Date: 08/27/2012 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay!! Great chapter! Thanks for the update. I'm glad that Spike and Buffy were finally able to make up. Love the chase Buffy gave Spike!
Date: 08/01/2012 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this story!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, i will try!! :)
Date: 06/18/2012 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet beginning! You paint a vivid picture of cheerful small town life that I find really endearing. It's nice to think of Buffy having such a normal life. I also love what you've done with Dawn. Good use of her character & quite close to the way she was in her first year on the show. "Dawn catastrophe" made me laugh, as did the thought of Xander losing his lunch behind the gazebo. Super cute!
Author's Response: YAY thank you!!! :D
Date: 05/01/2012 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, I wrote horrible, I'm still a little sleepy. Love the story
Date: 01/04/2012 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is silly to turn down the help of a beta who can really help your first fic and get readers interested. I cannot read this the way it is written. It definitely turns the reader off.
Author's Response: I understand that betas are always helpful but since this is my FIRST fic I'd like to do it on my own. I'm sorry if you can't read it but if that's true, then you don't have to. But don't get me wrong, I do appreciate the advice. :)
Date: 12/15/2011 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great write. Enjoying. Please post soon.
Date: 12/15/2011 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I love your description of the town. Sounds a lot like the place where I grew up. I can't wait to see where you take this.
I'd also like to offer my services as a beta. I can go over your Word documents and insert the proper tags so that your formatting will show up here. Please message me through this site if you want me to help.
Again, great start! Enjoying it so far!
Author's Response: hi! i REALLY appreciate your offer to be a beta! but since this is my first fic id like to just kind of do it on my own. Thank you SO SO SO much 4 the offer though! :)))
Date: 12/14/2011 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi there! Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your first chapter. I liked how you described the small town and the dialogue flowed nicely. Can't wait for them to meet! I'm on board! :D
Date: 12/13/2011 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job :)
You are really good if this is your first fanfic :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!