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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 04:00 am Title: Harvest Moon

Love how very gung-ho Annie is after her trip with Gertie, and Buffy expressing her true opinion to Spike. And the nice little party nod to Avengelyne. A shame we can't bring Lindsey out of hiding. Is almost a complete wonder that Faith hasn't imploded yet. Will have to wait til tomorrow for more. Thanks for sharing. :)

Author's Response: Hey BR! Sorry, not sure how I missed replying to this earilier! I love how Gung-ho Annie is too - it's so like kids to jump onto bandwagons with such zeal! We will bring Lindsey out of hiding soon (I hope!!) I don't have an exact plan on when to bring him back, but I do promise to do it and hopefully it won't be too long. Yes, it is amazing that Faith hasn't imploded yet - Lindsey should have his hands full when he gets here! :) Thanks so much for reading and reveiwing ! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:04 pm Title: Photograph

What a great idea to have Anya give Dawn’s Xander a talking to like only she can!! Thanks for the great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks Melly! Glad you approved and enjoyed. Will have the next, and final, chapter of this story as soon as it's betaed. Unfortunately, my beta-reader has been busy with RL lately and we've fallen behind. Thanks again! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2012 - 10:09 pm Title: Moondance

I think I need to stand under some sprinklers after reading this chapter!! Perfect Spuffy ending to a beautiful Spuffy evening! You even included one of my all-time favorite songs ‘Moondance’!! Thanks for such a wonderful update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Glad it got you steaming and searching for cold sprinklers! :) I just can't help tossing some giggles into their lust-fest ... Glad you enjoyed! And yeah, Moondance is one of my favorite songs, too! I've been waiting for the perfect time to use it. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in. You have no idea how much it means to hear from you. It keeps my muse off the couch!

Reviewer: lmullins Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 02:06 am Title: Harvest Moon

This chapter and the house painting are two of my all time favorite chapters ever. Your ability to develop the character of each member of the family is heartwarming. I could just picture Spike and Billy waiting at the bottom of the stairs. Annie's concern for the environment came in second when she found the perfect dress and needed shoes. Buffy and Dani exchange was priceless. Spike proves there is nothing more sexy than a man that loves his family. I loved this chapter.

Author's Response: Hi lmullins! Annie may be a Gertie-convert, but she is still Buffy's daughter - chance for new shoes is hard to pass by! :) So glad you liked the chapter. Spike having a family, for whatever reason, was something I thought he deserved for all Joss, etal put him through. I'm so glad you find it as sexy as I do! I guess it was his interaction with Dawn that just made me think he'd be such a wonderful dad, and he hasn't disappointed yet! So glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2012 - 12:17 pm Title: Harvest Moon

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!! This chapter is one of my favorites. “She’s a half-baked granola bar with an extra helping of nuts” reminds me of a Buffett song that says we human beings were taken out of the cosmic oven too soon! After meeting Gertie, Annie has certainly become a force of and for Nature hasn’t she? The zeal of the convert! I hope she doesn’t stray too far off the path before her next visit with Gertie. Spike didn’t disappoint with his surprise party. Thanks for such a fun, wonderful update, more soon please

Author's Response: Hey Melly! Oh, a Parrothead, huh?? Love that reference, I vaguely remember that Buffet line - a good one! Oh yes, when children become zealots watch out! :) Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2012 - 07:56 pm Title: Turn, Turn, Turn

I agree with Gertie’s mindset and view of the world. Mmmmm, Spike surprises! Can’t wait!!! Thanks for another terrific update, more soon please.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Gertie's POV - She's definitely not one to put in a 'category'. I mostly just made her ideas up as I went along and just kept trying to think what would make sense to her. She's all about the soul, I think, and how we rely on the Earth to help our souls develop. Got the Spike-fix posted and more to come! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in, Melly!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 - 06:09 am Title: Turn, Turn, Turn

Thanks! I loved Annie's encounter with Mrs. O'Leary. :)

Author's Response: Hi IT! I'm so glad you enjoyed Annie's little foray into the farm life. Got us all a Spike-fix posted and will have an even bigger fix in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2012 - 05:09 am Title: Pale Blue Dot, Part 2

Lovely. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2012 - 05:09 pm Title: Pale Blue Dot, Part 2

I’m so glad you’ve decided to keep Gertie around for a while longer! Buffy responded just like I expected her to and I love how wise Annie is for her young years. I am beginning to suffer from the early stages of Spike withdrawal – will need a fix before too much longer!! Thanks for another wonderful chapter, more soon please.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked Gertie and weren't disappointed about another Spike-less chapter. Annie is like a sponge, just wanting to learn everything she can, and religion isn't really anything that's been talked about at home, so this is all wondrous to her. Got you a Spike fix posted and will have an even better one next! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in Melly! Appreciate you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2012 - 04:35 am Title: Pale Blue Dot, Part 1

