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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 23

There were too many good parts for me to comment on them all lol I'll just mention a few :P

Ooh Willow's in for it! That Beast guy ain't someone I'd want pissed at me lol She literally brought it on herself, but I'm hoping he doesn't do something *too* horrible to her.

I loved the bits with Spike scoping out Caveville. Spike playing the hero and saving the cave brat was great :D Though I'm worried about those ugly uber-vamps hurting him *bites nails*

Buffy's becoming more at peace with the idea of the baby - which is good for her mental health. Wow, Spike's head is going to spin when he finds her!

Awesome chappie, as usual! :D *Smoooooch!*



Author's Response: Thanks so much PB :) for the review, for the beta, for the friendly *face* each day :)
Willow is screwed, Spike has a fight coming up, and Buffy is glowing :) So much going on and glad you're keeping up with everything!
*hugs and twirls*

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 22

Ok, so Buffy is pregnant with Kaia? weird.. And I agree with Groma what does it mean?
And Spike..yes I agree, i hope there isn't any dinosaurs.. Hope he will find Buffy soon..
Willow is in BIG trouble now.. And chance to get away looks to be slim to none.. And like she's any better than Anya..
Tara is too sweet.. “Now, when he comes back, he will see her immediately.”

Loved the update. This is still very interesting story.. despite it aready having quite many chapters.. There's always something new to make it more interesting :) Keep up the amazing work :)
I want more..well no that's not true.. I need more!!

Author's Response: *smirks* yep, it is weird, but isnt living in another body too?!
*flicks Willow*
I adore Tara. But you already knew that :)
Am just so thrilled that "despite having so many chapters" you are still enjoying. I will have another update posted next week to feed your need :P *squishes*

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh no.. pregnant? Didn't even think of that.. aand was defenetly hoping it would be something else.. And now..hmmm I don't know what to think.. But then again nether des Buffy.. I guess I will just have to wait to see what will happen.


I knew it would be Spike :) Now it will get (more) interesting.. And Buffy's been there already for months.. But I doubt it will be easy for Spike either.
And by the way.. Angel and ice cream.. is just wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for the r&r Kirsty :) that pregnancy should throw everyone for a loop :-0
Spike should have a cape :P Every hero should,
Angel is just wrong, *flicks him again*

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

Perky Angel? that's just... wrong.

If/when Buffy has to go home it won't be easy.. Seems like she's beginning to enjoy her time there.. Now all she needs is Spike ;)

Enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response: *sings* double your pleasure, double your fun...

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

Perky Angel? that's just... wrong.

If/when Buffy has to go home it won't be easy.. Seems like she's beginning to enjoy her time there.. Now all she needs is Spike ;)

Enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response: heehee Kirsty :) *flicks Angel - all day long*
Spike will definately be in for a surprise when he finds her.... and so will she!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 22

“I will have this child for Kaia, not just because it is dear to her, but because I think it is her.”
Well.. that's put the cat well and truly among the pidgeons!
I hope Spike finds them soon and can support Buffy through the pregnancy/birth.
Oh Willow... hoist with your own petard... serves you right!
More please...

Author's Response: LOL Meow!
Spike is on his mission, and boy o boy will he be surprised. Willow, all I can do is shake my head. Look for an update next week! or TODAY!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 22

But why does Groma think that Buffy has to take care of the baby? It's Kaia's, not Buffy's.
Ah I see, Buffy thinks it's Kaia. Weirder things have happened.
Spike seems to be at the wrong cave now.
Willow is definitely in big trouble.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Heya CK, long time no respond :P I think Groma was concerned that Buffy might be stressed and it would not be in the best interest, especially now. Spike is definitely at the wrong cave, or is he? (dum dum duuuum) Willow. *Flicks*. *Hard*.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2009 - 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 22

Now Willow will pay for what she has no business in. You don't play with something if you don't obey to rules.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review BF :) Willow is screwed. No doubt about it.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Uh oh... Spike looks like a out-of-towner. Or really an out-of-timer... lol either way, he looks way different from the other cave people. Maybe Angel should have been chosen, lol he looks like a caveman.

