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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 06:42 pm Title: Revenge

*waves hi* Please close your HTML tags or like Pari said, don't use the 'link back' picture link. I can't read here at TSR with my IE it's all centered and a link to your banner at Photobucket. The banner isn't visible here but I saw it at Photobucket. Looks good.
Pari has the code in the help section here.

So the story starts before Spike is caught by the Initiative? If the ring is what I think it is I hope it is in a safe place and he won't loose it (especially when caught).
Yup - indeed he got caught now. And he has the ring ... he's lucky that they didn't find it. Sounds as he is alive because of it. Too bad he lost the ring now.
(PS - I hope you can fix the link in the next chapter.)

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 10:06 am Title: Revenge

Please update as soon as you can, because I would like to read more of this story.

Reviewer: anoymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 07:20 am Title: Revenge

Intresting start,Spike history is diff which is good

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 12:38 am Title: Revenge

Interesting beginning, and you did well establishing how Spike's history has changed but his personality (and some flaws) are still the same. I'm definitely interested in learning more.

Is Buffy the slayer in this fic? I really like your idea of some fun comparisons with Riley and Spike when she doesn't know what they are, but it might be easier to hide from her if she was an innocent human, even with our Buffy's attitude!

Either way, I like the idea that evil Spike has a reason to leave Buffy alive and I'm sure I'll enjoy his wicked thoughts as he warms up to her and thinks about stealing her from Finn. You capture Spike's thoughts well, and the divide taht he isn't just a punk human, but a powerful creature on a different level than cardboard cut-out Riley.

Looking forward to next chapter~

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