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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2012 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Twelve of the Council

WELCOME BACK, SWEETIE! So glad to see you're writing again! *blushing* thanks for the shout out. As for the chapter, good job showing the tension between the characters without much dialog. Enjoyed!

Author's Response: THANK YOU D!!! =D I admit it, I missed writing... and whole Spuffy-awesomeness that is this site :) Thank you for the review!! It means alot when I see someone (you especially) liking what I write and how I do it... By the way... I'm loving your new fic... :D

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2012 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Twelve of the Council

Wecome back!! I've loved this one from the begining and missed it. Hope the writter's block is long gone. Can't wait to read the next ch.

Author's Response: Hello!!! And thank you! :D Yup, the next chappie is in the making and it will be posted sometime soon... We're talking days here.. not years. ;) Thank you again for stoping by!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2012 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Twelve of the Council

Thank you for returning to this story..

enjoyed

Author's Response: Hey, Pam! Thank you so much! Your reviews are precious to me... I promise to update soon! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2012 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

you gotta finish it. i like it

Author's Response: Thank you for stoping by! I hope you like it still... :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

more please! this is great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Here is more! :))

Reviewer: diamellin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

I love this story and hope you have not abandoned it. It's been a long time since you last updated it. I look forward to more and more updates until it is finished.

Author's Response: A VERY long time indeed... I gathered some courage and just posted. I will deffinetly finish it. Thank you soooooo much for your review!

Reviewer: Talaxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

I love this story! It is so unique and compelling. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! It took me a very LONG time, but... here it is - the update :)

Reviewer: diamellin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

I am among your faithful reaxders of this story and am anxious to read more. I love this story!

Author's Response: Hello, diamellin! Great to hear that! I will post soon again! Thank you very much for stopping by! :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

Dum...dum...dum! For some reason guys in robes always equal badness! I hope Spike will stand by Buffy. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Hahah! Unless they are cool wizzards or something ;) He will try! Thank you babe! For reading and reviewing! Means ALOT to me, D.!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

I am still reading and I am concerned about the arrival of the church council. This does not appear to be a good thing for Buffy.
It was interesting reading Spike's musings. Good characterization. It is interesting the type of people Spike surrounds himself with since he thinks of himself as being so stern.

Author's Response: Hey there Bridget! Nope... not a good thing at all... But hey! I promissed a good ending, hadn't I? :) I'll keep my promise. Thank you so very much! Yup...Spike has good people around himself... well, most of them are. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Means alot!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

That doesn't seem good at all. Stupid self righteous clergy. And Poor Spike, all caught up with her but possibly out of time to save her. Their seems to be a lot more chance for bad than good. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: You are going into right direction. I try to be as realistic as possible in this fic, which is not a pretty thing, but it will all work out nicely in the end. I will have some freedom in writing. Thank you for keep on reading BuffyRat! And thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

Waiting to see how William will prove that Buffy is not the one..
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thank you Pam! :) Boy will he have a hard time proving that...

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Mallus Maleficarum / The Hammer of Witches

I absolutely love this story. Without a doubt you are an extremely talented writer. I can not wait to see what wicked things and what good things come our way. I know you have plenty in store for us. It is truly incredible for your first fic. I am sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen to Buffy once the Church Counsel makes their decision? Will Lord Rayne have the final say, will he have to save her from the verdict at hand? Will they continue to imprison Buffy? Shardallinee, you are terrific. Can't wait to read more from you. Oh, and the lyrics could not be more fitting.xxSG

Author's Response: I don't really know what to say to that but sit here and blush furiously while grinning madly! Thank you! Things will get quite rough in the next few chapters! I try to be as realistic as I can. *hugs SpikesGirl tight*

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

Love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! I promise the next update shall follow soon :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2011 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

writing style is so perfect. love this historical narrative. please update soon. we love your story.

Author's Response: Aww... thank you so very much, SpikesGirl! Means alot to me hearing this! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2011 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

Such trauma. Poor girl, hope something goes right. Update soon, I want to see her and Spike go after the real baddies! Update soon!

