get through Holy water?? Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 10/20/2008 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Six

I was a bit confused at the start, thought Spike was back or dreaming. But I think now it's part of the trial.
Even if Larry says not, it felt like it. Well or a nightmare.
Ah I wondered if hell could have holy water; normal water wouldn't be a trial. That's bad for Spike; I hope he'll find a solution.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

ouch. a little harsh. holy water? i wonder what is going to happen

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter Six

Love it.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Six

Great chappie. Poor Spike, this is going to be bad.
He just has to figure it out, love that he's so determined. Story just gets more interesting.

Can't wait for more...Soon? :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Six

Getting more interesting.. figure it out Spike..

I like Larry... LOL head games..

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