Date: 08/12/2009 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on getting your first story started! That is always exciting.
Told you I would review when I read. :)
Nice introduction to Spike and Buffy. And do I see Willow/Wesley in the future? I love the idea of that pairing.
Loved her walking into a tree. LOL!
Author's Response: Wow thanks Dawn! didn't realize u'd get around to it so quick. thanks hun :) glad u liked the tree scene hehe
Date: 06/12/2009 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was leery at first of another camp fic, but I must say I enjoyed this a lot. even laughed out loud :P cant wait to see where you take this :0) good job and lovely banner too!
Author's Response: i'm glad that you enjoyed it. even if you were hesitant at first :) i'm also glad that i could make you laugh. it's what i'm here for :) and thanks. isn't xaph amazing?
Date: 06/10/2009 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Especially considering it's your first story! You're already much better than I was when I started lol There's lots of possibilities, I can't wait to see where you go with it :)
Heehee I like that Buffy and Willow were both taken by the hotness of the maintenance guys :P It's nice to see Wes in the story too! Mmmm, Marlboro Man Wes was awfully yummy.
Aww poor Buffy walking into the tree *giggles* Hey, it would've happened to me too - I feel her pain lol
Keep up the great work, hon! *smoochies and hugs*
Author's Response: Ooh yay Pagan! I'm glad you found it here. Wouldn't have gotten here w/o your help :) *hugs* Thanks for the uber compliment :) ur amazing. and rugged Wes was def yummy hence why i went w/ him *sigh* Ok must write ch. 4 so i can get it to u asap!
Date: 06/10/2009 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wooot!!
Great start! It is great so far. BTW I laughed my ass off when Buffy walked into a tree (it is something I would do if faced with Spike too)
And then I laughed AGAIN when Spike said "Crazy chit just walked herself right into a tree." That was good.
I can't wait to read more. Great job!
*Hugs*
Author's Response: Huggles!!! Glad you liked it Chanty. Ya i kinda figured that's what i'd do so why not make Buffy do it. Glad you liked Spikes line. I think he's funny :) hehe. thanks!
Date: 06/10/2009 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the start, it was fun :)
Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/10/2009 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Little brat, you could have told me I needed to be logged in to review for you. LOL could have done this earlier. I really do like it and can't wait for more. Update fast please! I like the concept and your characters seem well-rounded already.
Author's Response: I'm a brat only for you :) I'm glad you liked it and i will update soon. You'll just have to wait your turn like everyone else
Date: 06/10/2009 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sneaky only excepting signed reviews lol! I'm so very proud of you! As I told you, not one for AH. Wellll, seeing that your story is definitely a good start...maybe...But I'm still supernatural stories at heart kinda gal, lol I hope that my beta skills are ok and that we continue to work together! Amazing and can't wait to see the rest!
If I was Buffy...I would have passed out, or got week in the knees and fell right where I was standing, or ran backwards straight into a tree. So ya I'm there with ya Buffy with the total Hotness that's Spike!
Author's Response: Thanks Lissa!!!! I know your a supernatural girl at heart but i'm so glad you like mine :) makes me feel extra special. and your beta skills are wonderful you know that. and we will work together more. you ain't gettin rid of me that easy :)
Date: 06/10/2009 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a pretty good beginning, not bad for your first story. I don't blame Buffy, if I saw that man, I'd be bumping into trees, tripping over my feet, all that embarrassing stuff...lol! I'm sure he'll soon realize that she's not like the other girls, and hopefully Faith is just a new friend, and not competition. I think Buffy and Willow could use another friend. Can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! That means alot since i read your stuff all the time. Thanks! You'll just have to wait and see about Faith :) i ended the chapter there for a reason *rubs hands together evilly* glad you like it. i'll be added more soon :)