Wow, about Kaia possibly being the baby. How is Buffy going to be able to get back into her body? I understand how Kaia could be being born agai, but what confuses me is how is Buffy going to get back into her body without killing Kaia's body? If Kaia's essence is going to go into the baby and be born again, that would leave Kaia's body essence-less, lol if that makes sense. I can't wait to see what you come up with.

Willow is an idiot. She should have known that the demon would be more powerful than the magicks she just recieved. Its not like she can fully handle them, she hasn't been trained. I hope that the punishment the demon doles out won't be harmful to the others, only to her in some way. I hope Tara makes it out of this little thing alive, I like her. I wish she hadn't died in the show.

lol I think this is the longest review I have ever written!

I can't wait for the next update! This fic is great! *hugs and smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks for th e long review chan :) Theres a lot going on in this fic, and based on your enthusiasm, I must be doing ok keeping you informed across the board. hmm so many questions to answer and you will have to wait. :P

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh my, Willow *shakes head* Sounds like she's about to get a very harsh lesson. Can't say she doesn't have it coming. I wonder if Willow will have a moment of clarity and see how arrogant and high on power she was? Or is she too far gone? I'll have to wait and see :)

The Kaia possibly being the baby thing was - whoa! Didn't see that coming! I love cool paradoxes lol I'm glad Buffy has Groma to help her through this. She's being so brave, but needs that sympathetic, loving shoulder to cry on.

And YAAY for Spike being close to finding her! He isn't affected by sunlight, which is neat. I was worried about that lol I can't get the image of Spike riding a dinosaur like a horse out of my mind for some reason heehee

Awesome chapter! There's never a dull moment! *smoochies & lurve*

Author's Response: Awww Thanks PB! So much going on! I hope I am not letting anything slip thru the cracks! Spike on a dinasaur! HAHAHAHA I love the paradoxes too!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow Kitten...this chapter just threw me for a loop. So now the baby is Kaia? OMG. Now what will happen when Spike finds her? Good to know that Spike can walk in the sun, but is still a vamp. Willow is in HUGE trouble now, but sorry I don't feel bad for her. She's too annoying and arrogant.
Spike's thoughts about blending in with his jeans and combat boots and hoping there were no dinosaurs had me LOL:)

Loved it, more soon please. It's so good. *hugs*

Author's Response: So glad you liked it AMI! There is so much going on, I hope I'm doing an ok job weaving it all together.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh... that's interesting, that Kaia is the baby. Gonna make things more problematic for getting home. Hope Spike finds her soon... I want to know how things will go :D Hmm... Willow's in trouble..

Author's Response: The baby, Kaia, Buffy, Groma... so many problems. When Spike finds them, what will happen then? How long will it take him to find her? Yeah, Willow is in big trouble, BIG trouble.

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh wow totally forgot! I was caught up so much with the questions of the hows and what's of Kaia/Buffy.

Is it wrong that I totally think Willow deserves what she gets? I know I'm so horrible, but come on, she screwed up the damn spell and still she thinks nothing she did was wrong...Sheesh she didn't even tell friggin Buffy what she was doing and she thinks bringing Buffy back by fixing everything will make everything alright???? Is she insane? Yeah me thinks so! Fantabulous update Kitten. Hugs n smoochies!

Author's Response: *gigglin* Willow is in big trouble, so glad you picked up on that *heehee* I will give more Willow update in next chapter!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow, you never cease to amaze me kitten! So much in one chapter! I'm getting really worried now. What is going on with Buffy and Kaia. That's the only thing that I can't grasp just yet how things will return the way they were. Questions I tell ya! Then again...Buffy always assumes the worst. Kaia could just be silent just because or maybe not...

Oh so many questions! How will Spike know and get her back? Can Kaia really be the baby now? What does that mean for Buffy's body? Or is this a way to keep all your faithful readers saying 'COME ON Kitten give us something more!' LOL.

Just outta curiousity...Do you know how much longer this will be? Definitely not because I want you to finish it...I would love more all the time, but I'm just dying to know!!!!! Absolutely loved it Kitten! More and more and more, pretty please! Lots of lurve and smoochies and huggles!

