[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 06:52 pm Title: Joyce II
To short need more love seein this updated great fix keep goin :-)
Author's Response: Next chapter has been sent to my beta. 1200 words. :-) It'll be updated soon. Thanks for your reviews, Nikki.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:34 pm Title: Joyce II
Oh no Joyce. By forbidding Buffy to see him without explaining why is gonna make him irresistible to a teenage girl. Or an adult woman for that matter because who in World really wants to be told what to do or who to see just because someone else says so..Good job!
Author's Response: I thought about Joyce letting Buffy know what was said, but I would think it would be awkward for her. I'm not sure though because I don't have children. Anyway, it helped for what I want with the plot. She has made her want Spike even more. Thanks again, Lambean.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:22 pm Title: Joyce II
I really like the story so don't let anything ruin your confidence. Please continue :) I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for stopping in, Laura. You and others have helped the muse so much. My next chapter is already to my beta.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:15 pm Title: Joyce.
Wow, that was some intense confrontation. It takes a pretty wicked guy to talk to a mom like that. You are very good at writing a very "bad" Spike. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are continuing to read this, Lambean. I hope I explained this to you in the email. Glad you're liking my bad Spike. I'm really trying to write something different, and him not getting along with Joyce is a new one.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 04:58 pm Title: Joyce II
I agree with everyone else. I don't usually leave reviews because I get so into reading the stories that I just hop from one story to another story. But here's a review for ya, your story is great. I love seeing this type of Spike all badass but you know somewhere deep inside him he's actually liking this sweet, innocent girl and it's probably not just because he wants to get into her pants, but of course that's all he thinks it is for now. Don't let mean or bad reviews deter you from writing your story. This is YOUR story, nobody elses, write it how YOU want. I check back everyday to look for an update from you, I think it's great. A bunch of other people think it's great, so who cares what someone else says because there are people out there who love it. This chapter was a little short for my liking, but I can see why it would be if you lost some of your spark from some mean review. Believe in yourself and the reviews from people who like the story, keep going, you're amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! This review was very insipring to read. Really. Thank you so so much, Meaghen.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 04:51 pm Title: Joyce.
I think it's fine how it is and pretty interesting. It's always nice to see a more darker human Spike rather than everything starting out nice and happy. If that made any sense.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my dark Spike. I love evil Spike and because it's all human, well I made him as evil as possible for still having a conscience. Thanks so much.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 04:50 pm Title: Joyce II
I love this story. Don't let people get you down. Please keep updating. Pretty please?
Author's Response: Thank you, Rachel. My muse has definitely gotten the boost it needed. Thanks to you and others. My next chapter is already sent to my beta.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 03:23 pm Title: Joyce II
What made this PM kill your muse?
This is one of my fave stories. I check hoping it's updated every day.
I like that Buffy is going back to see Spike at Willies.
Author's Response: Jaime! Thanks so much for being a constant reviewer. The email was just really harsh. I am a new writer and my confidence is easily shattered.
Thanks to you ,and others, I have brushed it off. The next chapter is already off to my beta. I'm so flattered that you check everyday for an update and it's one of your favorites! I can't promise everyday, but I'm hoping to update once a week. Next chapter will be up, though, as soon as I get it back from beta.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 02:00 pm Title: Joyce II
I was so preachy standing on my soapbox that I forgot to comment on the chapter. Taking the whole 'it's my way or the highway' with someone never works. Joyce is just pushing Buffy into Spike's arms. Not good (well, in her perspective)
Author's Response: Exactly. Buffy is a teenager and it's silly for Joyce to think that her lecture would get through to her. Thanks so much, bbe!!
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 02:00 pm Title: Joyce II
I'm interested to know where you are going with this story. Please remember that you won't make everyone happy, even when writing. When I discovered fan fiction a couple of years ago, I was amazed at the talent of most writers. Keep up the good work! If you still need a beta, I would be willing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragment, merryreader. I will continue to write. My muse is doing much better with the help of you and others. And thank you, but I have a beta. Really appreciate the offer though.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 01:53 pm Title: Joyce II
(A PM--private message?) Sweetie, don't let anyone deter you. I know it can be hard, every writer has their ups and downs. (Not making this about me, but I've had many myself.) If you enjoy writing, then write. Don't do it for reviews, or for others' approval, do it for you. Not everyone will enjoy your writing or the direction you are taking in a story, but for every one of those readers there are a dozen who are loving what you are doing. I'm sorry that someone, instead of just stop reading, decided they needed to critize and or insult you or your story. Don't let them get to you. I for one am enjoying your story. Keep writing!!! *big huggers* BBE
Author's Response: I get butterflies at the thought of you reading and enjoying my story. Seriously. You must know how much I adore you and your writing and it just--it's amazing to me that you like something of mine. I just sent the next chapter to my beta. :-) Thanks, BBE!
