Date: 08/29/2012 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Kinda cute, has potential, though does need some editing.
Date: 04/11/2012 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great 1st story. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that you have a thing for Spillffy stories like I do. Who could resist two Spike/Williams? Can't wait for your next post.
Date: 04/11/2012 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great 1st story. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that you have a thing for Spillffy stories like I do. Who could resist two Spike/Williams? Can't wait for your next post.
Date: 04/08/2012 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter 3
First off, I do like this story. However, you do need help with your grammar and punctuation, like I said in my first review. Feel free to email me if your interested in my help.
There are reviewers on this site that can be pretty vicious when it comes to grammar. I would hate to see that happen to you because this story has so much potential!
Author's Response: First off thanks for the advice andd Im glad you like it. Im just trying to see if I want Buffy pregnate or on off the twins because of the PTB