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Reviewer: Sister Cuervo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2017 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

Really enjoyed this story quite a lot.  I love how you entwine bits from Dreaming and regular canon.  Makes for a great, fun read.  Scary bits!  Wow.

Reviewer: SoUtHeRnBeLLe706 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

wow, this is totally different than anything i expected, but i love it so far. although, to be honest, the fact that they are related is kinda creepin me out, since they are sleepin together...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

Sorry, I think I'll sit this one out till I now more about it (or how it ends). I don't want to read Spike/Lily not sure if I can stand more of it, I need to know it will be spuffy and for now I'm not sure about it.
BTW your chapter still refuses me to make the font bigger. I'll asked Pari if she knows what is causing this. Maybe she'll be able to help, maybe not.

Author's Response: Fair enough. There will be spuffy (of course!) and there won't be any more Spike/Lily sex scenes - when I wrote her, I had in mind all the women I know who'd like to have a chance with Spike - but there's no way I'm giving out spoilers for the ending! Sorry. Oh and I really hope we can resolve the sizing issues.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

I like it, this story feels different than many others.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

This is a very unusual story. I like how different it seems to be. I do think that Lily will have her heart broken, but at least she gets to have Spike for awhile.

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

She sounds like she works for wolframhart

Reviewer: masrowan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

Another suspicious reader. She's made long-range plans involving Spike ahead of time and clearly discussed them with her father, though not with Spike. That alone would bother me. Also, Spike seems very casually accepting of this. I'm enjoying the story and ready for darkness, but hoping for a happy ending. Hmmmmmm?

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

I can't decide whether I'm supposed to like Lily or not. At first I was suspicious, then I liked her, now I'm suspicious again. I'm a bit upset with Spike for how easily he allowed her to seduce him... I hope their liaison is brief or you'll lose me...

Author's Response: Ooh, that's really interesting, what's made you suspicious of Lily? I love to get another perspective.

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