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Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2009 - 01:31 pm Title: 15

brilliant update, loved it...and the banner is amazing....looking forward to the next bit. thanks so much for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you so very-very much, honey! *squishes*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2009 - 12:14 pm Title: 15

yummy chapter Sotia! anxiously awaiting your next update!

Author's Response: Thank you honey! *huggles*

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 09:18 pm Title: 15

Again we didn't get to find out what Spike wagered for in place of his soul. He didn't ask to become human because he went into game face having sex with William. So it must have something to do with the Immortal I am guessing.

Hopefully the guys punish Buffy for even thinking about agreeing to the Immortal's terms. Cause punishment might be very enjoyable.

Seems that Sofia might help the white hats in their quest. She might be an ally.

Author's Response: You won't find out what Spike got for a while, because I'm evil that way! Thank you for reading and reviewing, honey! *huggles*

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 05:44 pm Title: 15

Oh i'm dying to know what happened w/ the Immortal!!! I hope Spike and William kill her. what a dumb bitch she better not dare. I'm also DYING to know what he wished for instead. it's not fair!!!! tell me now!!!!!!!!! lol ok so it was really fucking good now lets move on and tell me what happened :) :) :)

Author's Response: LOL, they did better than kill her, no? You won't find out what Spike got until much later, I'm sorry to say. I'm evil. Hee! Thank you for reviewing, hon! *huggles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 04:12 pm Title: 15

Thank you for answering the comments; not everybody does.
Uh-huh.. tease! I still don't know what Spike wanted from the demon for not getting the soul. And what Buffy told the Immortal. You're really too good with your cliffhangers.
I enjoyed the update anyway, good chapter :))
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I think that if you can find the time to leave a comment, I should find time to reply :) Plus you make me so happy with liking my stories that I have to thank you!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed the update. More will come soon! *hugs*

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 02:30 pm Title: 15

Woman, of course I liked!! There was YUMMY Spilliam, what's not to like?heehee. The Immortal is pissing me off...God he's a real skeeze, UGH. LOVED William bleaching his hair and acting more Spike like, cause he SO needed that.
Xander and Dawn are cute, and I like that Willow is noticing the sparkage.
And we still don't know what Spike wished for.

I LOVE this story, it's getting better and better.
More soon, please, please! *squishes*

Author's Response: Hee, I'm so very glad you liked! Thank you! The Immortal is a horrible thing, but will get his, really!!! *huggles* More is being written today!

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 02:24 pm Title: 15

All the characters were written brilliantly in this chapter. Adalberto is extremely infuriating, felt so sorry for William when he was waiting for Buffy ("his soul ached"), would love to see Xander and Dawn together-they are so cute arguing like an old married couple, Willow was very Willow with the hyperventilating, glad to see William is blonde again and the Spike came back, the sex was very hot and you totally captured the control William needed to feel, and glad to see the three were reunited at the end. Looking forward to more =D well done hun, this was an amazing chapter and written really well, I wish I had your talent =)

Author's Response: Thank you so VERY much! Writing so many characters is my greatest problem with this fic, and I'm really happy you like them! You made me blush with this review *squishes*

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 12:37 pm Title: 14

Oooo Loved It! Stepford-y Kennedy is indeed creepy, I love how Willow, Dawn and Xander are on it tho. I wanna know why Buffy had to bite back a gasp when she saw Sofia! Is there gonna be something important there? And aww Spike couldn't get his soul but hmmm yes I wonder what he'll ask for ... ? Looking forward to more as usual :-) well done with this chapter, this story keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response: *bounces* YAYYY, you liked! The reason Buffy had to bite back a gasp is hidden in a previous chapter... Bwahahahahaha!!!! More is up now, but I don't think you'll get answer to your questions just yet! *huggles* Thank you!!!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 01:09 am Title: 14

Sotia! I am so distraught about Spike.. please update soon!

Author's Response: Spike will be happy, honey. I promise you that! Thank you for reading and reviewing! *huggles*

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 07:12 pm Title: 14

I LOVED this chappie. Poor Spike after all that he's not getting his soul. *crawls over to Spike and snuggles him* But he NEEDS it ...doesn't he? I'm worried for Buffy going to the Immortal's place, and William has to act more Spike-like cause that's who he is also.
Stepford Slayer Kennedy..lol People are noticing.

