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Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 25

Oooohhh another evil ending! But evil in the sense that it's left me wanting more and there's no more yet *sob*

Looking forward to their meeting! :D

Author's Response: Thanks Xaph for R&R! don't cry, I will update soon! and it will be a dooooozy I promise!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 25

Congrats on your awards!! *hugs and twirls* It makes me so happy to know many others have discovered this great story :D

Spike's thoughts about the kid made me giggle heehee And it's very cool that Hourak decided to help Spike find Kaia (and that they were able to communicate well enough). He feels guilty for having to banish her and is tyring to make up for it :)

Aww Buffy trying to take care of Groma was sweet. I'm worried about the old (and Sunnydale Memorial Award-winning!) girl ;)

Ooh you and your evil cliffies! heehee Awesome ending, and you know we can't wait to see what happens next! Congrats again on your well-deserved wins, Kitten! *smoochies and hugs and love*

Author's Response: *tackles and hugs PB* I am still so surprised that I won! Hourak may be struggling with his emotions now, but I wonder how he will feel when he sees a pregnant Kaia, and a ailing Groma...
Groma sick, I'm worried too :(
Next chapter should be interesting... Spike meets Kaia, or Buffy, or BK? damn... poor Spike!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 25

All that suspense and they finally meet up at the end!!!!! Argh kitten!!!! Suspense is killing me!!!!! I'm so overly tired right now, but it's my own fault. My computer crashed, burned, and kicked my tush. So might not be on tonight unless I use Lizzie's computer.

I am very worried about Groma. I hope nothing happens so soon. Love how Hourak accepted Spike and took the journey to Kaia with him. Won't they be suprised Kaia is now (just? still questioning this lol) Buffy. Oh I hope you update soon! This is just a doozy of an ending on this chapter! Love it though!

Hugs and twirls kitten for the awards you won!!!! NICE! Now if my damn computer will get back up and running...Thank everything on this earth that I was able to move everything and the files were ok on my external drive! And the dvd's too...Yup I was panicked so much I didn't sleep. It was horrible...I got nice and cozy and then my computer started going nuts with the beeping and the windows popping up...Oh god it was awful! Maybe be on later! Although...might not be...idk LOL...we'll see. Argh I'm so tired...Hugs! Great update!

Author's Response: thanks lissa, once more :) I hope your computer issues are soon resolved. Groma isn't doing well, but how bad is it? Hourak is a good man, and he wants the best for Groma and Kaia... wonder how he will feel when he sees the state of both women... or hears more about Spike...
Thanks for the congrats *huggles tight* I was so surprised! Am still smiling :D

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh you are Evil. He finally finds her and you stop.

More Please.



Author's Response: *smirks* Thanks Debbie for the R&R, more coming soon. I promise!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh you are EVIL. He finally finds her and you STOP.

More please.

Loving this story.

Author's Response: *giggles like a crazy woman* sorry. No I'm not :P Updates weekly, I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter 25

Ooooh, evil cliffhanger woman! Next chapter soon please....

Author's Response: thanks all4spike! more soon, you know the rules :P

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2009 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 24

Well, the beginning really hooked me into the story and i was eager to find out more and how Tara and Spike were going to save Buffy.

I think that this is a highly original story! I have honestly never read a Spuffy story like this before.

Though, I seem to skim now instead of read. I thought adding Angel was kind of pointless and used as a way to get cheap laughs (yeah, him acting 4. Not funny). Also, the Oracles. THEY ARE ORACLES! I am sure they know what orange juice and pancakes, and utensils are! Even if they never see them. They are higher beings as well, so getting a "gift" from the Key or a mystical ball of energy doesn't seem like something to freak out about...they are connected to the PTB, way more impressive. Plus, their reactions again reminded me of 4 year olds.

The only other thing that bothered me was that you had such a good idea of the story and wrote such amazing and REAL first chapters to about the middle, then it just seemed like you ran out of ways to make it longer, so added Angel and a pregnancy.

I will still read it as I am hoping some of the earlier sparks from the first chapter return.

