This is a lot of fun so far. I find a Buffy who persists with Riley after being introduced to the joys of Spike at least as annoying as the real Buffy, but then I trace the origin of my distaste for canon Buffy to her giddy look of admiration when Riley showed off the experimentation pit at the heart of the Initiative.
a lovely scene between daughter and mother - one of the things I dislike about the series was this insane idea that Buffy being The Slayer was this huge secret that had to be kept from her mother.
This is a great story; I really,really liked it.
It does need some moreediting,as there are a number of mistakes,including your/you're errors,spelling problems (e.g. should be "cocoa," not coco),vocab problems (interment is used when intimate is the correct word),continuity errors (Spike's mom is said to be Annabel at one spot,and Annabelle in another, and they decide on the name Dawn ahead of time,several chapters before her birth,but then come up with the name anew after her birth),among other errors,large and small.
So,with good editing,this fic could be truly great,as thee plot is very enjoyable!
Wonderful story. I love stories where Buffy isn't such a bitch to Spike. This was a joy to read.
That was a great conversation between Buffy and her mom.
You need to edit your writing the typos take away from an otherwise cute story.
Wow I loved it this story was even better than I thought it would be... once I started reading it I couldn't stop till I finished it and I have no regrets :D
Beautiful.. You had me crying at multiple times and the ending put a huge smile on my face. Thank you for writing it, I needed that today. :)
I like Dru's role in Dawn's life - a nice twist.
And a good end. Enjoyed.
Thanks for finishing the story. It is really beautiful. I am going to save it in my computer. Now I will be waiting for your other stories.
Loved reading this story, great ending. Really enjoyed it.
I absolutely loved this story! The ending with Buffy and Spike was so sweet. I'm going to miss this story. :(
On the bright side, I can look forward to your WIPs being updated or a new story coming out.
I loved your story and I am sorry to see it end. It appears everyone had a happy ending. Great job..
I love the way Dawn healed Dru and she stayed around to help protect Dawn. Very sweet ending...
All caught up now ~ enjoyed the updates.
Didn't expect Drusilla to save Buffy but it was the only explanation for the vision now that the Council had her.
Thought Dru had Buffy - the Council has her? *reads on*
Oh you updated several chapters? More to read.
This chapter made me smile and totally brightened my day! Phew! She's finally out and protected. Ooh, that Travers, can we bring back to life just so we can smack him around. Does this mean this story is going to end. :-(
As always, I liked the chapter. Update soon.
How lovely to see Drusilla cast as a friend rather than as an enemy. Now for the birth.....
This word 'interment' you keep using...Is that supposed to be 'internment' or 'intimate'? Inquiring minds want to know.
Nice twist with Dru coming to save Buffy. Can't wait for the next chapter!