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Reviewer: Science Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2011 - 02:13 pm Title: XI

I'm so happy to see an update to this story! William continues to be a bit of an ass ... but he has good cause. You do a great job writing in his voice, and I'm loving his interior world. His story is so heartfelt and leaves me hoping he gets what he's looking for.

Author's Response: Poor William is just so frustrated right now. But don't worry. The soft, sweet part of his nature still remains; he's just keeping it hidden at the moment. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate the feedback. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2011 - 06:51 am Title: XI

Oh. What is a vampire? Love it. Love his angry day with books, and laudanum, and a fear of what happens next. And how, does one explain a vamp to someone with no idea. I look forward to this. Update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, that should be one interesting conversation. lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2011 - 02:50 am Title: X

Nice chapter. Good insight into the development of his infatuation with Cecily. Love the ending, Buffy's mention of his manipulative poutiness. Cute!

Reviewer: marcy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2011 - 10:28 pm Title: X

Great start. I love William so far .sure wish that he could come back with buffy.He still remids me a lttle of the William in your other story. Forward to times past. That's one of my favorite stories ever. Please keep writing!!!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2011 - 04:28 pm Title: X

William is taking all this incredibly well, don't you think?

Author's Response: lol. Well, it doesn't hurt that he's on opium right now. He might not be so calm once the buzz wears off. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 12:06 pm Title: X

enjoyed their interactions.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are. Thank you!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 06:04 am Title: X

I love this story. It's clear you've done a lot of research, your writing is a joy. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm flattered you feel that way about my writing. This story isn't getting a lot of attention, so reviews like yours are especially encouraging. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 05:26 am Title: X

I love her seeing the Spike through William's gentle manipulations. And how much he truly needs her. Forever ready for more. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 12:07 am Title: X

I really liked this chapter. Please update soon. I thought she was going to bring him some penicillin for his TB instead of the books.

Author's Response: Nope, no penicillin. However, there is a reason for that. I can't tell you what it is, but there's a reason. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2011 - 02:08 am Title: IX

He has the one girl in his heart and already seems to have embraced his fate, it is truly hard to judge him. I admire his persistence to seek out Buffy. Hopefully she comes soon, and shares with him more of the reasons why one would bother. Lovely. Update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're not judging him too harshly. He really is a sweetheart, deep down. He's just going through a rough patch right now. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2011 - 07:30 pm Title: IX

I really like how you write and I agree William is being an ass. I wish he would stop drinking the laudanum..

Author's Response: Yes, he definitely needs to nix the laudanum. Not sure that will be happening in the near future, but it would be better for him if it did. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2011 - 04:46 am Title: IX

This story is lovely. You're a wonderful writer. I like this bitter version of the character; he's fascinating.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2011 - 04:34 am Title: IX

I don't blame him for his anger. He's now the talk of the town and people who have never cared about him one bit now feel it's their social duty to make the proper sad sounds about his illness. And if they actually see and talk to him they have more to talk about. Poor William.

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2011 - 07:07 pm Title: IX

Yes, William has been through a great deal. I hope some little bit of happiness come his way. I love this story. Any day that you are writing is a good day. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Give him time and I'm sure good things will come. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2011 - 04:11 pm Title: IX

Interesting chapter. enjoyed.

Author's Response: I'm glad. Thank you!

Reviewer: mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2010 - 03:49 am Title: I

Love this story so far, please update soon! (I also loved Forward to Time Past, read it last year)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you liked FtTP as well. :)

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2010 - 12:45 am Title: VIII

Now that I am 8 chapters in I am completely enraptured with this story. I like how it is starting with William in the past. Most stories that involve some type of time travel or inter-dimensional plot seem to start that way and "baby step" us through it. This story leaves us almost as unaware as William himself. All I know is that Buffy must be coming from some time after Spike sacrificed himself and denied her declaration of love - if she is coming from 2004.
Overall an exciting and fascinating story. I am eagerly awaiting more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm flattered you think so highly of the story. It isn't getting a lot of attention right now, so detailed reviews such as yours are especially precious to me. I really appreciate your taking the time to leave it. :)

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2010 - 06:31 am Title: I

I normally don't like to start reading WIP's but in your case I made an exception. Your work is always so beautifully written and vividly described that it feels like I am actually there.
and so far you don't disappoint. I am just glad that there are already 8 chapters posted for me to enjoy while I wait for the next update.

Author's Response: You're so very kind. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: nea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2010 - 03:43 pm Title: VIII

This chapter was delightful as well. There is such an undertone of sadness but it suits the story very well. I really wonder what will become of William and Buffy.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: nea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2010 - 03:41 pm Title: VII

I fell behind on reading the updates of this story. Sorry about that. I just had to let you know how much I utterly adore your William. This story is such a treat to read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I always appreciate it when a reader takes the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2010 - 04:01 am Title: VIII

Sorry, I forgot to sign my review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2010 - 03:58 am Title: VIII

At least William now knows he isn't mad. One of my favorite moments was reading that line about how long it's been since someone actually touched him. He's so painfully lonely in a house full of servants. It just breaks your heart. Love this story so much.
Any chance Buffy can bring him a cure for his illness?
Update soon.

Author's Response: The possibility of Buffy bringing William a cure will be raised, but maybe not in the way most readers expect. That's all I can say without giving away the plot. ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2010 - 01:53 am Title: VIII

Now we know how Buffy was able to come and see William, now the why. Enjoyed the update, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: We know *some* of it, but there is a lot more to the story than what Buffy told William in this chapter. But all that will come to light eventually. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2010 - 12:30 am Title: VIII

I suppose the whole world couldn't be mad. Glad she's sharing the story in little bits and pieces. Wonder what part comes next. The vampire part, or the ways she's totally in love with him. Love it. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hee. Is her fondness for him that obvious? Well ... yeah ... I could see how it would be. :P I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2010 - 03:43 pm Title: VIII

Maybe William can start to believe Buffy is not a product of the laudanum dreams and have a little happiness.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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