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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2013 - 07:00 pm Title: Epilogue

Sweet and Happy making.

It was a wonderful end to a turbulent, but mostly happy story.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 - 05:38 am Title: Epilogue

Lovely happy endings all around. Thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2011 - 12:07 am Title: Epilogue

Stumbled on this because of 'Welcome to the Neighborhood. Read it in 1 day. Loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 - 04:22 am Title: Femme Fatale

This is awesome. You're a wonderful writer. I'm completely intrigued.

Reviewer: Queenfish Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Femme Fatale

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. The William that you portray is just what I imagine the William of 1880 would have been like if he had been born into our time-frame. This story has everything I could wish for, including a very happy ending. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad to hear you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 - 06:13 pm Title: Epilogue

I liked the end. *nods*
Too bad Buffy took so much time to find him again that he was with Norah then. That twist I didn't like to much *sigh*

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story, even with the bits you didn't like. :) Thanks also for all the reviews... very much appreciated.

Reviewer: Elly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 - 05:33 am Title: Epilogue

I've been following this story since the beginning & all I've got to say is "YAAAAAAAAY!!!" This is such a wonderful story & such a beautiful ending. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 - 04:48 am Title: Epilogue

Sweet ending I enjoyed reading this story.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 - 08:12 am Title: Epilogue

wow got to say that was amazing story. u really had me going at times and im so glad i got to read it all at once, though i am sorry i couldnt give you more support in reviews. just know this was amazing and you really made a darker night brighter. Thank you and I hope there are many more to come.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 04:41 pm Title: Epilogue

Such a sweet ending! Great way to start off a Friday. This was a wonderful story from start to finish, and even though I'm sad it's at an end, I'll make myself happy by reading it all over again. Hope you'll be writing some more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 04:34 pm Title: Epilogue

Yay, gotta love a happy ending, this was a sweet chapter. Great story, I really enjoyed it=)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad to hear it. I'm kinda a sucker for happy endings, too... (most of the time)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2010 - 09:53 pm Title: All I Want

I'm still a bit sad that William didn't go looking for Buffy again, instead had a girlfriend when Buffy went looking for him.
Not fair to Norah either.
I didn't expect them to get together again after the last chapter but it seems they are now.
I hope they'll make it now.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2010 - 02:27 am Title: All I Want

Yay update! I wasn't expecting one and I'm so happy to get one. This update totally made my day! I absolutely love this story. They are so sweet together and it was great to see such a wonderful reunion. The magnetism between the two is so powerful and undeniable even Spike's girlfriend couldn't do anything about it. Can't wait to read the epilogue!

Author's Response: Honestly I wasn't expecting an update there for awhile, either... glad it was worth the wait! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2010 - 04:26 pm Title: All I Want

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2010 - 02:56 am Title: The Return of the Grievous Angel

i'm very disappointed that he has a girlfriend now, i don't see this ending well, but i'm still hoping for a happy ending with these two, i think they deserve it. a part of me was really hoping that was their kid, it would have been harder for william to stay away then.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 09:26 pm Title: The Return of the Grievous Angel

PS: I forgot - could you please add a Spike/other warning to the story? You didn't yet, not for the story or the chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 09:24 pm Title: The Return of the Grievous Angel

And there I'd thought that Buffy would have tried to see Spike when she turned 18.
But let me say HUH? to this chapter.
So Spike has a girlfriend again and now he meet Buffy again.
You said in your last chapter that this would be the last one. But it isn't marked as finished. Means that there is more to come?
Sad to see so much time past and now it seems as if it is too late.

Author's Response: Yes, there's more to come. thanks for reading & reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 - 11:41 pm Title: Pale Blue Eyes

Great chapter please update soon! I'm really liking this story

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll update as soon as I can.

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Date: 01/28/2010 - 11:26 pm Title: Pale Blue Eyes

Ok your forgiven that makes a lot more sense for her leaving. Obviously Ted got Dawn back when she messed up so I am still not happy with her for being so stupid and messing up with her aunt but I can understand why she turned down his proposal and why she ran. It would have been nice and better if she would have opened up to William to get his advise and to let him know what was going on but she knew she did him wrong by lieing about her age so she had a reason to not want to tell him.

Author's Response: So glad you forgive me! :) Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 - 10:06 pm Title: Pale Blue Eyes

Ah Dawn. So that's the reason. I'm glad that Ted, Buffy's stepfather, was arrested. But what shocking news, so Buffy is 17. As a teacher Spike could get in trouble, Buffy saw this right.
Sad to see it end this way (only for now I hope). Spike will be gone all too soon.
Six years is way too less for what he did in my eyes.
BTW how many month till Buffy is 18?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do have one more chapter planned... Like in canon, Buffy's b-day is in January.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 - 03:53 pm Title: Pale Blue Eyes

So I read your reviews and I have to say that the 1st poster is an absolute angst wimp! Angst is what makes the heart beat and break, it what puts the passion in a story! And this story definitely has plenty of passion. It makes so much sense that she's a minor! Don't know why I didn't figure it out before. That is how a lot of teenage girls would react if they were keeping such a secret from their lover and trouble was coming her way, just running. She does only have a year until 18, maybe she can go to college in Portland and surprise him! Chase after him. Also, awful Ted got only 6 years, the rat bastard, hopefully he'll get shanked in prison. Loving the story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 - 10:37 am Title: Pale Blue Eyes

They (Bueffy and Spike) will end together, right? Wll, I hope so and I hope that it happens soon. Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading & reviewing. Not gonna give anything away, but I do only have one more chapter planned.

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Date: 01/28/2010 - 09:04 am Title: Pale Blue Eyes

This is so weird to read. Do you realize that outside the US noone would give s damn about this age combination, much less end a loving relationship?
I´m living in a really small hicktown, but even here noone would even raise an eyebrow or care in any way.

Author's Response: Yes I am aware of that. But the story is set in the US and I researched laws in California before writing this. Giles is also being uber protective of a girl who was in a bad situation. Hope this doesnt totally turn you off the story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 - 07:20 am Title: Pale Blue Eyes

well, this is worst than i thought. it's too depressing for me to continue, i didn't realize how angsty this would be and i'm not seeing a very happy ending with these two. i should have known it wouldn't be that easy, but i need a bit of a break, maybe i'll come back once you finish it.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry to hear that... I only have one more chapter planned. Hope you pick up on it when it's posted.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 03:20 pm Title: Deathly

What? Why? What? It was going so good, why did she leave? Was it because of Dawn? Couldn't she have told him? Is there a note? It's so sad? Actually, my heart breaks for William, but it breaks more for Buffy that she would hurt herself and them in such a way. Update soon please!

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