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Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 02:25 am Title: Home Sweet Home

OK--she has her family back but it isn't her "real" life or their's. And the killing of the pass three children is beyond horrible! This needs to be fixed but I can't for the life of me figure out how you plan on doing the fixing!

Author's Response: Hi Sibb.... the fixing is posted ... This new life is probably going to be their 'real life' now (unless my muse has something in mind he hasn't shared with me yet!) ... Will explore this new life more as well as Hallie's wish over the next few chapters. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.16

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 12:47 am Title: Home Sweet Home

ok, seems like a respite from the storm. but why do i have a feeling it's gonna get much, much worse before it gets better?

Author's Response: Hi rkm! I think for me the height of the angst were the two chapters where Buffy went back in time, but you're very right that the angst isn't over yet ... Still have a ways to go with it before things can be set right and Buffy can get some real answers and not feel like she's losing her mind. Will try to have more soon ...

Thanks soooo much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.12

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 - 06:56 pm Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

Don't stop now!!! Cliffhanger after cliffhanger, how do you do it??? This is such an amazing story, and I can't wait to see what happens. You have such an amazing and vivid imagination. This story just keeps me so captivated. Will she tell Spike what she went through? Why doesn't he remember her as Avengelyne? So many questions. Hope to read a new chapter soon:)

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! Your wish is my command! Another chapter is up... My muse just loves evil, angsty cliffies ... it's his raison d'etre ... that and making me cry! I'm glad you're capivated ... my muse loves a captive audience, that means he can make it even sadder if he knows you can't leave! heehee!

There's a slight reprieve from the gut wrenching angst in the next chapter, but it's not completely gone, so don't get too compfortable! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 - 09:57 am Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

Things have changed in a way to the better but at a great cost. Buffy will go back and change the past again she can't let Spike kill the children, that's not her.




Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Perhaps ... First she has to get through this first night back and trying to explain to Spike what happened ... It won't be an easy convo for either of them. More on the way! Angst is not over yet! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.12

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 - 07:19 am Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

Calling Nurse Ratched! (One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest). Put a drool bib on Buffy because she is totally going bonkers! So where on the list did she stomp on the butterfly? Hmmm… Follow your heart – check! Kill Cecily – uncheck! Warn William about Billy being a hero – check! Make sex snow angels with William in public – check! I cannot believe that William would’ve killed his children in the past, I believe that Cecily would out of spite because he probably told her that he didn’t love her anymore. In being driven out of town he probably ran into Drusilla and got turned because he had nothing left to live for. Buffy needs to get back to Lilah and see if she can go back to the year 1880 and kill Cecily before she can affect the time-line. Ties up your muse with scrunchies and spins him around in a merry-go-round to make him dizzy like he is making your readers dizzy with his evil ideas!

Author's Response: ROFL! My muse is quite interested in the 'tying up with scrunchies on the merry-go-round' idea.... was that in the nude? :O I really have no response to all that ... wonderful ideas, they are ... but we'll just have to see how it plays out. I love your passionate reviews ... there's lots more to come and the angst isn't over yet.... Thanks sooo much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you, too funny! -p4s 2011.06.12

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 - 12:31 am Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

I am speechless. I am beginning to really dislike your muse.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... Well, he's getting used to that! I hope that he can eventually redeem himself with you ... hang on, he's not done yet! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.06.12

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 09:08 pm Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

I even don't think after turned, William would do that. i think this has to be Rack's doing somehow.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101! Well, you could be right ... We'll just have to wait and see. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! More up and lots more to come! -p4s 2011.06.12

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 08:12 pm Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

Oops! I meant to say that A Sound of Thunder is a great "story" not book! My bad...must not be quite awake even though it is the afternoon :-).

Author's Response: I knew what you meant! no worries! :D

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 08:08 pm Title: Changes (The Butterfly Effect)

OK, this is bad...can this be fixed? Does she have to go back in time to fix this? Hallie has a lot to answer for. By the way, I loved A Sound of Thunder--great book!