I'm guessing Spike will ask to be sent to his own time?You are an evil author leaving us with this cliffie!!! =)

More soon please, cause I ADORE this story so much!btw congrats on your noms, this truly deserves it. *wuggles*

Author's Response: I am SO happy you liked this chappie so much!!! *bounces* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Spike didn't ask what you think... tehehehehe... (and yes, I'm evil) More is up now! *smooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 03:20 pm Title: 14

And there I wondered what kept Spike away. Makes sense that the soul isn't there but that fact should have been told him before.
I hope Buffy isn't in danger: (And look forward to what Spike wants now - getting back to his Buffy?) :)

Author's Response: The demons should indeed have told him sooner. Sigh. Thankfully he'll work around the problem. Buffy isn't in danger, like she said, the Immortal wants her to want to go back to him. As for what Spike wants now... whatever it is, it has to be in this universe. (I love answering questions in a way that gives birth to more of them. Hee) Thank you for reading and reviewing, hun! *huggles*

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 01:48 pm Title: 14

Like it? LOVE it! OMFG I can't believe you ended this chappie HERE!!!
And the wine the Immortal is giving Buffy--- will it be doctored too, like it was for Kennedy? And why's she gasping @ the site of Sofia? (or is she?)
I don't get it exactly--- Is Lurky or whomever, the demon, saying this 'Spike' IS from this dimension and therefore IS William and since Wm has THE soul of Wm Pratt (?), then Spike can't have it cos it can't be shared by the two of them (and WHY not?) cos they ARE the same person from the same dimension (just different time slices) OR what exactly IS that demony one saying as his excuse that Spike cannot have THAT sould NOR any other??? (and why not? Surely there's a generic soul or two out there); and if he IS from a different dimension then why can't he have his OWN soul from HIS own dimension, the one having belonged to THAT Wm. Pratt??? OK, confused and lost...
Love it tho', so write MORE!
~~Kara

Author's Response: LOL, woman, I LOVE your passionate reviews!!! (and I'll try and answer as many points as I can without giving anything up)
The wine isn't doctored, and the reason for the gasp is hidden in a previous chapter.Hee!
The demon said that since Spike isn't from their universe (remember, there was a split that created a separate universe), and William IS from this universe, William already has the soul that used to be available. The two can't share one soul. And they can't exactly pluck any soul from anywhere and stuff it in him, it may fuck up his personality! He could have his own soul, from his own dimension, only he'd have to get it from the demons of his own dimension (and only the Immortal knows exactly where that is). Therefore soul-wise we're screwed. Thankfully, Spike has FORESIGHT and will solve the problem another way :D Really glad you liked (and more is written already! WOOT) *hugs*

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 11:37 am Title: 14

I can't remember which chapter was the last one I reviewed but I love this one so here you go.

>With a sigh, he did the only thing he could for the time being. He started dusting the living room.< I can't stop laughing. Also, when I see it in my head he's just wearing a frilly apron, not jeans and t shirt. :P

Kennedy is definitely a pod person and as spy devices go, that's a screwy one!! I wonder what Berto is up to...

>His throat felt raw, he was losing pints of blood from wounds he was sure he wouldn’t stay conscious long enough to count, and he was willing to bet he’d broken more than a couple of ribs.< *grabs Spike gently and whisks him away to get better and smother him in kisses*

Since Spike can't get the soul, maybe he should ask for super strong sun block and to be sent back and to negate the existence of the Immortal. I'm sure there's a way to make that one wish. ^_^

I wants The Kiss!! Go write! *smoochies*

Author's Response: I'm soooo happy you liked this chapter, THANK YOU!!! Kennedy isn't under any influence but that of her own stupidity, honest :D As for Spike... you're kind of close with one of your guesses there. Hee!!! Thank you for everything, you're a doll! *hugglesmooches*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2009 - 05:31 pm Title: 13

lots happened in this chapter :) Many details and all so beautifully described. I hope you update soon *hugs and smooshins*

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much, Beth! It means the world that you still like! *squishes*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2009 - 04:59 pm Title: 12

sorry I got behind on these, but you know I hve been a busy writing. Loved this chapter and teleporting.. off to next one :)

Author's Response: I know you've been busy, hun, and I really appreciate that you came back to this story! Thank you muchly! *huggles*

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 04:20 pm Title: 13

I freaking love this story! I'm so glad there was a sequel only cause i mean 2 spikes?! what's better than that. Buffy's one lucky gal. Anyway i like where it's at right now. I'm not sure where you're going w/ this but i like the direction it's in so far :) I understand Spike's need to go to back. How can he leave his Buffy to die right? So valiant he is :) hehe. Ok but i totally love this story. please please please keep writing it. I hate Kennedy i wish she would trip over her fat head and just stay there. and congrats on getting engaged!!! yay u!!!

