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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 12:58 am Title: It’s a Small World

that was an interesting chapter - starts off with love, then morphs into a hell for spike and buffy, goes into a pergatory-like place, then for a few chosen moments there are compassion and realization, and then back to love. definitely quite a ride!

looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! You're right ... it's definately a wild ride in a short time! Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.27

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Date: 06/23/2011 - 01:47 pm Title: It’s a Small World

Of course, they were having good time, then they must have angst :). A strong chapter, Spike get all guilt and painful memories at once, then Buffy helping him with the pain and finaly getting forgivnes from the ghosts of past times. Very good indeed.

Author's Response: Well, of course there must be angst! Where have you been!? LOL! I don't think there is one chapter without *some* amount of angst in this whole story... OH - Maybe that one when they were in the Butterfly Garden, although I think even that had some angst in the middle - that was as close as it got. Glad you enjoyed him getting forgiveness from the ghosts ... now maybe he can move forward and feel more worthy of what he has... Thanks again for stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.27

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 - 04:37 am Title: It’s a Small World

Well that resolves a few things. Good to see him back on the mission, and back on the mission based on the opinions of some of the powers. A pretty good start in the right direction. And we will soon get to figure out what may or may not have happened with the help of the others. I do wonder if there are still vengence demons in this world now, or if they're still gone, cause I've got to wonder what Cecily could do this time around if left to it. Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Will have a few more things resloved in the next couple of chapters ... hopefully just about everything, other than the money situtation, which will be in a different story arc. There are still vengenace demons, but Cecily isn't among them ... as WtB killed her as a human in 1891 ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.27

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2011 - 09:40 pm Title: You Save Me

as much pain as spike was in temprarily, gotta say, buffy 'trying to hard' was kinda funny.

i'm so glad they're really re-connected (and no, i don't mean the physical stuff). so looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! I'm glad you thought it was a bit funny ... poor Buffy! and poor Spike! LOL! Well, I think he'll be well rewarded for his pain ... ;-)

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.22

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2011 - 08:02 am Title: You Save Me

Poor Buffy, her wonderful plan totaly selfdestructed. Good that Spike knew exactly what to say. A wonderful chapter that let them reconect. Another thing, when I googled Avengelyne I saw that there was plans about start the comic up again.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! The best laid plans of mice and men .... and women ... heehee! She wanted it to be so perfect, but sometimes the imperfect moments are the ones that we really remember most, aren't they? Glad you enjoyed it! Hmmmm .... I'll have to check that out on the comic Avengelyne ... it didn't have a very long run, but something just drew my muse to it when I googled 'fallen angels' when I was looking for a name for Rack to call her. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.22

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2011 - 02:56 am Title: You Save Me

Nice to see them having a bit of an awkward coming together, like the rest of us have. Super heroes or not, I guess there still kind of human. Lovely. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat ... aren't those times that go "wrong" sometimes the best ones? Even vacations or trips when things just don't go right somehow seem to be the most memorable, when you have to improvise and work together to get through... Buffy and Spike are definately still human ... superhero or no ... Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it! -p4s 2011.06.22

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2011 - 08:59 pm Title: Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground

Poor Anya. I hope they will get through this. I can't wait to see how the Scooby meeting will go:) The bathroom scene was absolutely lovely. It really showet the love between Buffy and Spike. Buffy seems to be adjusting really well to the new situation.

Author's Response: Hi Catrine ...Anya and Xander may have some hard times, but I think Buffy will do everything she can to help them ... she might have some ideas up her sleeve (in future story arcs) to help out. Buffy may show some signs of maladjustment in future chapters ... Got the second half of the bathroom christening up, then the Scooby meeting will be coming soon! thanks so much for reading and stopping in ... Love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.06.22

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 12:00 pm Title: Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground

I loved the Buffy as an angel picture, but that horrible eyeball painting, why would anyone want something like that? The lighthouse picture was nice too. 5 years are lost and money is an issue, but the family are back together. Anya and Xander are having trouble but that could have happend anyway during these 5 years. A good chapter as always.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! LOL! The eyeball painting is a Salvador Dali ... I'm gonna say Willow and Tara bought it as an investment ... it's called 'Spellbound' so I thought that fit them! heehee! I've never quite appreciated his 'art' myself, but lots of people pay big bucks for his work. Where I live (in Florida) we have the Dali Musuem ... but, despite living here for my whole life, I've never been to it! I was gonna have them buy a Picasso or VanGogh, but they aren't THAT rich (yet?). Glad you liked the chapter overall ... I was afriad it would get boring, but somehow I have to get everyone 're-acquianted' so I don't know how else to do that but have a little bit of mundane life for a chapter or two. We will have some excitment to come and a couple of surprises ... one of which will probably not surprise you, I'll point it out when I get there ...well, you'll know, but still - I think you've taken my muse out for a pint or two and gotten some insider info ... What could I be talking about?!?!? You'll see. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in - love hearing from you, as always!! Will try to have more soon ... {hugs} -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 07:22 am Title: Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground

Okay, forgot to mention to the last chapter that I knew that Spike would never kill his children from the past. Though I have to wonder who created and writes the comics Avengelyne? Wasn't Spike a writer in this verse? Money being an issue in this new reality, why can't Spike and Buffy dredge up some of the treasure the gem of Amara was with. They could even be an antiquities dealer considering the demons they kill who leave valuable weaponry and/or jewelry behind. Throws crumpled up pieces of paper at the head of your muse with suggestions for money making ideas such as nightly ghost tours of Sunnydale's cemetaries to tourists complete with anti-vampire kits consisting of ultra-violet ray flashlights, holy water and wooden stakes. Puts brick inside the crumpled paper to het his attention.

