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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

wow - gotta say i was most surprised at xander's reaction to the buffy/spike thing. he was calm and rational and not in denial and still protective (although not in the normal neanderthal way). and dawn 'exists' early (for lack of a better word) ... hmmmm ... enjoying this very much and looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I love Xander for the most part. I think If he would have been a true friend to Buffy on the show things might have turned out much different. Also, I love messing with timelines.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Enjoyed the spuffyness. :)
Glad it went better than I feared. And Dawn is there now?
Hope you'll continue this one.

Author's Response: Yup Dawn is there now. I love to mess with timelines :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

It will be good if it's after them (behind them), telling the others (or being told how wrong they think everything is.
But what an awkward situation.

Author's Response: I like angst what can I say? :) Seems to make the love all that much sweeter.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh good, Angel didn't lead the others to the Mansion. So there is still time.
But Angel didn't win points when talking to Joyce, he's too pushy.
Uh-huh... so Angel found them after all; not good with Spike assuming the worst.

Author's Response: Spike does not feel worthy of her love. Yet.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

What a difference between Angel and Spike, the dream Buffy was having.
And it sounds to me that Spike just claimed Buffy. (Not sure if he noticed, still half asleep.)
Uh-huh... sounds as if everybody is moving to the Mansion now.

Author's Response: HeHe well see

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah I don't think I ever saw this one. Thanks for reposting!
Wow, what a start. No I don't think I ever read it before. Even better. :D

Author's Response: I am glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm so glad Joyce let Spike stay And the Scoobs are dealing, even tho Giles is not too happy. At least he knows Spike would never hurt Buffy. Too bad Dawn walked in on them. I think they should get a place of their own soon. Spike does have the treasure doesn't he?
And Angel should just GO already. He only wants her cause Spike has her now. He was perfectly fine in LA.

Great story. Plz post more soon. :)

Author's Response: I am glad you like it so far. Not too sure about using the amara treasure...guess we will have to see how it plays out ;)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Damn stupid Angel...and poor Spike. Buffy can be a bit dense sometimes. Glad she figured out what she wants. I loved Spike's poem. :)

Reading on...:) really liking this.

Author's Response: Yeah Buffy can be dense. I am glad you liked the poem.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh boy Spike bit her. I like that Spike is willig to change totally for her. Love's Bitch. lol And now Mr. Broodypire is on the case. Can't wait to see what happens when he finds them.

Onto the next chappie.

Author's Response: LOL I am glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh great start. Loved it. Season 1-3 Bangel makes me ill. It's so angsty and annoying. Good to see Spike here, maybe she'll get over Angel now. Don't like the idea of her using Spike, but I trust you to make it work. :)

Onto the next chappie.

Author's Response: Of course it will work. :D I am not Angels biggest fan, and I love when Spuffy gets together before Angelus ruins her :D

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 5

Just when you'd think that things could not get any better, here comes Dawn and her timing to interrupt the sexcapades. Great chapter to wrap up the objections to Buffy and Spike mating. I think that now that Dawn is in the picture, Buffy and Spike should consider a place of their own with the treasure where the Gem of Amara was found. Cannot picture Spike working at a job, so why not invest the treasure to keep them financially in the black till they figure out what the future holds. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Great I dea bout the amara treasure, though I have seen it used in several fics now. I love Dawn, this one has been fun to write so far.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Their feelings developed very quickly and the Scoobies are supportive, but that is nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, at the time I started writing this I was all about the scoobies being supportive.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: I am glad you like it. I will be putting up a new chappie soon

Reviewer: maryperk Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter 5

How do I remember this? I only read it five, six, a bajillion times!!! Thank you for the repost!!!

Author's Response: HAHA I am glad you liked it. I didn't change too much. Look for a new chappie soon.

Reviewer: velvet cat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1

great so far, looking forward to the next bit!

Author's Response: Thank you! Now posted chapters 1- 5

Author's Response: By the way I love ...Or is this the dream that never goes away? Great story!

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