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! Can Buffy go back in time *again*?? I don't know ... we'll see what happens over the next few chapters as she tries to sort out everything... I love that story too - it's one of the few from high school that actually stuck with me! heehee! It's always facinated me... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! Will try to have more soon! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 10:42 am Title: Just One Last Dance

one shining moment for william - and then his misunderstanding of all the circumstances brings him more hurt. and buffy - for one moment she was able to feel something, and it was beautiful. and then like with everything it seems for her recently, it's turned into more heartache ... and now she's back to her suicidal thoughts ... i've just about given up on her finding a semblance of peace (without going the suicide route) ...

Author's Response: Hi rkm! They both touched a place deep within the other ... but it was fleeting and perhaps more painful for William than never knowing that place at all. Everywhere Buffy turns she runs into landmines ... and now what will William do? Can he really go back home to Cecily after this? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened after William left her there ... and what consequences her actions had on the future...

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 06:50 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

It was nice how she woke the Spike part in William and he woke the Buffy part in her again. But that ruined him, he can't go back to his old life now. It was so sad to see Buffy in the end, once again things seems to become worse. This will change the future but what and how much? I can think on many ways the future could change, but I will have to wait and see what you will write.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Very true ... they each touched that part of the other that only a soulmate could reach ... but she can't stay. Where will William turn? He can't go back to Cecily, can't go forward with his angel ...

We'll find out over the next few chapters what Buffy changed by coming here and what consequences her actions had. Thanks so much for reading and your reviews! I always love hearing from you, Magnus! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 05:51 am Title: Just One Last Dance

It is better to have love and lost than never to have loved at all! William probably does not agree with that sentiment at the moment. Such metamorphoses in William having sampled true love only to have it slip through his fingers. Now he knows the loss Buffy was feeling and OMG! What vulgarian’s doing the “deed” out in public! Get a room or a bush people! Anyhow, hope that your muse got a kick out of making “sex angels” in the snow to delight his twisted tastes. Makes a snowball and tosses it to your muse’s head for the added angst!

Author's Response: ROFL! You know my muse is not only evil, but an exhibitionist , too ... haven't you figured that out yet!?? heehee! Oooo 'sex snow angels' ... hmmmmm ... that gives me an idea ... I can see a light bulb coming on in my blue-eyed-muse's evil brain! :O

Now what can William do? He can't go forward with Buffy ... surely can't go back to Cecily ... where will he turn? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened when he left her and what Buffy changed in the future by coming back to the past... {{hugs}} I so love your reviews! I honestly was laughing so hard at the sex angels thing...LOL!! Too funny! Love it! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 03:20 am Title: Just One Last Dance

ok, u got me. i used to kinda know where the story was going most of the time, or at least figure out how some of the problems would be solved. but now, i have no idea where you are going with this. how can u possibly fix this mess? im hooked, have been for a long time, and now i just cant wait for the next chapter. everytime i see an update i get excited and think its all gonna make sense now, and im still waiting. ive said it before, but u are an amazing writer to keep such interest going in your story. keep it coming! :)

Author's Response: Hi Spuffy6! I'm so glad you're excited for the next chapter! It may take the next two or three ... maybe more, to answer all the questions and get everything to make sense. We're about to turn a corner ... the question is, what's waiting around the bend? Next chapter is up ... enjoy! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Just One Last Dance

That was sweet and bone crushing in one fell swoop. Indeed, what will happen when she gets back to her time, if Rack brings her back. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Everywhere Buffy turns she steps on a landmine ... will she get caught in Rack's magic or has she, indeed, stepped on a butterfly and changed the future? We'll soon find out.. thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 08:08 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

I really don't know what to say about this chapter. I guess I was happy and sad at the same time. I know how Buffy felt but I would be curious to know William's thoughts when he arrived home. I understand why he became upset but he knew she was from a different time.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... Yes, his mind knew, but his heart couldn't stop itself ... it just falls, heedless of reason. He can't go forward with Buffy ... can he really go back to Cecily now that he knows what's possible? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened and what Buffy's actions did to the future... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 06:29 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

How sad! I understand what Buffy was trying to do and yet I completely understand why William would react that way. Jeeze...what is the solution to this anyway? I'm eager to see where you take us.