Author's Response: I can't tell you how happy it makes me that you like this story so far. As you can see, both its readership and review numbers are low, so it's got me all jittery. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing (and for the congrats on the engagement--met fiance through this site, btw :P) and I will update as soon as the next chappie is back from my betas :D *huggles*

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2009 - 03:19 pm Title: 13

Brilliant chapter. The Immortal is officially creepy! I wonder where Spike has gone ... ? And Kennedy's return at the end was a bit unexpected. I can't understand the lack of reviews for this fic - I think it is fantastic and unique :-)

Author's Response: You'll find out where Spike has gone as soon as I have the next chappie back from my betas :D Kennedy being back will seem weird to more than you... tehehehe, I'm evil. Thank you SOOOO much for your kind words, honey. They, and the fact that you're still with this story make me happier than you know! *huggles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2009 - 09:16 pm Title: 13

Huh... what does Giles do there with the Immortal? *wonders*
Ah I see. I wondered first if Giles did secretly work with him.
Poor Sofia. Not a good fate her family has there. Hope she'll be able to get away. The world is better off without the Immortal.

Author's Response: Sofia will get her happy ending, but she'll have to work for it. More coming soon, hun. Thanks for sticking with this story! *smooches*

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2009 - 05:51 pm Title: 13

Hmmmmmmmmmm, wonder what Spike is up to. And damn the immortal - that was such a sad tale of Sofia's foremothers. I hope she finds a way to free herself and her soul from the wanker. If Buffy plans on going to fight the Immortal - and with everything else going on - things are about to get reeeeealy interesting - wrings hands together getting ready for the action/angst. Well done chapter my darling - luv you - huggles.

Author's Response: Tehehhe, by now YOU should know what Spike had in mind :D That Immortal guy is despicable (I just imagined Duffy Duck saying that. Hee) but will get what's coming to him! I'm really glad you liked the chappie, boo. Thank you so much for always finding time for me! *smooches* Luv you muchly!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2009 - 03:20 pm Title: 13

OMG the Immortal is a real bastard. Well I knew he was but damn this is so evil...poor sofia,I hope she decides to help them. And where oh where has Spike gone to hmm? I think I have an idea. And now Skankennedy is back, probably gonna do something evil. I liked that little bit of Spike that popped out in William when he punched Giles.Heehee

Love this story can't wait for the next chappie when you return! Have fun! *huggz*

Author's Response: The Immortal is the scary kind of evil, not the one that's "in your face", acting its evilness out all the time (hope that made sense). Sofia is in a bind, but so is everyone else. Dun dun dun duuuun....

As for a little bit of Spike showing in William, one of my hopes for this fic is that it'll show how Spike--in his core--didn't change much with the soul. Nothing makes me happier than reviews like this, saying they glimpse one side of him in the other (and again, maybe I don't make much sense. It's Mercury being retrograde, I tell ya) Thank you so much for still following this story, and for liking it! *huggles* (oh, and next chappie is with my betas :D)

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2009 - 11:51 am Title: 12

Hmm I wonder if Kennedy is going to turn into a rogue Faith type character, she seems the type to. Loved how Buffy and William's telepathy worked lol. Great chapter, looking forward to more :-)

Author's Response: Hee, Kennedy does seem to be the kind to go rogue... but will she? Dun dun dun dun... I'm glad you liked the telepathy bit, hope to have more for you this coming week. Thank you for reviewing, honey! *huggles*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 12:47 am Title: 11

finally some time to read! I hope all turn out ok... this trio is so close to my heart, cant stand them to be hurting..

on to next chapter...

Author's Response: I just wanna squish you hard for reading and reviewing. And I hope you're liking too :P *smooches*

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 04:31 pm Title: 12

Hey, another intersting chapter. Can't wait to see exactly what web of lies and half-truths the smarmortal will use to get Kennedy's attention.
Poor Willow, everybody wants a piece of her (not literally...) :D

Love you baby!!!

Author's Response: LOL @ the smarmortal!!! Willow is in the middle of several things, poor thingie, will she tackle them all? Tehehhehe... Thank you for reviewing baby, and bipolar though this may sound, thank you for making my muse virtually incapable of writing angst lately. I love you lots!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 05:24 pm Title: 12

Mmmm I think Kennedy is already falling for what the Immortal told her. - She should remember that Sofia told her to be careful what she agrees to.
And now you've made me curious not only how the telepathy will go, I want to know what's the what with Willow's teleporting ability.
~ Have a good time :)

Author's Response: Kennedy's mind works in weird ways... :-P Sofia will play a key role in everything, I hope you'll like her part. Thank you for reading and reviewing, honey. Have an awesome holiday, *smooches*

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 08:25 am Title: 12

AWESOME chapter,
Loved it loads.

I really don't like Kennedy that much but I suspect she will be causing some more trouble. Teleporting that's a new one, wonder what Spike has up his sleeve.

Really can't wait until the next update and I hope you enjoy your time off hun. Have a good easter.

XxX *hugs*
-Ivy



Author's Response: YAY for you liking the chapter, I'm really happy! Kennedy surely has the potential for LOTS of trouble. Dun dun dun DUUUUUN!!! Have an awesome Easter, hunny, and thank you very-very much for sticking with me and this fic! *squishes*

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