Date: 11/05/2012 - 03:05 am Title: Surrogate.
I don't know how to add on to my message, but just wanted to reply to your response.
'You wicked wicked girl'
Love it,
Mel
x
Author's Response: Thanks for the idea. People needed to know how that came about. Spuffyness next chapter. I can't wait anymore either!
Date: 11/05/2012 - 01:55 am Title: Surrogate.
Tease
I love it! lol
I thought this chapter was really good and it was / is important to know why Rupert was going along with the charade. I do hope there will be more Rupert / Spike back story, I think it will give more to the over all story in the end as I am sure there is much more between them.
I also love that you get to tease us a little longer and our little perverted minds have to still keep waiting hee hee
Great job sweetie and as always I cannot wait for more.
x
Author's Response: Ha. I'm just as preverted as the rest of you. I can't wait anymore so next chapter will have some spuffyness. Not sure if I'll go all the way...I'll go wherever my muse wants to take me.
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2012 - 08:50 pm Title: Surrogate.
interesting! So hes bad but he still has a heart! hmmm Im really liking were your going with this! Cant wait to see whats next.
Author's Response: Thanks Spikesgurl! He has a heart for certain things. Hopefully he'll have one for Buffy. I can't wait to see whats next in your story! I'll be updating this next weekend. I'm doing too much studying right now.
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2012 - 07:52 am Title: Chokehold.
(: Enjoying bad boy Spike and inexperienced Buffy! Update soon please!!!
Author's Response: Hey, Spikesgurl!
I'm happy you like my story. I love evil Spike and inexperienced Buffy. My next chapter is to my beta now. I will update as soon as I get it back! Thansk for reviewing. :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 05:35 pm Title: Chokehold.
What a tease of a chapter! I absolutely loved it and I can't wait for another update. You are keeping me guessing about where this story will go in the long term and I am so excited for things to keep moving along!
Author's Response: Ha. Sorry to tease you. I really wanted to get a chapter out. I will be done with school in Febuary so I'll have so much time to write. I just sent another chapter to my beta. It will be another tease, unfortunetly, but I appreciate you reviewing and enjoying the chapters so much!
Thanks, Michele!
Oh and this story will be taking alot of turns. So many places for it to go long term. Hope you're along for the ride.
Date: 11/03/2012 - 04:56 pm Title: Chokehold.
Hey sweetie...Your Back!!!!
I loved loved LOVED this chapter.
I can see that Gunn is gonna get himself into big trouble soon. Poor Giles wonder how his demons are troubling him. I think he is entirely to cleaver to cave.
Then Buffy oh dearie me!!
You so have us all hanging for the next chapter with the promise of smutty goodness. Though I think now would be hilarious for you to string us a long with a Giles back story chapter or something, only cause we all want Spuffy naughtiness so badly.
Glad your back babe.
Keep up the awesome work ;-)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. It was shorter but I did put some plot builders in there and the hope of some smut. A Rupert back story is a good idea. I was going to do that later, but maybe I will tease my readers. Thanks so much for all your support. xx
Author's Response: Just a head up- You did it to yourself LOL. I wrote a small backstory on how Rupert started playing Spike's dad. :-) It's to my beta now so will be updated soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2012 - 09:02 am Title: Coach.
weres my update from my favourite fic ????
Author's Response: Hey Nikki,
I'm sorry to make you wait. And thank you so much for such a flattering review. I've been very busy with studying and haven't had time to type. I don't have a writers block, my bunnies are running rampid so that's not the reason for the delay. Just need to find time away from my stupid school work.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2012 - 03:11 am Title: Coach.
What a great chapter! It makes me really want to see what happens next with these two crazy kids! I hope that you can update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, Michele. I hope I can update soon, too. School is getting more stressful and harder for juggling writing as well.
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2012 - 07:37 pm Title: Coach.
so happy you updated! can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you, Rachel! :-)
Date: 10/15/2012 - 06:48 am Title: Coach.
It was worth waiting for but please, update soon ! I can't wait for the spuffy smut to actually happen ;)
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can, Lucy. Unfortunetly I'm very busy this weekend when I normally write. I will write ASAP. It's all in my head just need to type.
Date: 10/14/2012 - 06:58 pm Title: Coach.
Thank You
Author's Response: No. Thank you! :-)
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2012 - 04:17 pm Title: Coach.
Love it. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Meaghen. More will come next week.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2012 - 12:18 am Title: Bartender.
I'm dying for an update. I love this story.
Author's Response: Hey Jaime! I was going to write today, but I'm on call and I have six surgeries to do today. I will write tomorrow! I have it all in my head; just need to get it typed. You will see an update very soon. Sorry to keep you waiting!
Date: 10/05/2012 - 06:57 am Title: Bartender.
I so want some spuffy smut ! How can Buffy resist him ? ;)
Author's Response: Ha, Lucy. It's gonna be a bit for them. I will write a smutty one-shot and post just for you!
Author's Response: You are gonna love the end of the new chapter! It is sent to my beta so as soon as I get it back it'll be posted.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2012 - 05:08 am Title: Bartender.
Another great chapter. I'm so glad that Spike is still attracted to her innocence, even when she is dressed otherwise. He has such a lack of respect for women that it seems that as soon as she sleeps with him he will dump her. She will just be like any other woman to him. I'm so glad that they didn't do anything sexual in this chapter . It would have been just a little too disgusting after all the action he already got. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Lambean. I always get happy when I hear you've enjoyed it. And yes, that would have been sleezy. I would never give Buffy dirty seconds. I am going to write tomorrow. It's all up there in my head; just need to not be working so I can write!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2012 - 07:16 am Title: Bartender.