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! Buffy was trying so hard to open William's eyes to the possiblities of love ... and you know him - his heart just falls so wholly.... he can't go back and he can't go forward with her --- where can he go now? We'll find out over the next few chapters ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 05:56 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

Why do I think that Rack and William are connected.
Those poor souls so lost and sad trying to the right things and just having shit thrown at your face by a monkey.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101 ... Yeah, poor Buffy, every way she turns she steps on landmines ... No wonder she was ready to give up. Perhaps some small thing will make a difference and help her turn a corner ... just don't know what's around the corner... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from everyone! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 03:42 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Well, it must not be over yet. Revenge seems so easy in theory, not so much in the real world. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Your wish is my command ... update posted. Yeah, revenge is easy to think about ... not always so easy to do. Where will Buffy's heart lead her next? Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.09

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 02:48 am Title: Magical Mystery Tour

Interesting dark place there in. Hope she can get away from Rack when all is said and done. And that whether she gets to Hallie or not, she can say hey to William. A little reminder of what she needs...

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat ... will Rack double cross her or do something to twart her? We'll find out ... Perhpas seeing Wiliam, feeling his soul, will give her the strength to continue to fight... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.06.09

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 08:52 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

This have somehow felt like a test for her love, to see if she was willing to give up her happines for Williams. All this talk about "God works in mysteries ways" add to that feeling (God could be very cruel in the old testament). She could talk to Wanda I suppose and mayby get a gift from God for passing the test. I just have to wait and see what you make of this.

Author's Response: God definately has a warpped sense of humor sometimes ... and yeah, can be quite cruel. We'll see where Buffy's heart leads her next ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and sticking with my devil-muse! I always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 08:35 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p1

You must be the Devil :) Having Buffy arrive 10 years late and see a happy William, pure evil. Well I will read the next part and see what happens.

Author's Response: heehee! Well, I have been accused of being the devil before ... and probably will again. I'll take all that as a compliment ... my muse takes pride in his evil-ness! :) Thanks Magnus ... hang in there, this ride is not quite over yet ... {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 04:20 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Turn on the water-works and order up a truckload of ice-cream as comfort food. I swear that happiness may be stolen through a spiteful wish the way things are playing out. I guess her promise to save the children if not Spike is out of sight and mind to Buffy, are the kids happy with mommy dearest? *Scratches head* Somehow, I do not see Cecily as the epitome of motherhood. William in his own way has only loved one woman so that is all he can gauge his feelings on. He is comparable to a pig that eats slop and wallows in muck not knowing the taste and comforts of better things, so he is ignorantly happy, uncaring and unaware of the finer things. Oink, Oink Cecily! Now William can be called a pig but not in the way Buffy meant it toward Spike. So, Buffy is playing out some harlequin romance ideal of “if you love something let it go, if it was meant to be, it will come back to you.” Their soul-mate destiny is being tested to the limits, guess Angel may get another crack at filling in the soul-mate position after all the way your muse is headed. Picks up chains to tie up your muse to reel him back to Spuffy through “tickle torture”. *Grins Evilly*

Author's Response: LOL! Tickle torture may be the only thing that could reel my evil muse in! heehee! You have no idea how prophetic your observations are about William only knowing one kind of 'love' ... that will come into play very soon! I totally love your reviews, Vette! So funny, even though I'm not sure you mean it that way! :O My muse, however, is not evil enough to send Buffy back to Angel ... he takes exception to that remark! :) Will have more soon ... we are getting very close to turning a corner - the question is, what's around the corner? {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 01:26 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

and it keeps twisting! now that rack has stolen what wasn't stolen by hallie, now what?

sniff. buffy's final speech to william - heartbreaking!

looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! Poor Buffy ... she just can't seem to catch a break at all! We'll see where her heart leads he next ... the ride isn't over yet! Hang on! Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 - 11:50 pm Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Nice scene between Buffy and William but it does not seem she is any closer to getting her family back.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... you never know what will make the difference ... hang in there! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 - 11:42 pm Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p1

Another heartbreaking chapter. How many of these does your muse have? I don't know how much more heartbreak Buffy can take. I know I can't take much more. I have never cried so much reading a story.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... he has one really bad one ... then it starts getting a little better, although the angst will continue for a while, it won't be quite this heartwrenching. The corner is about to be turned soon, hang in there. I'm glad I'm not the only one crying ... I really do hate to cry alone! My muse really loves to make us cry ... {{hands you a tissue}}. Thanks for hanging in and stopping in here - don't give up hope! -p4s 2011.06.08

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