[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for responding to my comment. I'll definitely stick with the story to find out what's the deal with Faith and Buffy.
Author's Response: :o)
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just found your fic and it's really different! Faith was the last person I was expecting Buffy to be with! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That's exactly the reaction I was going for!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey, I'm very with the pro-gay story lines, but this was a bit off-putting and I'll tell you why. Buffy comes off as an awful person. It's bad enough when you think she's using a guy sexually, but when you find out it's a girl, that makes it just a little worse. I think because that is such a nightmare scenario for same-sex couples, that notion of "Hey, you're just using me until the right man comes along." It's not sexy, just sort of sad and makes Buffy seem monstrous. Granted, something similar happens in the comic, but I hated it there, too. Sorry to dump on the story. Please don't get discouraged.
Author's Response: Thank you for being honest with me. That was definitely not what I was trying to portray with that chapter. I hope as the story unravals that missunderstanding will be corrected. I really appreciate your insight, I am a very big fan of your work. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Personally I'm a huge fan of Fuffy as well as Spuffy , of course. So this chapter was my cup of tea. I'm guessing the B/F thing isn't serious obviously because this is B/S, but seriously those other reviewers need to chill out. I understand people have a right to their own opinions, but those responses were kind of ignorant. If you have nothing positive to say, and you're not even going to identify yourself, then don't say anything and just stop reading. I'm not a frequent reviewer at all, but those two kind of irked me, so I'm showing full support. Work it, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear from you. It definitely brightened my day! Thanks for your support!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Those reviewers need to calm down. Have they never heard of a plot twist? I'm kind of offended that the idea of two women together made them say ew and poorly comment, since I'm sure they were interested in the sex of the chapter until then and wouldn't have minded if it was a man. And that if Buffy had been canoodling with a guy, they wouldn't immediately assume threesome, but since she's already sleeping with a girl, she must be some crazy sexual deviant (although I'm secretly rooting for a threesome =]). All I'm trying to say is Laur, don't let those uptight reviewers ruin your day. I thought it was very well written and interesting. I hope to see more of it soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, you took the words right out of my mouth. I didn't realize I was going to cause so much controversy since i read a good amount of fics with pairings like this. Thanks for your support!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 08/04/2011 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Yeah, I agree with the previous poster. There really ought to have been a warning on this chapter (and Buffy/Other doesn't cut it, sorry). Ick! Cute premise so it's too bad you had to ruin it. I won't be continuing with this story either. Definitely a let down and a waste of a good idea.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you felt that way. I don't think I ruined it, there is a reason for this direction. Thank you for making me realize I left out the more specific warning.
Date: 08/04/2011 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 2
well, that just killed it. sorry, but i don't believe i will be continuing this story. i was really interested with the first chapter because i love sweet william, but this one made me a bit nauseated. since she's with a woman, i have a feeling it might turn into a threesome at some point and i'm just not into that. best of luck with the rest of it.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty. I'm sorry you won't be continuing it.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story and wonderful description of Wm's bits. Just wanted you to change a word in this sentence "they heard a loan pair" the word loan to lone. The meanings are different and it is such a great story I don't want distraction to it. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it really meant a lot to me. I actually just went in and fixed that and a few other mistakes that I missed before. I'm so glad you liked it, I've gotten some mixed feelings.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited to read more of this story!! I love nerdy/shy William, he makes me melt. Are we going to see a transformation into Spike??
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I love shy William too!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely got potential- I can't wait to read more of this- this is my favourite type of story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I wasn't sure if anyone would and it feels great that there is a interest. More to come tomorrow!!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yes! I'm very interested. Shy!William who mans up is just the fic I'd like to read. Please, please, please write more! Love William fics.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I love human fics, be it William or Spike or both. For this story, Shy William was definitely required. More tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I love what you've written so far, and it definitely has potential. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was hoping I wasn't the only one who thought it had potential! More on the way tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Good start. It does have potential.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It means alot!!!
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