Poor little overwhelmed Annie. Sure is a lot to take in, and that's just her house before we even get to the earth magic stuff. :) I think she will fit in quite nicely with the rest of the kooks. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! I do feel a bit bad for Annie. Dawn was much older than Annie is when she met Gertie in her world, so this is a bit overwhelming for our girl. I do think that Gertie will be a wonderful addition to the kooks in SunnyD - can't have too many opposites! :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, BR!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2012 - 11:51 am Title: Pale Blue Dot, Part 1

I don’t suppose Gertie would need a house sitter when she visits Sunnydale?!! I really loved Billy’s dialogue with the computer – it sounded just like his father would have at that age (or even now!) Thanks for another wonderful update, more soon please.

Author's Response: I know, right? My imagination just went wild with where this hippie witch might live and how she'd live. We'll learn more about her in the next chapter. She's not one to be labeled, I can tell you that. I'm glad the description of the house didn't bore you! I was indulging my muse, which, I sort of have to - he's so cute and I kinda need him (and love him, heehee!) ! :) Glad you liked Billy's dialogue with the computer - I was afraid he'd sound a little 'multiple personality', but I think you're right - he is Spike's (and perhaps more so: William's) son all the way. Will have more as soon as I can. My beta reader is getting married this week. I usually try to keep a few chapter 'buffer' for things like this (or for when my muse decides to watch the Olympics instead of write), but I only have one more ready (because we indulged in watching half-naked men swimming and tumbling and stuff during the Olympics). Trying to space the chapters out so there isn't a really long delay in here anywhere. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, Melly! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 - 12:18 pm Title: Fortune Favors the Brave

I will never again be able to see a commercial or buy a pack of M&M’s without the vision of ‘Fornicating M&Ms’ in my head!! I think this chapter may be my favorite as well!! I really love the relationship Spike has with the children and how you write his conversations with Billy. I’m really looking forward to Buffy and Annie meeting Gertie Greenbrier (what a great name!) thanks for another brilliant update, more soon please.

Author's Response: LOL! Of course Spike would come up with Fornicating M&Ms, wouldn't he!?? He's so randy! So glad you liked this chapter - I really didn't know when I started it that Spike would find a way to shut down SHRUG (although I knew he and the kids would be painting the house). I sooo love Spike as a dad. He's so earnest and tries so hard, I think, to impart wisdom in a gentle way. Not that kids usually listen, but maybe some of it will get through to them so they don't make all the same mistakes he did (we all do?) when he was young. The more I write Billy, the more I adore him. I knew, of course, that I'd love him when he was older and looking a lot like his dad, but it's happened a whole lot sooner than I anticipated. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, Melly! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 - 06:16 am Title: Fortune Favors the Brave

Love the Dame Edna picks! lol

Your Spike-Billy relationship is beautiful. Spike stays so very 'Spike' but is tender, understanding and wise at the same time.

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Hi IT! Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the Spike-Billy relationship. I always thought Spike would be an awesome dad. I think he really relates so much to his tender-hearted son and wants to guide his boy away from the mistakes he made as a boy and young man. Hopefully, Spike's gentle guidance will keep Billy from suffering too much heartbreak ... but I think that tender heart will be tested over his life, just like Spike's has been. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 - 03:45 am Title: Fortune Favors the Brave

A genius approach. Loved picturing Dame Edna, too. Update soon!

Author's Response: HI BR! Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed Spike's master plan! heehee! Thanks for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 07:06 pm Title: I'll Be There for You

Hey, Passion.
I have to admit, I've lurked this entire story so far. *hangs head in shame* But you need to know that your stories have kept me sane in the last year while going through a separation, parenting my two kiddies and going to grad school. I may not have reviewed this latest installment in the Unexpected Universe, but I still LOVE your work. Thanks for sharing your passion, your talent and your wit. *hugs*

Author's Response: Hi IT! I'm so glad you decided to stop in and say hello! It really means a lot to hear from everyone, but hearing that my story has made some difference in your life is humbling. I'm glad that you can find a little escape from the insanity here. Thanks for reading and I hope you stop in again!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2012 - 05:33 pm Title: I'll Be There for You

Once again I’m amazed at how much I really like Dawn in this fic!! Of course, your evil muse just had to make me worry about Annie being a slayer didn’t he? Can’t wait for Spike to take on Mrs. Katz and her minions in SHRUG! Thanks for another great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! I'm so glad you like Dawn. I think when we meet Gertie that we may find some of where she's gotten her more reflective, perhaps zen-like, attitude. I really hope you like Spike's solution to SHRUG and how he takes care of Mrs. Katz ... It's turned out to be one of my very favorite chapters in the whole verse.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 - 04:27 pm Title: Homeward Bound