Oh yay another update and it had Spuffy. I love Spike's reaction to how Buffy was dressed. I'm sure it was hard for him not to take her then. I wonder how long Buffy is gonna make him wait.
Author's Response: Thanks for being such a loyal reader/reviewer. You're such a sweetie. I'm not sure how long she's gonna make him wait. I get impatient myself lol. I want spuffy smut too!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2012 - 04:11 am Title: Whiskey.
Love this story. Like the fact that is not the usual lovey dovey story. Keep up the constant updating i love that about a author, you rock.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hotness. I'm glad you're enjoying the darkness. Hope that continues! I'm trying me best to keep the updates coming. I'll be writing on Saturday. :-)
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2012 - 08:09 pm Title: Ethan.
I'm really loving this story, even if I do miss your other ones, I'm happy you're working on this. I love this type of bad boy Spike, yet I can't help but hope he softens - just a little - for Buffy. Keep up the amazing work. Forever a faithful reader of yours.
Author's Response: Sweetie, that is so nice! My other WIPS will all be worked on, starting in February. I don't have time with school for all of them right now. I don't want to give anything away- but I will say, if you are ready for a long ride, you won't be disapointed. Things will get better-then harder-then better. LOL. It should be fun. Thanks again, Ashley. This review really means alot to me.
Date: 10/02/2012 - 04:08 pm Title: Ethan.
Unfortunately, there are some readers that want all unicorns and lollipops. If that was the case, I personally would've stopped reading a long time ago. I take off my hat to any writer that is willing to go balls to the wall and write from the gut. *tipping hat* ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not thinking too much. I just sit infront of my computer and let the muse take me. So far it's working. Thanks for your support, BBE. It means alot!!-----impatiently awaiting for you to update today.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2012 - 12:27 pm Title: Ethan.
I think it's interesting that you made Ethan Spike's dad. I really get now that Spike never has had anybody really love him. It has effected the way his life has been. Spike is already falling for Buffy. Now he is thinking of her with another girl and that's a sign that he has feelings for her. Spike just doesn't realize it because he has never felt that way about anybody before. I'm glad you have found your muse again. I would hate for you to have drop this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your support, Jaime. I will still be going into more depth on his past; still need to mention his mother. Ethan does care for spike. It's more of a business arrangement, though. He loves his son, but spike is also just insurance. I will be developing their relationship so you'll see more of that. Talk to you soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2012 - 11:39 pm Title: Ethan.
Actually, I´m waiting for the demon that stuffs a soul into this Spike :-)
Author's Response: It will be some time for that. But I really appreciate you reading and I'm so glad you're giving the fic a chance. If spike was to become innocent so fast then the story would have to end suddenly. I hope I will continue to keep your interest. Thanks, angel.
Date: 10/01/2012 - 06:45 am Title: Ethan.
Aaaahhhhh, when will the spuffy smut happen? You're killing me ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing, Lucy. :-) the spuffy smut will be coming... Need to work up to it. I will add some fantasy thoughts to appease you because it's gonna take time for spike to seduce Buffy. She is a good girl after all. I hope you don't mind the smut with Ethan or spike/other. I want this story to be like a rated r movie, you know? All the characters are eventually gonna be having a good time. Thanks again, honey.
Date: 10/01/2012 - 05:38 am Title: Ethan.
Back again!!!
This chapter is a little different from the others however I did really like it...except too short. You know how much I love your story and I think you just want me to beg for more.
Which I so totally will......Please please please PLEASE?????? Pretty pretty please????? hee hee
Gotta love the shameless begging.
You bought a bit of light into the story showing Spike isn't just some murdering jackass (don't worry I love him anyway / just explaining his character) I found the joking with Oz to be a good addition now. Showing yes there is more to him. Yet you still managed to show us his still bad ass by using the waitress (is it Faith?) Then again it was Buffy he was thinking of, I am thinking obsession is gonna turn all consuming and he might get a little lost somewhere?
Then again I might be completely bonkers and far off base.
I was anticipating when Oz would wanna make a play for Willow. Oh dear these girlies are in for a hell of a ride with these two aren't they?
Though I think the boys are gonna get more than they bargain for. I do not for one second think Buffy and Willow are all kitty cats and rainbows, hell I wasn't at 16 either. I really hope these two girls will bring a little kick ass attitude and show these Men a thing or two about their assumption on the sweet innocent little virgin girls.
Ooh man I need more soon, please don't leave me hanging.
Great job babe.
Talk soon,
Mel
x
Author's Response: Melissa! It was a bit different; I thought it was time to introduce Ethan into the story and also wanted to show again that spike, when he is with his friend, can be just a regular guy. His soul is not completely condemned. Good call on oz and willow. I love those two together and can't wait to develop those two. You know as we'll as me though that there's a way to go. Something tells me that you'll enjoy the ride.
If I have time tomorrow night then I will write. If not then definetly on Saturday. Xx
Date: 10/01/2012 - 05:18 am Title: Joyce II
Hello again darling
what I said keep your chin up and remember to keep smiling. :-)
As you can all see from the reviews left there are so many of us that adore your story and would be shattered for it to be left incomplete due to another persons view point.
Now on to this chapter...
Joyce has just supplied the ultimate in 'forbidden fruit' being told no and it's for your own good at 16 without explanation is a neon flashing light with stars and rainbows shooting all over the place.
ooh ooh I cannot wait for more.
Sorry for short review but I am desperate to get to the next chapter.
Thank you for releasing two.
YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
HUGS
x
Author's Response: Hey, sweetie. Thanks so much for all of the encouragement! I was so happy that so many readers came through for me. Xx
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2012 - 12:17 am Title: Ethan.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, meaghen! :-)
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