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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2012 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 49

Very sweet story...

Author's Response: Thank you, ScarlettDuck!! :) I'm very happy you liked.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2010 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 49

A very satisfactory ending. Glad they get to go and have their life together without such things hanging over their heads everyday. And to see Giles and Joyce get their happy ending, too. All good things. Hope Faith gets her happy ending, too. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked the ending! I tried to tie up all the loose ends, so hopefully, I did. Everyone got their happy ending, even Faith. She might not have been in a relationship, but she found family instead. :) This story has been such a big experience, and sometimes frustrating. lol So, thank you for all the wonderful reviews you left along the way!!! I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: taylorn61 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2010 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 49

*clap*clap*clap*clap*

I've been reading this since the get-go, waiting with baited breath for the next chapter to come out.

Loved the way you handled the characters, especially how Buffy dealt with learning that her William was now Spike. Spike was.... wonderful. Just as loving as when he was only human, but now with a wonderful kink (or two) added in. Made him all the more interesting.

It was nice to see Faith as just a good person/Slayer and not the Big Bad Slayer. She deserves a break every now and then. Thank you for giving it to her.

You did damned fine.


Author's Response: Hee... your clapping makes me giddy! :D You don't know how great it is to hear tthat you've been along for the ride since the beginning and enjoyed the updates. Writing it has been such a great (and sometimes frustrating) experience for me, so it's good to know people appreciate my effort. :) I admit I liked writing conflicted Buffy after she learnt William was undead. And as you said, Spike was pretty much William... with a bit of kink. ;) I thought Faith would make a good friend, the kind that doesn't judge, and makes Buffy have some fun. I didn't plan on making her Buffy's BFF when I started writing it, but then it made sense. :) Thank you so much for the brilliant review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2010 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 48

So love that Buffy figured out a way to save her man. So obvious, but I never thought of it. Glad there's hope yet. And they are pretty awesome when they get closer.

Author's Response: She tackled the books, which IMO says how much she wanted to save him. ;) hee... I'm glad you didn't think of it, at least you had a bit of a surprise. It's awesome that you like when they are together because those are the bits I enjoyed writing the most. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2010 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 49

I am so glad it ended so happily. Not too much angst and not too sappy it was just right.

Author's Response: Hee... I'm so happy to hear that! I really didn't want it too come off as too fluffy, but wanted to give you a happy ending as well. Thank you so much for the yummy review!!! :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 49

Loved ur story. it was so good i had to start it over and read it again. thanks for giving us such an awesome fic. Loved all of it.

Author's Response: Hee... thank you! And it makes my heart melt when you say it's good enough to be read more than once. Thank you so much for the sweet review!!! :) I appreciate it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 49

Sad to know it's the end now. :(
But I enjoyed reading your story a lot - loved it.
Well done.
Oh and I can say looking forward anyway - to your new story. :)

Author's Response: It feels so weird for me to have posted the last chapter. But I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story and stuck with me for its duration. Thank you so much for all the awesome reviews you left me!!! :D I hope you'll like the next story as well, I had fun writing the first three chapter, so we'll see. ;)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 49

enjoyed..
A happy Spuffy ending is what I wanted.. thanks

Author's Response: I'm so happy you did! :) Luckily, I don't think I'd be able to write a tragic Spuffy ending. Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews along the way!!! :D

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 48

Eeep! Great chapter! I can't wait till the next one, but then again, the next one will bring us closer to the end. I'm so torn!

Author's Response: Yay, I made you eep! :D And I know exactly what you mean. I'd like to update the last chapter during the weekend, but it depends on my beta. I just hope nobody will be disappointed with the way I ended it. :/ But hey, the next one I'll post will be very snarky so there's something to look forward to. ;) Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2010 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 48

Ah Spike confessed. That went better than I've thought. After all Buffy is happy to have Faith alive and kicking.