I'd give it a 5/10 so far, mainly because right now the bad is out weighing the good.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reading and reviewing of my story. I appreciate that you even gave it a chance from the beginning, and am sorry you are feeling negative about it. This story was plotted out completely before a word was ever put to paper, and no, all the parts you disagree with were never added to 'make longer'. I will however, because you took the time to point out exactly what you disliked, address them. Angel-was always trying to save the day, and yes it was added for a bit of humor (Joss did that on the show too) to lighten the mood so to say. The Oracles-sure they know everything, really? you seem so sure. Are YOU an Oracle? (JK) The rape/pregnancy is a major part of the story. It is what creates the turmoil and chaos within the character at this point of the story. If you choose to continue reading, I hope you enjoy the rest. If you don't after reading this review, I will thank you anyway. I appreciate any review, and the time you've invested in reading what I have poured many hours of thought into.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 24

Yay for Spike's victory. Buffy is so hurt right now, all the hormones and emotions are getting past her stiff upper lip facade. I hope Spike will get to her soon. I think she needs a friendly face. Specially Spike, someone to hold her and to share her pregnancy with. I hope they meet up soon.

Poor Groma, she isn't doing too well either.

Ah, Willow got a tste of her own medicine with the flaying, huh? But, I really really hope that nothing baad happens to Tara. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review chan *hugs tight* I hope all is well with you, its been a while! I promise they will meet up soon, very soon, maybe even next chapter. As far as Tara.... stay tuned!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow.. Intense Willow flaying. Liked how you put that in, parallels what she did to Warren S6. I kinda feel sorry for her but not that much. I'm really worried about poor Tara now that The Beast knows about her. :(

Good for Spike kicking UberVamp ass. Go! Spike.
LOL... Not so fast there, great-great-great-great granddad. Gotta love Spike.
I hope Spike finds Buffy soon, I'm getting worried that she seems to want to stay in Caveville. Hope that changes once Spike arrives. But I know she does have to stay until she gives birth. Can't wait for Spike's reaction to that.

More soon Kitten! Loved it as usual. =)

Author's Response: Thanks AMI! Willow, Tara... bad bad bad, but have faith (not Faith...) I will have an update on that soon. Spike was lucky to get thru the fight as quickly as he did. He will find her soon, but yeah. Then what :P more next week!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 24

Spike is getting closer and Buffy is missing him. She will recognize him, but will he? I'm gonna go with he will. He is always so intuitive to Buffy.

The flaying from the best seems enough to scare (and gross us out lol) Willow although, it's not breaking her.

What I am beyond worried about is...This beast going after Tara. I really hope nothing happens to Tara. How is going after Tara going to make her listen? It will only push her towards anger and revenge - not to the point of breaking. Tsk Tsk Tsk Mr. Demon to break Willow you must take away something that means a bit more to her - and that's power (magic). Tara means a lot to her but it will only serve as means to come back with a vengeance. Ah you make this so edge on the seat! More Kitten definitely more!!!!!

*Send lots of hugs n smooches for an awesome update*

Author's Response: Thanks for another awesome review Lissa. Willow is in a bad situation, the Beast knows what he's doing, be patient, but Willow, skinless, and magically bound! wtf is she gonna do? another update soon!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 24

Well done, Spike! Oh dear, it sounds as if Buffy is resigned to staying. Hurry up and find her, Spike! Poor Willow! Gruesome! Still she still fails to recognise that she deserves punishment. Eek! No... he can't go after Tara! I'm on the edge of my seat here.....

Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike :) Spike grabbing Buffy and going home isnt going to be as easy as he thought.... and Tara, stay wiff, answers soon!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 24

Spike dusted those ugly uber vamps - Yay! And without getting too messed up himself :D Now, if he can just find Buffy... It's good to see that she still feels the same way about Spike, and regrets the way she left him without explanation. She's going to be super suprised to see him too!

Eww Willow's punishment was creepy - and ironic, considering we know what she did in s6 on the show. I'm worried about Tara now. Willow's arrogance and stupidity is going to end up hurting someone else *shakes fist at Willow again*

Great chapter, Kitten! I can never get enough of this story! More soon please :D *huggles and smoochies of love*

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and all the other stuff you do *sings*
Buffy will be surprised, and soon. but will she be happy? Willow ... so sad what you've become... *shakes head* More answers to all the questions in coming chapters.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh I hope Spike will find Buffy.
For Willow it looks even worse. But Tara hasn't done a thing. Hope she won't be in trouble.
PS: Fangfetish is down at the moment and should come back but the button from "thereadershavechosen" isn't visible either.

