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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 01:53 am Title: Guilty Pleasure

Wooot! Very steamy :P I like the whole forbidden nature of their relationship heehee

Hope you guys write more soon :D

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 12:02 am Title: Bottoms Up

heehee I love these kind of taboo fics :P Good n' naughty. The vodka promises to break down those walls of resistance :D Bottoms up, indeed!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2009 - 11:29 am Title: Guilty Pleasure

Naughty sibs! There's the backstory! Wonder if they will continue this upstairs, and will they get caught? Update soon please.

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2009 - 11:06 am Title: Bottoms Up

I like the premise of the story, no issues at all. Cute beginning. I would recommend getting this beta'd. The word flow is a bit off and some verbs are used repeatedly. I suggest using the thesaurus with future chapters. A little background wold be nice too :) Im not sure if you both wrote on this chapter and maybe going back and forth ... anyway, not enough to stop me from proceeding with story, but I will warn you, many people will stop reading with these types of errors.

Author's Response: This was written over a year ago and we did go back and forth, hence the awkward perspective changes. She wrote Spike and I wrote Buffy, sort of like an RP. Keeping that in mind, it doesn't at all reflect my writing now. But thanks for your suggestions anyway.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2009 - 04:55 am Title: Guilty Pleasure

I've written a few myself, there's just something so hot and forbidden about it;)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2009 - 12:15 am Title: Guilty Pleasure

I like where this is going and I'm interested to see where you take it next.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 08:44 pm Title: Guilty Pleasure

Just started this and I'm already addicted to it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 06:40 pm Title: Guilty Pleasure

Loved it , So hot and so sexy!! They aren't related by blood so alls good. And they both want each other . nobodys forcing anyone. Can't wait to read more, especially if the rents find out.

More soon ,please, please! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far :) It would be awfully interesting if people found out, wouldn't it... ^^ I guess you'll just have to wait and see what's in store *whistles*

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 05:08 pm Title: Guilty Pleasure

I love step-sibling stories. As long as they're not related by blood, I have no problem with it. Seeing as how they kind of grew up together, though, I can understand how that would make things awkward and confusing for them. Going by the title, it seems like they'll be sneaking around for a bit, I wonder what would happen when everyone does find out, especially their parents. I'm interested to read more=)

Author's Response: I love step stories too. I think I've read every single one that's posed on this site and a few other sites as well. There was a phase where I actually sought them out. There's something taboo about it that just makes it ten times hotter ;P We're actually writing another step story that I'll be posting on here soon, called The Last Night. So keep an eye out. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 02:58 pm Title: Guilty Pleasure

I saw this before but it had only two chapters; hope there will be more.

At last both feel the attraction. Would be worse if only one of them would be in love with the other. :)
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm hoping to have the third chapter done fairly soon, so keep your fingers crossed and wish my muse luck. lol :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 02:38 pm Title: Bottoms Up

No xx/other warnings or rape; should be safe to read for me. :)
I like the start, could get interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you're still reading my stuff. Makes me all tingly with joy (in a strictly platonic sense). lol

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