Yay for dreams - slayer dream? Whatever it showed her the solution. :))
Thought he would give in.
Enjoyed - and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yup, he sure did. Buffy told him all about Faith (though I didn't include that in the chapter) and he couldn't do anything but tell the truth. Buffy was pretty angry, but it had all panned out well, so she's just happy to have Faith back, as you said. :) Yup, definitely a slayer dream that planted the idea in Buffy's head. Good thing she's persuasive and made Spike forget all about his misgivings. ;) More soon, thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2010 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter 47

Glad that Joyce and Giles are making a go of it. And that it is gradually accepted by all. I wonder how they will eventually figure out this battle with Hermes. Spike so deserves to be saved. And Faith was awakened officially as a slayer by Tara's potion. Wonder if she can help to take out Hermes. I mean, if she can awaken a slayer... Pretty awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: The two crazy kids deserve to finally have someone, and even Buffy will get used to it once she gets over the initial shock. When it comes to Hermes, it would probably be a suicide mission for Buffy to even try to fight him. Hermes is from mythology a guide of the souls to the underworld. This will have to be more of a brain than muscle solution, but no worries, Buffy will find it. ;) There is no way that she'd let Spike's soul in the hell's ownership. You'll see how that all goes. More as soon as my second beta gets back to me, so hopefully by Wednesday or so. Thank you so much for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2010 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 47

*sniff* @ only two more chapters.
It really sounds if Buffy will have the solution to Spike's problem. Maybe the binding? I hope so.
Looking forward to more even if that means nearer to no more updates.

Author's Response: I know, right? I felt all kinds of nostalgic when I finished up the last chapter this, and God knows I've been avoiding writing those last 500 words. Hmm... I really want to tell you, but you'll have to wait. ;) No worries though, Buffy will find the answer. Thank you so much for the sweet review!!! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2010 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 47

*wiping tears* this story ending soon. Well, like the old adage, all good things must come to an end. I'm glad that you are wrapping up all loose ends. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Don't do that to me, now I'm gonna get all nostalgic and stuff. :( But as you said, all good thinngs must come to an end. I finished the last chapter this week, and now I can only hope you'll like. Hopefully, I got all those loose ends. More soon, and thank you so much for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2010 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 46

Quite a lovely twist. Giles and Joyce, wonder if there's any band candy around. Love that she's helping him through this, and talking about blood bonds. Maybe that will calm the voices. Update soon.

Author's Response: I'm happy you think so. :) I quite like the idea of them together. And nope, no band candy was involved this time around. lol Spike certainly has Buffy to lean on when it gets too much. The blood link will be mentioned more soon, and it might have a deeper meaning than they both realize now. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2010 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 46

Spike knows Buffy well. *gg*
I hope he'll try to do what Buffy said - forgive himself. Not easy to do.
And I'm looking forward what they'll do regarding the blood bonds. I don't think that Giles will be fond to help with that so they are on their own.

Unexpected twist at the end. *gg*
But now Buffy knows what Joyce was hiding, huh?
Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Hee... he does indeed. ;) Every nook and cranny. Forgiving himself is pretty much the only thing he can do to make the ghosts disappear, but it's easier said than done. Buffy will try to help him every way she can though. She certainly did her research of vampire customs to learn as much as she could, to understand Spike. You'll get to see what they do about the bond soon, and it just might have a bigger significance than it appears to right now. ;) Poor Giles and Joyce got interrupted! Good thing Bufy and Faith didn't come in a bit later or they might have been scarred for life. lol But the secret's out now, which is good. More during the weekend. Thank you for the very sweet review!!! :D

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2010 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 46

Great chapter! Buffy wasn't the only one trying to get her groove on! Go Joyce!!

Author's Response: LOL! Joyce definitely had her some Watcher love, even if squicked Buffy out a bit. I always thought Joyce and Giles would be awesome for each other. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2010 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter 45

Gotta say things with her mom went better than I expected. It just takes time now. So glad that Spike is there for her. Wonder if she will wear a skirt for him. Hope so. Update soon.

