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Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 04:21 pm Title: Fill in the Blanks

When he enters her - to compare the warmth and wetness to blood was very visceral and brilliant.

"Petals of her miraculous body" was also very visual. And to have him consider taking her in the muck was the perfect touch and very Spike.

I am going to go soak in a tub filled with ice cubes now.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I was pretty nervous about posting this thing, actually. Thanks for writing such generous reviews.

Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 04:13 pm Title: Tab A and Slot B

THAT was very good! This bit just had me standing in awe: "Even now: clad in that shapeless nylon nightmare and that ludicrous Bessie the Bleeding Cow cap, even slathered in failure and rendered fat. Even now the little minge could still lance him like a sodding boil."

The description of sex as part hate and part lust and part something else was just very good. I can't believe this is your first fic. Applause! (One tiny small fixy: wonton to "wanton")

Author's Response: Thanks, Puddinhead! I'm working on the third part, now, and it gets a bit darker. I sometimes do think there is a bit of hatred in lust. "(One tiny small fixy: wonton to wanton)" OUCH! Hahahahah, that's actually a pretty funny typo... Can I have a side of egg roll and chop suey with that poem, please! Thanks so much for catching it, and letting me know.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 01:12 pm Title: Fill in the Blanks

I've been cruising this site looking for this story. I read your first post three times yesterday. I wish I had written this. It's amazing. Yeah, you probably have to keep your day job, but in a just world you would be writing filthy awesomeness all day.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Minx! I will gladly settle for a filthy hobby, I guess. :D

Reviewer: claudia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 - 11:25 am Title: Fill in the Blanks

Love it! More please.

Author's Response: Okay!

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 - 11:18 am Title: Tab A and Slot B

A dark and sad feeling, perfect for this part of season 6.

Author's Response: Thanks, magnus.

Reviewer: claudia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 - 08:58 am Title: Tab A and Slot B

Definately a great wow, an amazing wow. You managed to evoke such a realistic scene from a few words and captured something that is often indefinable about their relationship: the loathing that Spike feels for both himself and his interactions with Buffy. (eg: Ponce! Bloody Rent Boy!). Brilliant characterisation.

Author's Response: Whew! In my brain, I was picturing someone shaking their head sadly and saying "wow, just wow." :-D Thanks for the lovely compliments, claudia!

Reviewer: claudia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 - 03:30 am Title: Tab A and Slot B

Wow, just wow.

Author's Response: Is that a Good "wow" or Bad "wow?" :O

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 - 03:19 am Title: Tab A and Slot B

I'm in love with the way you write. Don't ever, ever stop.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Minx!

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