Author's Response: Thanks CK *hugs* Willow..Willow..Willow.. answers in next chapter.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 24

Hmm! I see, like that is it hmm....

Author's Response: Thats right *struts*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ahh you're torturing us with the non-meetingness of Buffy and Spike :P Was it Spike Buffy sensed?

Great chapter! I'm worried for Tara, now. Hope Willow's arrogance isn't going to get her hurt :(

More, please? :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Xaph *hugs* Spuffy reunion coming up. Tara... you just have to wait and see ;) but answers soon, I promise.

Reviewer: xox-chantelly-lace-xox@hotmail.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 23

lol at Angel being all disgruntled.

Willow is in for it now. What does the demon have in mind for her, I wonder.

I can't wait to see what happens to Spike and the ubervamp, and how he finds Buffy, and what Buffy's reaction to him will be.

Loved the update, now for another? More soon!!

*hugs*

Author's Response: So glad you are still enjoying! all of your questions will be answered soon, stay will me, Please!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 10:31 am Title: Chapter 23

Wonder what kind of a lesson will Willow get.. I mean she won't easily learn.. and yet, I don't feel bad for her situation.. She has only herself to blame..
Angel with a tummy ache? brooding? jealous of Spike? mwhahaha serves him right! :D
How will Buffy's pregnancy affect going back to Sunnydale? and Spike?
Once he sees her.. I can hardly wait to see his reaction..
And he will see her..right? those ancient vampires won't get him.. right?
Loved the update :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Kirsty :) Wilow will get hers, Angel - LMAO, preggo Buffy might make that trip back akward, reunion is coming, and UberVamps vs. our guy? No worries, he's quick on his feet.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh boy...Willow's in trouble. I don't feel sorry for her at all. I'm evil sometimes. ;) I 'm glad Spike's making his way in Caveville, but poor thing getting kicked in the shin for saving the little brat. LOL Spik'e observation about being a hero was spot on. You are really capturing Spike's voice here. Glad Buffy's finding peace and feeling better. I'm kinda confused..Buffy is still in Kaia's body, but it's only Buffy's essence now and not Kaia"s right? So what will happen to the body Buffy is in? Oh so many questions.. lol
And GO Spike and kick some Ubervamp ASS!!

Loved it, more soon please, please!!

Author's Response: Thank for the review AMI :) Willow, *flicks between eyes*. Spike has his work cut out for him. He better figure somethings out fast... and Buffy. Dont be confused, your confusion will be addressed. I promise. But a great question *wink* UberVamp ass kicking in next update.

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for a great update. Poor Spike, no thanks for saving someone. Hoping he'll find his way to Buffy soon!

Author's Response: thanks again for another review, sanityfair. A reunion is on the horizon, just not this one :P look for another update next week :)

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmm.......


(Thought I'd keep it short!)

Author's Response: nuff said.

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 23

One more...shoot me now...I write novel-like reviews lol.

I have this feeling when Spike and Buffy finally get together 'they' both will know each other.

Uh just outta curiousity. He is in his body so he will need blood...will he be hunting animals? When he meets Groma too will she be accepting of him...Oh so many questions lol!

Is it raining where you are? Don't you think it's gotten incredibly cold lately? I grumble because I can't go on the cbox at work...poooey.

Anywhoooo....Does Groma know Spike's a vamp? Hmmm you have oodles of juicy chapters coming up...Can't wait. Begs and pleads...Ohkay I have to get back to work...Lots of lurve kitten! *blows kisses and waves*

Author's Response: heehee silly you! Ok, lemme see what I can tell ya:
BR> I think their 'senses' are still intact. Spike's hunger will be addressed soon. Cuz he will be hungry.

Groma is a good woman, I feel pretty confident she will be accepting :)

Yup, raining, and chilly, but I LURVE fall.

Groma knows about Spike... Buffy hasnt hidden anything from her like she did her RL mom... *tackles and tickles* Now back to work!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 23

*giggles* My review now!!! Hee hee.

I feel not an ounce of sympathy for you Willow. I hope you do learn. Really glad no death but a lesson learned. Like how you think.