Author's Response: That's good then. :) Buffy is pretty hurt and feels betrayed but she can't help but want Joyce to be there rather not not at all. Joyce certainly has a lot of making up to do. Hee... I'm sure Buffy will learn from her mistakes and wear skirt next time. :D More very soon, probably tomorrow or a day after that. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 45

Mmmmh a lot of history between Buffy and Joyce with her abandon her.
But seeing Spike patrolling (fighting)? A good thing to distract her and make her feel better. :))
Enjoyed the update - looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, there's definitely a lot of issues between them. No instant lovey dovey-ness for them. No, sir. But there was a lot of lovey stuff between Buffy and Spike. Sexy Spike in action just makes Buffy hot. A very effective distractive method, if you ask me. ;) I'm happy you enjoyed, there will be more soon. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 45

An evil tease, that's what you are, you know that right? LOL! Great chappie, love their relationship! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: LMAO Am I? ;) What can I say? I love making them sexually frustrated. That's what they get for making smoochies in a cemetery. Poor dead people... sheesh! I'm happy you love, and thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2010 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 44

Ohhhh...I was seeing evilness with the chains, not just a basic chain for a door. HEHE!

Author's Response: Hee... well, I can't blame you. From me, that wouldn't have come as a surprise. lol Thank you for being awesome!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2010 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 44

evil on numerous levels, that is what you are! First, Joyce in chains? Second, stopping the Spuffy. Third, Giles being all casual with the pizza and such, when he just left Joyce IN CHAINS! Fourth, Buffy going to see her mother. Will she still be in the chains or is someone else there? Evil I tell you...EVIL!

Author's Response: Hee... I think you just misread that little part at the beginning. The chain rattled as Joyce unlocked the door... I meant that little chain you have on doors as a safety measure against thieves and such. ;) So, no worries nothing evil has captured Joyce or is lurking around in her room. Of course Giles wouldn't have just left it like that if that was the case. See, I'm not evil at all! ;) I do apologize for stopping the Spuffy, but there's more of it in the next chapter. Sorry for the confusion! I hope I cleared it up for you and that you forgive me. *bats eyelashes* Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2010 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 44

That is quite a lot going on. And her mom... That has the potential to be quite interesting. Do love that supportive Spike. Awesome chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: We're getting close to the end so the loose ends need to get tied. ;) Buffy/Joyce confrontation coming up in the next chapter and it will be quite emotional. I love writing supportive Spike, so I'm glad you love reading it! More soon, promise. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 44

Giles visiting Joyce? Unexpected to see.

How well she knew this part of him, him trying to hide the pain by slipping on the mask of seduction and flirting. Indeed, Buffy knows him well.
Loved the spuffyness, how supportive Spike became when Buffy became anxious about her mother. But he's always supportive of Buffy, ain't he?
Ah no, no clue how it's going to go with Joyce.
Enjoyed the new update.

Author's Response: Yup, the two of them are hiding something from Buffy more to that later. ;) Spike can't hide anything from her, but she's not going to call him on it. If he needs to pretend and avoid the situation for a while, then she's going to let him. yay, I'm glad you liked the spuffyness in the chapter. I tried to write them being supportive of each other. The situation with Joyce is pretty complicated, and all I can tell you is... it won't be all hugs and puppies. I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for the awesome review!!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 44

Bad for a child to have an uncaring parent. But .. hopefully Joyce is there to make amends.

Author's Response: Indeed it is and Joyce definitely has a lot to make up for. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2010 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 43

That was an amazing chapter. So very many interesting implications for our couple and his soul. Not to mention all the side effects from the original curse placed upon him and the ramifications. And the emotional catch-22 that he has a part of his soul when he first went on his rampage, and getting his soul showed him that fact and allowed him to feel the double guilt that he was soul-full as he raged. I can only imagine how he will overcome this. Actually, that would be right where Buffy comes in. I love it. Update soon.

Author's Response: It makes me so happy that you think so! :) The soul is definitely an issue and they'll have to figure out how to break Hermes' ownership over it. The unfinished ritual was the reason it never fully left William, often making him feel more than he should have as a vampire. And all that rage and grief, he channeled in a very bad way. He realizes that, and it's even worse knowing he has nothing but himself to blame for all the things he's done. It is so clever of you to mention that. :) He'll just have to forgive himself, and Buffy's there to help him and just be there when he needs to lean on someone. I'm so happy you enjoy the story. I'll update as soon as my betas send me the chapter back, which I hope will be soon. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :)

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