Date: 06/29/2009 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
good chapter
Date: 06/28/2009 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five
Absolutely beautiful chapters, so well written. I liked the way you wrote the last chapter, from Buffy's POV but in a sort of flashback form, I think it really worked. Well done as always, and I can't wait to see what Spike does with his crumb. :)
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
An absolutely heart-breaking, yet uplifting chapter: so sweet and poignant, their conversation revealing to each other a depth of feeling neither can ignore ....... or should. Awkward pauses, yes - but they both speak their minds, even show sparks of their feisty past relationship and ultimately, even with her continuing lapses of memory and his three hundred years in the Buffy-free desert, she is still the girl he loves and he is still the vampire who had always felt the sharp end of her tongue, but never her stake.
Wonderful.
Date: 06/21/2009 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
This chapter was really good. Absolutely loved the last line. Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five
"You gave me a crumb." That was beautiful. Thank you for updating.
Date: 06/20/2009 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
yay!!! she gave him a crumb!! maybe if they get happy enough, Hell will spit them out! cuz u know, u're not supposed to be happy in Hell! LOL my mom will love this! great update!
Monica
Date: 06/20/2009 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
Loved the talk between Spike and Buffy and what the writing on the wall meant. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
I enjoyed Spike's explanation for the writing unscrambling. I'd forgotten that Buffy's perception scripted her entire hell experience. Even through her madness, this woman has had a lot of time to reflect and Spike's efforts are believably being rewarded by her softness. I loved this: "Your name is on the wall, Spike. I wanted to remember you."
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
Great chapter. I loved their conversation. And good for Buffy admitting she has feelings for Spike and wants them to be real. At last Spike got his crumb.*smile*
Loved it, anxiously waiting for more. =)
Date: 06/20/2009 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five
It may sound a bit harsh, not sure ... but being in hell had done wonders for Buffy. Or was it just because she was out of the influence of her friends? Or lost her memory?
Not sure... but Spike got his crumb :)
Enjoyed the update.
Date: 06/20/2009 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five
Buffy has feelings for Spike.. his crumb.. but is it real. Or just a cruel joke of "Hell".. Very good Holly.