Sighing very heavily in regards to Angel. I'm guessing he will come back. Ok I get that to help out, but he needs to learn that he walked away, he has many issues, and needs and equal not someone to 'doll' up and put in a damn corner. Uh, he annoys me with his holier than thou attitude. Yeah I know Buffy had that too, but this Buffy, your Buffy, oh I like her. I love her lots. She is processing everything being thrown at her. She has a strong sense of self. I was amazed even though she peeved me off about the pregnancy and not to mention about the rape...She has simply floored me! Her inner strength is amazing even though her in the moment grasping isn't. When she processes' it has that air of maturity even though you want to wring her neck for not seeing it at the time. Love that!

Still quite curious how Kaia can be the baby...maybe that's a mistake? Oh god I soooo want to know! Suspense is killing me, kitten!

So unknown dimension...you sneaky devil. You definitely snuck in a clue!

Ponders Giles for a moment....Wonders what he ultimately think of all this....Hmmm need to see him some more than we have to form an opinion.

Cordelia is a kicker, I tell ya! Hope she kicks some sense into Angel.

Now Spike...Oh how I lurve Spike. No soul and still he amazes me! You write him in such a way that from the moment Buffy stepped on those stairs and he knew it was her and not the Bot, he literally has this capacity for goodness. You can see it in his awed expression. You see him. Oh you do an astounding job writing him. Not even a thought of the chip he grabs the boy and am I the only one who notices the chip didn't go off? Wait your story he still has the chip right? groans...Do I have to go back and read again lol.

He's funny though poke me with sharp sticks...Uh Spikey boy you a vampy...RUN!!!! See that's why I was a tad confused the chip. He was holding the struggling boy. So the boy didn't want his help wouldn't this set the chip off then? Or could it possibly be that the chip doesn't work here...OOOH that would be wicked!

I have no fear of the ancient vampire tackling him. Of course it will be a tough fight just like Buffy had with an ancient vampire too. Has a feeling Spike will be a riot when that happens. The vamp attacking him for food...Oh god are they stupid lmao!

I love this update and can't wait for more Kitten! *lots of hugs n kisses*

Author's Response: MY o MY lissa! You wrote a book! Let me see :) I will tell you Willow will not be die. I love Willow, but she needs to learn her lesson.

Angel, what an ass. I think Cordy will keep him in check for now. No worries.

Buffy has had to time to work through her Sunnydale problems in Caveville more than she realizes. She seems to be maturing before our eyes, or is she in denial of her need to return to her own time? Kaia's entire life is in chaos. THAT you will have to trust me to explain through the course of the story. Stay tuned.

Giles has arrived. The father figure is now waiting by her side after leaving her to grow. IF/when she returns... how will Buffy react to him? and how will Giles feel is his little girl has changed so much?

Already address Cordelia, she has her hands full :)

Spike (Joss' Spike) was an anomaly. No matter how many times we are told that he had lost his soul when he was turned, he was never the demon like the others. Yes, he had the ability to be like them, but he struggled. I sometimes think he waited on Dru and claimed he did it as he owed her for his turning, but I think it was an outlet for his caring nature. BUT what do I know.

Now, that pesky chip. Lets see. Arrives in Caveville, still a vamp, but able to walk in the sun... good catch that things aren't exactly the same there. Gotta wonder about that :P But, he was trying to save him and didn't hurt or attempt to hurt him even after he got abused by the brat.

The old vamps are the UberVamps from season 7, too bad this takes place season 6 *heehee* But I agree. The battle should be interesting. Now off to respond to your next review! *hugs*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmm, Buffy's getting more and more attached to the place... I'm looking forward to her reunion with Spike, I want to know what's gonna happen! :P

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Xaph :) Buffy is maturing before our eyes, or is she in denial that she will ever get home? Spike and Buffy ... what a reunion :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

A lesson for Willow ~ sounds the right thing to do. And hopefully something where she will learn.

As Spike will learn now the hard way how to fight the ancient vampires.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the loyal reading and reviewing, CK *hugs* Willow... shame on her, now a price to pay.... Spike will be fighting something new.. hope he makes it out of the fight ok :-0!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter. Looking forward to the reunion, but they're going to have to wait for the child to be born before Buffy can go back, aren't they?

Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike! now you know I can't reveal my secrets! Stay with me, lots of excitement still to come :)

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