Author's Response: heehee LIssa! You know I gotta keep you guessing! Buffy/Kaia... will they, wont they.. *sings* I'll never tell... as far as how far into the story, well.. we have passed the half way mark... but there is a lot left to tell. So glad you loved it :)

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 11:32 am Title: Chapter 22

Oh dear

Author's Response: heehee I know.....

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 21

And for my next trick.......And Kaia preggers Oh dear.....great stuff Kitten!! Can't wait to read more!! Smoochies

Author's Response: Thanks Andy :) so glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh no! Kaia is pregnant! But, she seems to want it, so I guess its not a bad thing... At least we know that the baby will be recieved with love. I hope they will make it through the preganacy okay.

Yay!! Spike was chosen. I wonder what he is gonna do in the demension Buffy is in. I hope he doesn't go in during the day, or maybe because in that time he wasn't created yet, so sun doesn't affect him... but that would mean his strength is gone too... Or maybe I will ust let you write the story, because you are better at it =P

I so can't wait for the next update! I can't believe I'm so late reading it! Sorry *shrinks* Moe soon, please!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Kaia/Buffy have some difficult decisions to make. Keep reading, Spike's arrival in Caveville is coming up. Just updated today, :)

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 21

“Thank the gods you weren’t chosen. You would never have made it.” Anya said, clinging to him.

Made me laugh out loud!

Huh... wasn't expecting a pregnancy, that's really going to put a halt to Spike's plans of bringing Buffy back.

Still really enjoying this fic, loving all the twists and turns you're throwing in. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Xaph, so glad you are enjoying, many more twists and turns to come. I will have another update to you soon.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

Hehe, the image of Angel acting 'perky' made me laugh.. cos he's usually really un-perky.

Hmm... seems like Buffy's accepted that she might never get back, I wonder if there will be some conflict on when whoever is chosen (it's Spike, right?) tries to bring her home.



Author's Response: Now, Xaph, if there was no conflict, would there be a good story? ;) stay with me, much more tale to tell.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 19

Hee, I guessed right about the picnic.

I'm thinking... Spike will go through the orb?

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes you did! YAY! Spike thru the orb... keep reading!

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 18

Glad that Groma and Kaia/Buffy still have a friend in the clan.

Hmm... what did Tara take the Oracles? Sounds like a picnic lol are they examining the knives and forks?

Enjoyed the chapter :)

Author's Response: hehehe I loved the reviews for this chapter, everybody was guessing :) Hourak is a good man, and his friendship to them is very important.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh. Poor Buffy/Kaia. I'm glad Kahn's dead, but I'm curious as to where they're going to go, now that they won't let Kaia back into the caves.

Willow's getting scary, too. Felt bad for Spike :(

Good chapter!

Author's Response: This was a tough chapter, but it was needed to progress the story. Willow *shakes head* she needs help.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 21

Poor Kaia, so she is pregnant. It's her decision *shudder* but Kahn will be the father.
~ I'd thought it would be Spike. Looking forward to what he'll find at the end of the tunnel.

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R CK, Kaia/Buffy have a huge decision to make, Spike is on his way, but it can't be that easy, can it?

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 21

I think this chapter serves as an excellent bridge between what is going on in the present and in the past. Of course...I was completely confident that Spike would be the chosen one :-).

Author's Response: Thanks Sibb, huge compliment *huggs* Spike is on his way to save the day... but when, where, and what if's for his arrival. I will answer them all soon, stay with me!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh God...Kaia/Buffy might be preggers? Not good. I can see why Kaia would want to keep the baby, but poor Buffy's in there too. And the merging thingy is really worrisome.*bites nails*
Loved that Spike is gonna go . YAY! Wonder if he'll still look like Spike? And the sunlight issue?
Angel being all doofy and wanting to go for ice cream had me LOL.

Brilliant chappie. loved it. More,more,more it's do good! *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks AMI for your compliments, there are lots of loose ends, and I will tie each and every o ne before its over.

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