Author's Response: Hi again! I actually thought about having Spike draw those comics rather than just 'nick them' but the story was already sooooo long that I let that go. Those comics only ran a short while, there weren't a lot of issues that I could find ... perhaps Spike could resurrect them.

There are several ways Spike and Buffy will try to make some more money (which I *think* is what my muse has in mind for the next story arc) and selling treasures could be part of it... although first I think there may be some violence (I'm thinking demon -no-holds-barred UFC fights maybe ...) ... I love Spike being all demony and manly ... fighting, kicking ass, winning prize money ... Buffy, won't let it go for long, I'd wager, but he's gonna have to do that. Darn, did I just give away part of the plot!? Shoot! My Blue Eyed muse definately has some money making ideas for the Weckerlys ... never fear! {{ducks your brick and glares at you}} just for that, he may add some angst in to the next story, too! shoots you a raspberry!

Thanks again for your reviews --- love hearing from you, Vette!! You have great ideas! {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 06:40 am Title: Acapella

Now this chapter I could read without a hole in my heart. The sketch of Buffy as Avengelyne and the comics are awesome! Glad you put them in, never knew about the comics, but they fit Buffy. Eyeball eggs, that is so neat, where did you get that? Can I tickle torture Spike Too? Sounds like a hoot being in on the "Spike Sandwich". Pinches your muse's cheek (not the face) lovinly for this chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Yay - FINALLY, a chapter that ended on a happy note! And you only had to read ...what is it ...20-something chapters to get to this one? I saw those comics and that was just so perfect ... a fallen angel trying to get her wings back ... in fact, God cast her out of heaven so she could become a hardened warrior to fight in the final armagedon on the side of good ... hmmmmm .... Buffy's become a hardened warrior over the last years ... hmmmm ...

Eyeball eggs is the invention of my own six year old mind ... I always thought poached eggs looked like eyeballs! LOL! Get in line for the Spike tickle torture! Me first! heehee! 'course, there's probably enough goodness there to go around ... I'll share! My muse just rubbed his tushy where you pinched him and ran his tongue across his lips ... I think he liked that! :O

Thanks so much for reading and you're always entertaining reviews! {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 03:16 am Title: Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground

Well, it seems that Buffy is slowly getting acquainted with her life again. Hope Xander and Anya can get around their trauma. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat ... I hope that Buffy can do something to help Xander and Anya thru this hard time ... even if she can't help with the money. It will take a little time for Buffy to get back into this 'new' old life ... and there will be some ups and downs for them all. Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U!! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 11:58 pm Title: Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground

Wow, if she ever gets back to the tome before the wish, she can save a lot of heartache for Ayna and Xander.

Author's Response: Hi Gopher ... yeah, Xander and Anya are having a hard time, but maybe Buffy can do something even in this time to help them get past their problems ... we'll see ... :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Will have more soon! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 09:36 pm Title: Acapella

I knew it!!!:D I knew he would't kill his own children. Loved this chapter and the way it all came together. So sweet that hr looked for Avengelyne for such a long time and that he didn't want to tell Byffy because he didn't want her to feel like he was setleling (don't know if that is the way that word is written). I'm so thrilled there is another update. I will save it for tomorrow. It's nice to have something to look forward to ;)

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! There were a few of you who were very sure William/Spike wouldn't kill his own children ... kudos!! Glad you enjoyed the way everything played out for Spike after his encounter with his angel ... will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:21 pm Title: Acapella

Sorry I forget to mention, good work on finding the comics, that's where the name Avengelyne came from I guess.

Author's Response: HI Magnus ... Yep, that's where Rack got the name he called her ...a fallen angel.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:14 pm Title: Acapella

So He didn't kill them, I was wondering about that, Dru could have been with him at the time or something like that. Does this mean that we have a Spike or William lookalike like in the other timeline? This means that there is nothing more for Buffy to try to fix. Well mayby get 5 years of memories. Anyway something bad will happen, you more or less said so. I just have to wait and see.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... it definatley means that we could have some Spike/Buffy look-a-likes around the world ... Will have to keep an eye out for them !!! :D There will be some more angsty moments as she tries to fit back in, but nothing too catastrophic ... or that can't be fixed ... Thanks so much for reading, always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:07 am Title: Acapella

i'm so glad that buffy told him everything about 'her' last five years. and i'm so heartbreakingly relieved that spike didn't kill his kids like the books said. he absolutely did the right thing ...

and such a sweet family moment - chokingly sweet. here's to hoping things get steadily better for our couple ...

