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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:07 am Title: Unexpected Caller

I loved all the cute Spuffyness! Calm before the storm huh? I'm so worried for Spike, Buffy and Bitty Buffy, and the music box has me worried too. It's just a worry-thon for me! And Hank is on his way to Sunnydale now*eep*
Can't wait for the next update! I've been spoiled with all your regular updates and now we have to wait a week.*pouts*

Author's Response: ;) Thanks!!! Don't worry too much about Bitty Buffy...I love happy endings, after all! Thanks!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 08:44 pm Title: It's A...

I finally caught up, I was so behind! So interested in finding out why Hank was in hiding. I'm glad he had a reason this time for disappearing. Dana sure is creepy now! I also like having Faith changing her ways and trying to become a better person, I like her, it would be nice to see her become a person they could trust, especially with the Travers putting out a hit on the baby. This story is definitely so much fun to read. :-)

Author's Response: I still have hope for Dana. I've already got a plan for her. :) Lots more to come soon!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 04:41 pm Title: It's A...

Aww, a girl! :) Dana, huh? Great update!

Author's Response: ;) Thanks Pet!!! Hope to have this story wrapped up maybe by the end of the week. :)

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 04:03 pm Title: It's A...

Shit fuck shits!!! Dana can be scary bitch when she wants to be. And the music box carousel thingy? I'm thinking horror movie creepy but no one realizes it's creepy until it sprouts fangs and eats everyone. Just saying. Love where this is going!

Author's Response: LOL...thanks Jaden! I'm not gonna reveal anything...just have to stay tuned!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 01:28 pm Title: It's A...

yeh, had a feeling it was dana, hating her right now, even though it's not entirely her fault, i hope the bitch gets what's coming to her. and they're seriously stupid to bother buffy's father with this, don't they know he's not exactly a big part of her life?

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I think it's kind of obvious now that Quentin Travers is kind've working alone with his little puppet Dana. I think he's smart enough to know that even though Buffy and her father don't have the best relationship, she would still get a little freaked if they approached him, which might distract her long enough to get a good shot in, if ya know what I mean.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 11:45 am Title: It's A...

Was hoping it was Dana ... would like Faith to be a good girl for a while.. But again... poor Dana under the control of the Council along with Dad.. Buffy will know something is up when he shows up...

Was thinking "two" if she is that big .. that soon..

Enjoying..

Author's Response: Thanks Pam! I really have thought about going the twins route, but I already did that with Drawn to the Fire, so I'm not sure if it would be like beating a dead horse. LOL

Reviewer: carrot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 06:27 am Title: It's A...

ITS A GIRL!!!

Author's Response: Haha, yep!

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 04:45 am Title: It's A...

A little disappointed that you made it a girl. It is usually always a bitty Buffy. I just wanted to read a it is a bitty William/Spike for a change. But I guess most people think that they would have a girl because Spike likes to take of his girls. I mean I don't know why but that could be the reason. Have fun going out of a town.

Author's Response: I understand! I actually went back and forth on the idea....and still, the doctor isn't 100% certain! ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 04:29 am Title: It's A...

Oh it's so cute that bitty Buffy is really a bitty Buffy! *smiles*Spike was right all along. And OMG!and Holy Crap! to the ending..so Dana is now officially evil. And wtf happened to Hank? This is getting really good,I can't wait for the next chappie.
BTW I think you meant to say destroyed here---> We know the secret she carries, and it has to be disturbed. Thoght you might want to fix that.

Loved it, and if you don't post tomorrow have lots of fun on your trip. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami!!! :) Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 03:54 am Title: It's A...

:):) i loved it and *gasp* to the ending of that chapter :) i can't wait for the next update hehe

Author's Response: :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:34 am Title: Get it Done

Travers must be tired of slayers living beyond their teen years to mature to an age where they question the watchers council. Dana is the perfect "lab rat" that he can manipulate to do his dirty work of eliminating slayers that set a bad example to potentials, watchers and slayers who defy his authority. I don't think that Faith is the one who called Travers. I think that the group he sent to Sunnydale to test Buffy have been lurking behind the scenes and had Faith under surveilance and were privy to the conversation between the two slayers. Whether Buffy and company will believe that Faith is not the snitch remains to be seen since it is coincidental that her appearance and the knowledge of her pregnancy coincide. Again, Faith will be tested on her character and whether she thinks she has to prove herself or not, she will need faith to weather the coming storm. Look forward to more, sorry about the long commentaries with each chapter. (Your story brings that out in me).

