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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2012 - 10:27 pm Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

Hot, hot, hot. Needs a beta, though. Some of the errors/typos are actually humorous, especially where it SHOULDN'T be.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 03:39 pm Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

This was very hot. Whew. And bringing Faith in? Wow!

Author's Response: Yeah i have always wanted to write a girl on girl fic and this was the perfect opportunity.

Reviewer: mrs r s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2008 - 01:23 am Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

you'll make a gr8 erotic writer with practice, lay off being 2 tender though n cliche' ur style is defiatly for dirty/raw porn. u may need 2 do more research of ur own, i know women can not stand emediatly after strong orgasm.

Author's Response: Wow thanks, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2008 - 03:27 am Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

wonderfully porny and fun!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

Loved it !! Well done :-)

Author's Response: Thanks

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Date: 12/18/2008 - 06:53 pm Title: Plan into action.

Good plan!! Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks glad you are liking it.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: What are friends for...

Loved this first chapter, definitely be reading the rest, the only thing is you've left what I assume are your beta's comments in the chapter, other than that fantastic !! Can't wait to see how Buffy gets her man

Author's Response: thanks for the review.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 08:05 pm Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

I liked it but didn't care for the first chapter at all. I'm not a fan of Buffy and Faith together at all. So it took me by surprise and pretty much skipped the first chapter. Spike and Faith are hot together. I wouldn't mind Spike and Faith together. I always thought they would make a super hot couple. I also don't read female slash. It just isn't my thing. Male slash, yes. MMMM.....Spike and Angel. I want to join in on that pairing. LOL If you ever plan to make a sequel on this. I will probably pass if you plan on writing more Buffy and Faith. Thanks for the Spuffy part though.

Author's Response: No i don't have any plans for a squeal... at least not at the moment lol but i'm glad you liked it even if female slash isn't your thing... there was lots of Spuffy to enjoy. thanks for the review

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 07:30 pm Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

Very good, especially considering it's your first pwp

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 03:49 am Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

good, though I think you need a beta. Lot of run on sentences.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 03:43 am Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

This definetly calls for sequal, very sexy.

Author's Response: Maybe latter on in a few months ill sit down and give it ago but i need to get some of my WIP out of the way, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 03:41 am Title: Plan into action.

I was hoping the plan was Buffy and Faith are out by the pool going to town on each other, and Spike sees them and can't help himself. But brilliant plan on Faith's part. Poor car.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 03:34 am Title: What are friends for...

hee, Faith and Buffy. I'm kind of surprised by it.

Author's Response: I always wanted to do a Buffy and Faith pairing seemed like a go way to do it.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 03:04 am Title: Seducing Mr Pratt.

That was hot i loved it i wish it hadn't ended yet though.

Author's Response: Thanks maybe ill look into doing a squeal latter on.

Reviewer: Lara C Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2008 - 08:54 am Title: Plan into action.

Hey, God great story...
umm, is that it or are you going to tell us whats going to happen next?? :P
But what you have there is really really good!!
:D
xx

Author's Response: Don't worry there is more, you will find out what happens next very soon :)

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2008 - 07:02 am Title: Plan into action.

love it!!!
post more soon

Author's Response: Will be updating very soon, glad your liking it so far.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Plan into action.

Totally awsome, want more!

Author's Response: thanks glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 02:40 pm Title: Plan into action.

wow please more. i can't wait to see where we go next.

Author's Response: Hee glad your liking it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 12:49 pm Title: Plan into action.

Interested to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: What are friends for...

Not a bad start, but you might want to do a re-edit...you've left some beta comments in there :o)

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out all fixed now.

Reviewer: Abbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 11:49 am Title: What are friends for...

Well that's Hot!

Can't wait to find out what Faith has in mind but I have a guess. lol



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing glad you are enjoying it so far.

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