SO looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! There will be some ups and downs ... but things have definately turned a corner for them now... Glad you enjoyed the happy after all the angst ... I'm so glad Spike didn't kill his kids, too ... just giving them to Wanda and the vicar was heartbreaking enough for him... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 09:05 pm Title: Acapella

I like the "fix" on the three past children--thank you for that! But I still don't like having this life as the "real" life from here on out. But I'll try to be patient and see how it all works out.

Author's Response: Hi Sibb ... there will be some positives to this new life, so give it a chance to play out ... although there are definately some downsides too, some of which will be fodder for future stories... Glad you liked the 'fix' ... it was an easy one, although Spike was still heartbroken over what he had to do... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Will try to have more soon! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 08:02 pm Title: Acapella

So glad he pawned off the little ones on Wanda. A perfect solution indeed. Spike would've staked himself before he killed his children, though Cecily totally deserved it. Glad things are mostly back to normal, even if JJ may be a poltergeist. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Yes ... Wanda would be the perfect mother for them ... we'll hear from her again before the story is over ... I figured those of you who wanted Cecily dead would be happy that she was killed twice in this story ..heehee! Poor JJ ... hope he's not really a poltergeist! :D ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much!! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 07:58 pm Title: Acapella

Not you, Will.
Love the sweet fluff of this chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the happy stuff ... it took a while to get to it ...the angst is 100% over yet, but it should be a bit less in depth and duration now ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 05:05 am Title: Home Sweet Home

Just goes to show that normal is a relative term. Not quite back to the beginning yet. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat ... Will they ever get back to 'normal' ... probably not. Me thinks this is gonna be their life now... the same, but slightly different. Got another chapter up for ya! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! -p4s 2011.06.16

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Date: 06/14/2011 - 09:08 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

Just a coment on my earlier review. Hallie can't do anything of course, she died as Cecily in this timeline.



Author's Response: No worries ... Hallie's fate will be abundantly clear very soon. Those people who wanted her to be killed will be doubly happy ... :D

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 08:42 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

The whole name thing would have confused me too.

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah ... that got a little odd. Those crazy twins! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.16

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Date: 06/13/2011 - 02:22 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

Poor Buffy how horrible to not have the memories of the last five years. Well it's logical, these five years was she hunting vengeance demons and that's what she remember. Buffy will have to tell Spike most of what she have done he won't settle for anything less. Buffy will of course try to save the other children, but what will that lead too? Another big questien, will Hallie do something? she hasn't been killed in this timeline so she should be alive. Time travel is really a lot of troubles.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... What happened to Hallie/Cecily gets a little confusing, but I think any uestion about that will soon be put to rest. I don't *think* we need to worry about her any longer (but you never know!) ... Why Spike didn't realize the children were exactly the same is addressed in the next chapter, as well as more about what can be done to save his human family ... I don't want to give anything away, so I'll just let you read it. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.16

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 01:23 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

I was so happy for the update when I checcked in today :D such a great start.

I just can`t wrap my head around the fact that Spike killed his children when he was turned...evil vampire or not. Perhaps he hid his children or something from Dru and Angelus and that is why he didn`t keep his money....? And the fact that he got children with Buffy identical with the ones he got with Cecily,- wouldn`t he question how that happend? I loved the scene at the dinner table and how you subtle showed how Spike started to think something was amiss with Buffy. I realise more angst is coming, but this was a sweet intermission from it; Buffy trying to find her place with her family after losing fivve years:)

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! I'm glad you like starting your day with a P4S update! That makes my day!

Some of the answers to your questions are answered in the new update; I don't want to give anything away, so I'm just gonna let you read and not comment further .... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here, I love hearing from you!! -p4s 2011.06.16

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 05:13 am Title: Home Sweet Home

Home sweet home! Isn’t that what evil Spike said when he ran over the Sunnydale welcome sign? Buffy is pretty much like the sign, mowed down by this new reality. It appears that Hallie’s wish is still in motion, causing misery to Spike over his dead human family. Obviously this altered reality has its downfalls, what with the lack of wealth that Spike originally had before Hallie’s wish. It is still unclear as to how “Hallie rat” became human again to make her wish and which v’demon granted it? Buffy never did get a straight answer to all of that when she annihilated the vengeance demons. Will Buffy accept this reality and not go further with “making things right” or will she try to go back in time to kill Cecily as she originally intended? Only your evil muse knows and he is not telling!

Author's Response: Hi Vette ... yes, that is exactly what Spike said when he came to town - the first words ever uttered by our blondie bear in Sunnyd... and you';re right, at this point Buffy definately must feel like that sign!

We'll explore Hallie's wish further as the story goes ... we still have a few more chapters, not sure if we'll ever know the answer to who helped Hallie ... well, not until they come back and do something else to our Spuffy couple! You'll find some of the answers to your question on what Buffy will do to fix the deaths of the other children in the chapter I just posted ... And don't feel bad, my evil muse often doesn't even tell *me* what he's planning until he types it on the screen for me! LOL! Sad but true ...

Thanks so much for reading and your always insightful reviews! -p4s 2011.06.16

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