Date: 11/29/2008 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
What a fantastic chapter! Very powerful and painful stuff, to be utterly alone for so long. I'm glad Spike was finally able to get close to her. Poor Buffy, but at least she has Spike to touch. Wonder what she's going to say when she can talk again. Really amazing story, and so looking forward to more!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
this story is fantastic. i love your style of writing! update soon please!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
This is such a great story. One thing that a lot of stories and the show itself lack is the idea of immensity tied into emotion. This story does that very well. Love it, want more.
Date: 11/26/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I've always been a fan of your writings but this fic leaves me in awe. Spike's devotion is absolutely perfect, it really reflects the sentiment he expressed in his speech in Touched. That depth of feeling was there all along, but Buffy couldn't see it, hell, sometimes I don't think Spike always knew. But it was there. All I can hope is when Buffy and Spike returns to the surface, Buffy will remember what he did for her instead of letting the Scoobies tell her what to think. Keep up the good work!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
You deliver incredible, articulate, consummately emotive words that, like Spike, inch us ever so carefully towards this cornered treasure...... and when the touch comes .....
Absolutely bloody magnificent.
Date: 11/26/2008 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Just beautiful!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Amazing story, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/26/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Very moving moment. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 11/25/2008 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
AWE
Spike was going through the moments. Like a shy animal, running away. Seems Spike found the key, not words, just touches. So he proofed he wasn't a ghost. She was too long alone.
Enjoyed the read :)
But they aren't out of hell yet...
Date: 11/25/2008 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Buffy 's terror and panic were a wonder to read, as was Spike's dogged pursuit. He'd come so far, only to find his prize damaged beyond the imagination.
The description of her cornered with Spike trying to calm her with words and memories that she no longer had was heart breaking and breath taking. His need to make contact was a living thing, and when they touched and Buffy broke down I gave a sigh of relief. This is a good sign, but I'll bet there's along way to go to get Buffy whole again.
Date: 11/25/2008 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
What a beautiful chapter ! Everything Spike is feeling just jumps off the screen and I feel it too. Poor Spike still feels so guilty about Buffy jumping and him not finding her sooner. *so sad*. Buffy is going to need so much help to find herself again.. Loved the last line.."In that moment they belonged to each other." :)
Can't wait for the next chappie ! Happy Thanksgiving !!
Date: 11/25/2008 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Cant wait till the next one. Will she talk or be mute for a while? A thousand years without talking to people probably would eventually make you forget how to speak--all the talking went through your head...just like Spike did.
I'm not going to get excited just because she threw herself to him just yet. All the Spuffy fans know they belong together, but this girl isn't Buffy...she's a shell ,like you said. Or maybe I'm wrong...maybe that spark when he touched her was something more than the readers can see. Now the challenge is getting them out. Spike fell from the sky...they certainly can't go the way he came. I believe Buffy needs to destroy her own hell, defeat it, for both of them to make it out.
Date: 11/25/2008 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter.. and loved the ending.. of course. And remembered Angel's name of all people..
But now to see what she has to say.. And what they will have to do to get out of hell..
Enjoyed
Author's Response: She didn't remember Angel's name - she just made a sound Spike thought might be an indicator of remembering something, but it was just a sound. Sorry if that was confusing!
Thank you!
Date: 11/25/2008 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
thank god. finally. perfect.