Author's Response: Yup, I made her strong though, just like her mother was. Hehe, and that they shall do, I promise! :) Thank you very much for your review, BuffyRat! I'll try and update sooner this time :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

So it appears that Buffy worked somehow with Dru and Angel. I am sure she does not know exactly what they did but knows something.
Dru and Angel ae gag worthy as usual. I wonder what caused the dislike between Angel and Spike. More things were explained in this chapter and is becoming a little clearer to me. Please update when you ae able..

Author's Response: Hey Bridget! Dru, Angelus and Buffy plot will be revealed a bit after Buffy is cleared of murders. Those two ARE gag worthy, aren't they? I holpe I'll be able to update fairly soon, the next chapter is already half-written...it waits for the hard parts to be filled in. Thank you so much for your review! Means so very much... :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

Great chapter, Lady! You're doing a great job weaving together the different stories that will eventually merge together into one. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Hey D! Thank you! I have sooo many loose ties to connect right now, and I hope that in the end it will all sound right, without the whole thing sound predictable :) Thank you so much, for Your review! You know how vera much I love hearing from you :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

So Buffy knows about the murders of Angel and Dru? Is there a prior relationship of Lord Rayne and Dru also?
Waiting for more with Buffy and Lord Rayne.
enjoyed

Author's Response: She knows...something. But does not know who exactly those people were... And gosh, no. No previous Dru/Spike in this one...not the way it usually is, at least. I prepared something whole lot different for Lord Rayne's past. I hope you will like it... The next chapter will be tricky for me, but hopefully ends wit readable results. Thank you so much for your continuous reading and reviewings! Means so very much to me, Pam!

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After Sun Rose, the Night Came

I just think you're doing everything right! I love your story! You're very good at describing what's going on inside your characters minds. As an alterrnative universe it's very far away from
BTVS, but still, you've managed to keep it interesting all the way, funny how you find a place for everyone in the gang to make an appearance.

Author's Response: *blush* Thank you! I really needed to hear that! Yup! I have planned an appearance for almost every member of the gang in there somewhere... :) thank you again for taking your time and commenting! Means ALOT!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2011 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter 10 - Lips of Thorns

eI don't believe it will be easy to convince the council of her innocence. This fic is still a little confusing to me but I am sure it will
all come together.

Author's Response: Hey Bridget! Nope... convincing the Council of her innocence will border to impossible, not just hard. The next two or three chapters are all going to be very vital for the plot - alot will be revealed then. It won't be easy and bright, I'm afraid. I'm trying to stay as realistic as possible here. I hope it won't be too confusing. Thank you for stopping by again! Means alot to me that you took time for a review.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 10 - Lips of Thorns

*blush* You're so very welcome, K! Wonderful chapter! Loved all the descriptions of how Spike saw Buffy. Like the update with the members of court. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well it's true - you rock! :D Thank you... I had to melt the man a bit... but he will stay strong, I like him that way better. Hehe! The Court must have been a golden cave of gossips at that time I imagine.. all the secrets were public almost :D Thank you thank you thank you again for your help! *squeezes you very hard...uhh..hugs you tight* :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter 10 - Lips of Thorns

That sounds quite serious, how thrilled the King is. I do not think William will have quite as much luck back peddling this matter as he hopes. Girl may scream innocent from all angles, but I doubt they care about one poor girl if she provides a scape goat. Let us see what kind of razzle dazzle William the Bloody can bring to the court. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yup... King was not pleased to hear that someone was merrily offing his subjects on a regularly basis... plus all of the diseases and bad crops.. it must be a witch (even if none of the upper classmen really believed such things exist - they need an scape goat). Next two chapters will be quite trying for the both of our blondes... but it will all be necesary :) Thank you SO MUCH for all of your awesome reviews! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

Girl sure wasn't expecting that. Wonder what it will tell him. And poor, poor girl. Hope he softens a bit.

Author's Response: It will tell him alot :) and soften him a bit... but just a bit.. he will have to be his strong self for the couple of next chapters..

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

Sweet Andrew. So very kind the way his mind works. And Angelus's plan. Poor Buffy. Do sure hope Spike gets to the bottom of this.

Author's Response: Always loved the Andrew character :)

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