Date: 03/05/2009 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Well, that's something new. Very interesting development here, and I can't wait to find out what it means to them both! I love the way you're writing Buffy's painful struggle to remember, and Spike's pain in watching hers. Excellent work, looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 03/03/2009 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Well you certainly know how to make me beg for more. Loved it and please update soon.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Wow!! Love the new chapter. Hope Spike's getting through now. He's so Victorian. Teeheehee!
Date: 03/02/2009 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
This was another haunting chapter in this vivid, emotional story. Buffy's attacks seem to be a form of punishment, but I'm sure all will be revealed in time. Spike's dream was revealing. Of course he's the key to Buffy's memories, he's part of the past she needs to reclaim.
it's always wonderful to read more of this entertaining, lyrical piece.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Uh-huh... what happened to Buffy? It's like someone is punishing her because she tried to remember.
Regarding the chip... if Spike is really that long in hell, maybe it just stopped working. It was never planned - I guess - that the chip should work this long.
Ohhhhh I didn't expect that to be the writing on the wall!
~ Good to hear your muse is back :)
Looking forward to more.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
What a bloody magnificent chapter. You have filled it with a a wealth of emotion, both restrained and otherwise, with pain and tears and glorious happiness; a bond between these two which transcends the blockade on her memory .......... and then, at the last, in dreamtime, she writes his name -
You really own that place where poignancy and powerful drama, collide.
Brilliant.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty
poor Buffy and Spike, brilliant chapter as always...loved the way you described Spike's predicament..blue nuts!!!
more please
Date: 03/02/2009 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Ye Gods woman, you can't leave it there. Great update, more soon pls.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty
wow. I mean, really, that's all i'm coming up with right now. I've got chills.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Wow an amazing chapter. Buffy is having a breakthrough, she's remembering. Didn't expect her to write Spike's name. This is heartbreaking, I love it so much!
More soon please. =)
Date: 03/02/2009 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty
*gasp* Awesome.
This fic breaks my heart and I love it.
Date: 03/02/2009 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Things are starting to come together. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 03/01/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Spike is ( here ) to take me home..
Date: 03/01/2009 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Wow.. never expected her to write Spike's name... Or at least this time. She knows...
Would have to go back.. isn't it the same thing written over and over again... Could she have known it would be Spike that would come get her? Or just hope?
Figured the pain is Hell's way of keeping her from remembering. Negative reinforcement.
Are we at that moment of recognition and realization ? We are in Hell and Spike is hear to take me home..
Enjoying.