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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2010 - 11:37 am Title: Seven

Ah, hymen stuff......just a little membrane around the opening. Nothing to push *through*, unless a woman is one of the rare cases of it not retreating away when she's a baby.

Author's Response: Well, everyone's experience appears to be different. One of my betas felt it should be a bigger deal, with a lot of bleeding. The rest of us felt that would hardly be noticeable in a formerly athletic girl. There would, however, likely be some tissue to tear if she's never had anything bigger than finger (if that, in Buffy's case) in there. One way or another, if something hasn't torn it earlier, it has to be stretched or torn the first time. Granted, a hard push wouldn't be necessary in most cases, but in others it could be a big deal. I chose to make Buffy's noticeable, but not difficult.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 06:52 am Title: Seven

So glad she's loving her real life now. But I love that her science fiction writing BF thinks that it actually could have been an alternate reality that she was living in. The random skills she acquired... the whole idea is pretty interesting and I'm enjoying how your handling it. Of course, I've now caught up and have to beg for updates like everyone else. So, update soon. Want to see how her morning after goes. :)

Author's Response: Updates are planned for every weekend. So far, I've been able to stick to that. :) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 05:54 am Title: Seven

Just read from the beginning, and WOW! I love it! What an original take on things. I'm looking forward to following this fic. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to like it.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 03:10 am Title: Seven

I guess Will and Buffy lucked out on her other-worldly experience in the sack. Will has got short recovery time. Lucky girl. A very sexy chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. He's a keeper, vampire or human. :)

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 02:31 am Title: Seven

I guess her being a virgin is important to give more validity to her being in the hospital for her. I wonder how she would have reacted if she wasn't.

Author's Response: That's a really interesting question, isn't it? Might have been hard to explain that one away! :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 01:22 am Title: Seven

Really, really enjoying this story. Love how it's progressing and the unique take in the plot. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you like the rest of it.

Reviewer: ghostofsnickerdoodle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 - 12:41 am Title: Seven

Oh no, life seems perfect – we all know that can't last!

I really like that, as in on the show, it's a bit up in the air as to which universe is real, or if they both are. And it's nice that Will is looking out for Buffy, because it does seem unlikely that she could've learned all that from TV – I'm starting to wonder if I didn't watch enough of it as a kid!

I can't wait to see where you're taking this!



Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the ride! Thanks for reading. :)

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