Really love how well Dawn’s introduction to the family went and especially her meeting with Annie!! Can’t wait to read more about their time together!! Thanks for the great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Got more of Dawn and Annie for you. Hopefully they can both make each other feel a little less freakish. Thanks for reading and stopping in!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2012 - 06:50 pm Title: Homeward Bound

What a happy reunion. I think they may have to make a chart for Dawn so she understands where everyone comes from, too! I think there will be many more visits in the future. Always nice when the family can expand. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey BR! Yeah, it would definitely help to have a chart or graph or something to keep track of everyone! :D I'm sure Dawn will be back in the future ... Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping in!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2012 - 06:23 pm Title: My Old Friend

Glad that Dawn isn't a Giant. Sad that Xander is still so broken. Guess the comic-verse benefits from Buffy being the one that really is messed up. Seems like Dawn really does have the whole living thing figured out. I wonder if she'll want to come back to her world, or if she'll just want to stay in the unexpected verse. Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey BR! I've never read the comics, but knew that Dawn and Xander were together in them; that's all I know. When they turn Spuffy, then perhaps I'll read them. I think Dawn's spent a lot of time figuring life out and the mentors she's had, from Willow and Giles to her new friends, Gertie and Shiro (who we will meet - Gertie soon and Shiro later), have helped her a lot as well. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and stopping in!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2012 - 09:28 pm Title: My Old Friend

Loved this chapter!! You have even made me like Dawn and I very seldom ever like her in any fics and I never liked her in the series. It will be really cool if she can teach Annie how to harness her powers before she returns to her dimension (if she returns?). Thanks for such a wonderful update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! There was only one scene that I liked Dawn in during the show - the one where she was hiding with Spike in the tunnels when Glory attacked Tara - the rest of the time she was nothing but an annoyance. That was the main reason, when I started this, that I did not name Annie Dawn - I wanted no confusion -Annie is not Dawn! LOL! I think she did start showing a bit of maturity at the end of the series - not enough, but some ... I just took that small sliver of hope and let it blossom for my Dawn. Glad you like her. Will try to update more quickly next time, my muse took a break during the Olympics and I've gotten a little behind in writing, but hopefully can get going again now. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2012 - 12:03 am Title: Stuck in the Middle With You

Love our odd couple. Can't wait to see the reunion. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! Xander makes a better 'straight-man' (pun intended) for Spike than Angel did, I think. Almost to easy, but gotta love them together. We got glimpses of it in the Whedonverse, but not enough ... Got more for ya! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2012 - 12:08 pm Title: Stuck in the Middle With You

The series really missed the boat on not having this kind of relationship between Spike and Xander – friends in spite of themselves. So glad to learn it was Xander in the relationship with Dawn and not Spike! Thanks for another great update and I had already planned to follow you on EF but I certainly hope that doesn’t become necessary. More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Oh, I agree! There were flashes of what could've been between Spike and Xander, but the writers never let Xander loosen up enough (about vamps in general and Spike in particular) to really get to this kind of snarking friendship. I honestly have a mental problem with either Xander or Spike in a relationship with Dawn, but I could accept Xander better than Spike in that role. Like for Spike, Dawn will always be 14 to me! Maybe if I'd read the comics, I could see her differently. I also hope TSR stays up. I really love it here. Thanks much!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2012 - 05:50 pm Title: Bromance

I have not review in awhile, but I have never quit reading. Anya Cracks me up. I am looking forward to Spike's reaction when he sees Dawn. You do a woncerful job keeping us hooked even with a letup on all the angst. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi Laura! I'm so glad you're still reading and enjoying the story! Glad it's still interesting, even if they aren't fighting for their lives. Stop in more often! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2012 - 11:41 am Title: Bromance

I thought of Anya while watching the diving competition in the Olympics last night – she would have enjoyed seeing those guys in their speedos even more than me!! Loved how Xander saved them with his Mr. Inspector routine! Thanks for another great update. More soon please.

Author's Response: Xander totally saved the day! Not that Spike would ever admit that, of course! :D Oh yes, hot guys in speedos! Yum! While I was on vacation, 'Sammy' pointed out that the name of the Olympics is quite deceiving: XXX Olympics ... he got quite excited about it for a minute, until he turned it on and found them playing soccer and not doing anything remotely 'Triple-X-rated'. :O Anya, I think, would've had that same reaction. heehee! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, Melly.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2012 - 03:46 am Title: Bromance

Love them two fellas out and about. Wonder how Dawn will react to them and what the Xander from this universe is up to? Would be kind of interesting if he were dating Dawn like in the comic books. :) Could get a touch interesting. Update soon!

Author's Response: Ooooo ... what has Dawn been up to? And will Spike and Xander kill each other before they get to find out? :D We'll find out soon! Thanks soo much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you, BR!

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