Author's Response: Hey Vette! Don't apologize for long commentaries...I LOVE THEM! :) You have some awesome observations. The snitch will be explained very soon, and I'm gonna get the story moving along a little faster, I hope. I don't think it'll even get close to 100 chapters, LOL, but I don't want to rule out that possibility quite yet.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Get it Done

*gasp* how did the council find out.... i wonder who the leak is..... update soon i'm sitting on the edge of my seat lol

Author's Response: Hehe...you'll find out very soon! Thanks pixie!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: Get it Done

The only one who knows outside the scoobies is Faith. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PhotographyNut! You're right...Faith is the only one outside the Scoobies that knows, unless you count Dr. Jones and Wesley. ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 10:54 pm Title: Get it Done

*eep* OMG ,now Travers knows about Buffy's pregnancy.I wonder who called him? Hope it wasn't Faith.Didn't sound like her tho. Evil cliffie..

Glad you're feeling better and hopefully it will go away on it's own. =)

Good chappie, more when you can.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) More up soon...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 08:49 pm Title: Get it Done

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS CAN'T HAPPEN. I don't think it's Faith I think it is someone in the group who you would least suspect.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Well...more up soon...that's all I can say. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:36 pm Title: Get it Done

please tell me that wasn't faith? who else would have found out all that to go squealing to the council? i really hope it wasn't her, i'm trying to somewhat like her in this, and that would make me hate her. i hope nothing happens to the baby, i want travers to get his ass kicked now, he's really pissing me off.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! Yeah, Travers is quite the wanker, isn't he?

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:21 pm Title: Get it Done

Uh-oh! It seems like Faith just did a really bad thing. Then again, her name isn't mentioned so hopefully it's just what you want us to think and maybe it's not her at all. For some reason, I don't see Faith call him 'sir' and Mr Travers, it just doesn't sound like her. Maybe someone was eavesdropping on her and Buffy. Hope so. Can't wait to find out. And I really hope you'll feel better soon. Take care!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! Well...all I can say is stay tuned! :) You'll find out more soon enough!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:53 pm Title: Get it Done

uh-oh....Faith's up to no good once again. Is it the drugs or just going back to old habits?

Author's Response: Well...I can't say for sure what's goin on yet....

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:48 pm Title: Get it Done

Either Faith is the snitch or Dana was listening...

Gall Bladder.. a pain. Had to back off of fatty meat like hamburgers.. and pork.. never found stones.




Author's Response: Thanks Pam! Yeah, it's really gonna suck having to cut back on all of that. :(

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 03:05 pm Title: Long Story Short

oh no, not bitty buffy! Spike's going to freak. Looks like Buffy should keep Faith around after incidences like this.

Author's Response: :) Thanks! Don't worry...bitty buffy's ok! :)

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 11:33 am Title: Long Story Short

oooooooooooo i wonder what faith is going to do now..... this story is getting extremely interesting :) i hope you update again soon.

Author's Response: :) Thanks pixie! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to get a couple more updates up before I leave for a week. :)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 06:41 am Title: Long Story Short

Forgive and never forget, sometimes trust earned can be as difficult as switching bodies and living another's life. But Faith has already done that to Buffy and even though she is on the road to redemption, she chose to just pop into Buffy's life on the presumption that no matter what she has done in the past, that she will always trust Buffy to do right by her. Buffy is right to not trust Faith at face value, Faith even though her name suggests loyalty and trust has yet to prove to Buffy that she can live up to those values. Faith has all but stated that she doesn't have to prove herself but be the weapon she is intended to be. That in itself does not instill Buffy with warm fuzzies knowing that Faith is still emotionally detached and is just following her instincts. Her instincts told her to run to Buffy for help, who is more trustworthy than Buffy? Sure everyone looks to Buffy for orders including Faith but she is still not above pushing Buffy's insecurity buttons for self gratification....and she claims she is not looking for revenge? Anyways, Faith is good at one thing and one thing only, looking out for Faith. Hope Spike gives her a good talking too on redemption, he will always be a killer to Faith, just as she told Buffy that he killed and eaten multitudes of people, the only difference between Spike and Faith is that Spike did not have his soul when he was evil. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks Vette! You definitely bring up a very good issue. You're right about Faith...but at the same time, we know that eventually, she wasn't really bad anymore. She was just...I don't even know...just Faith, I guess. More up soon!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 12:43 am Title: Long Story Short

Is Faith .. on the up and up as my mother would say.. or controlled by the Council.

Enjoyed... now for Dana?

Author's Response: Thanks Pam!!! :) You'll find out soon enough....*evil laugh*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 12:05 am Title: Long Story Short

I guess Faith would of found out sooner or later. Hope nobody else finds out. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: :) Thanks! Yep, this is true. Faith would've definitely found out before too long.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 11:35 pm Title: Long Story Short

Good luck for you for the hospital, for them being able to help. :)
Buffy and Faith have a history; no wonder Buffy has trouble to trust her, welcome her with open arms first.
Hope the baby is okay - it seem Buffy and Faith are it at the end of the chapter. At last I hope they are okay - they need to work together in the upcoming fight :)
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy!!! :) I'm feeling a bit better, though the discomfort is still there a little. Yeah, Buffy and Faith have a pretty big history, but Buffy might slowly come to trust Faith if she comes through at the right moments. :)

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