Date: 11/04/2008 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Spike wasting away is difficult to read, but you're depicting his suffering beautifully. He's barely hanging on, though I love that the Buffy picture he's committed to memory is serving him so well, keeping him somewhat grounded against the onslaught of foul memories and needling.
Larry showing up and explaining that Spike has two more days of this was absolutely brutal.
Date: 11/03/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Larry has to be lying....hopefully. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 11/03/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Before I forget: Congrats for the noms :D
Oh my... I was waiting for a spider to come but there was non. The 'spider' was the time itself, huh? Hard torture without raising a finger. Only day one?
I wouldn't trust Larry though to speak the truth if I were Spike (regarding one day / 100 years gone by). He lied before....
Looking forward to find out if he said the truth.
Date: 11/03/2008 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter Nine
No spider ... hmm... Head Games... and only one day has passed.
Date: 11/03/2008 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter Nine
Hope by year 300 Spike remembers his name. Man...one day = 100 yrs...can't imagine. But I'm glad he has her with him--keeping him going. Poor Spike...caught up on daylight savings time too probably. 1 hour equals 4 yrs... Plus no food for him and he can't die...he should have waste away but no...still there...weak...
Date: 11/03/2008 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Nine
Oh wow. I should have figured... I mean, when Angel went to hell on the show, he was there for a lot longer than what passed on earth. You're sneaky! :)
Date: 11/03/2008 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Nine
wait, does that mean buffy is going to be super old? is she immortal?
Date: 11/03/2008 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Nine
My God this is hertwrenching . Poor Soike hanging there wasting away and it's only been one day , but 100 yrs. have passed for him . Can only imagine what poor Buffy is enduring *shudders*
Update soon please , this is just amazing !
Date: 11/03/2008 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter Nine
Holy crap! I have to admit that was quite a shock. See, I figured it might've been one of those we're going to use surface time while you suffer hell time things but I really didn't expect it to be a hundred years. Great job! Hmm, will the next installment be another day or the end of the trial. I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for the next chapter. So far this story has been an immensely enjoyable ride!