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Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2009 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

good chapter

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2009 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Absolutely beautiful chapters, so well written. I liked the way you wrote the last chapter, from Buffy's POV but in a sort of flashback form, I think it really worked. Well done as always, and I can't wait to see what Spike does with his crumb. :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

An absolutely heart-breaking, yet uplifting chapter: so sweet and poignant, their conversation revealing to each other a depth of feeling neither can ignore ....... or should. Awkward pauses, yes - but they both speak their minds, even show sparks of their feisty past relationship and ultimately, even with her continuing lapses of memory and his three hundred years in the Buffy-free desert, she is still the girl he loves and he is still the vampire who had always felt the sharp end of her tongue, but never her stake.

Wonderful.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

This chapter was really good. Absolutely loved the last line. Can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

"You gave me a crumb." That was beautiful. Thank you for updating.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

yay!!! she gave him a crumb!! maybe if they get happy enough, Hell will spit them out! cuz u know, u're not supposed to be happy in Hell! LOL my mom will love this! great update!

Monica

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Loved the talk between Spike and Buffy and what the writing on the wall meant. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

I enjoyed Spike's explanation for the writing unscrambling. I'd forgotten that Buffy's perception scripted her entire hell experience. Even through her madness, this woman has had a lot of time to reflect and Spike's efforts are believably being rewarded by her softness. I loved this: "Your name is on the wall, Spike. I wanted to remember you."

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Great chapter. I loved their conversation. And good for Buffy admitting she has feelings for Spike and wants them to be real. At last Spike got his crumb.*smile*

Loved it, anxiously waiting for more. =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

It may sound a bit harsh, not sure ... but being in hell had done wonders for Buffy. Or was it just because she was out of the influence of her friends? Or lost her memory?
Not sure... but Spike got his crumb :)
Enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Buffy has feelings for Spike.. his crumb.. but is it real. Or just a cruel joke of "Hell".. Very good Holly.

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