Date: 09/30/2012 - 01:34 pm Title: Joyce II
Don't let the bad reviews get you down. This story has been awesome so far and by the sounds of it, things are about to get better.
I let a couple of bad reviews get to me and I've only just got back into writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, basketcase. I appreciate all of your help and encouragment.
Date: 09/30/2012 - 12:42 pm Title: Joyce II
That´s really quite different story.... I was surprised by Spike´s words to Joyce. That´s gonna be difficult. Ican´t wait for another chapter. Please, go on.
Author's Response: Thanks, Andrea. I didn't want the typical Spike and Joyce relationship. He didn't grow up with a loving Mother like William in the show did. So, that changed him. I'm started on the next chapter already. Update will be soon. Hope to talk to you again.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2012 - 12:30 pm Title: Joyce II
I am really enjoying this story. It's a different view of Spike & Buffy and I' m really waiting to see if she changes him, or if he crupts her...maybe a bit of both. Tell the muse to fight back. Don't let one bad apple ruin the story for the rest of us.....we're waiting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, crazylife. My muse is fighting! I'm already started on the next chapter. appreciate you letting me know you're enjoying. Hope to talk to you next time.
Date: 09/29/2012 - 09:57 pm Title: Joyce.
I like that new kind of Spike-Joyce relationship... it's refreshing !
Author's Response: Hey, Lucy. :-) I wanted to give them a different relationship. One that isn't predictable. Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2012 - 01:11 pm Title: Joyce.
I love this story and where it could go, please please continue :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I will attempt to write very soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2012 - 09:00 pm Title: Joyce.
I just read your response to me. This is interesting. Spike has had a different life experiece then. I can accept that. It reminds me of how Buffy was in The Wish. She was like another character because she had such a different life.
Author's Response: Exactly. I will mention his past more in the next chapter. My muse was crushed by a PM, so I'm trying to pick it back up.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2012 - 02:34 pm Title: Joyce.
Oh WOW!!
Jeez Spike has balls huh?
I enjoyed learning more details of Spikes realizations that his into Buffy, even if he's deluding himself into thinking he only wants to 'shag her'. I adored his ballsy show down with Joyce. Spike is a bad ass! He isn't meant to be redeemable....yet? He just met Buffy, so therefore hes still a mean cold killer and a bit of a jackass.
Oh and a MAN!!! lol
Am I right in assuming we still have a long complicated and involving story ahead of us?
I just feel the previous reviewer is awaiting the ending with spuffyness but from my view point I get the feeling we are in for a longer tale but 'One hell of a ride'.
Great job sweetie
P.s More Please... with sprinkles on top ;-)
Author's Response: My adoration for you continues, Melissa. Right now he thinks he's all tough and somewhat of a womanizer. But that's all he knows. Maybe there will be a sweetie that will show him the way? OR...not. heh heh heh. You are right in assuming that there will be a long involved story ahead. Spike has a way to go...many ups and downs await him. Thanks so much! I am writing right now. :-) Update will be soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2012 - 02:01 pm Title: Joyce.
I know Spike is supposed to be badass and evil but I think for him to talk like that to Joyce if OOC. Even when he was evil on the show he was nice to her. I really don't get what he got out of it. I know that his dad runs the town. I would think that at least playing nice with Buffy's mom would make things easier.
I don't even think Spike sleeping with another girl at this point is OOC because he isn't in love with Buffy yet.
I still love the story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hey, jaime. thanks for voicing your concern. the Spike in this story did not have the chance, like william, to grow up with a loving mother/family. he didnt learn how to speak properly to a mother figure. i planned to mention more about his mother in the next chapter. Spike has a long way to go an things will get harder before they get easy. i hope you can stay on for the ride and continue to let me know how you feel.
i will be writing this weekend.
Author's Response: I hope that explained it for you, Jaime?
Date: 09/26/2012 - 10:34 am Title: Whiskey.
Love seein this update jus wana b greedy an read the whole story right now :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Nikki!!! Your reviews help me write faster. :-)
Date: 09/26/2012 - 12:42 am Title: Joyce.
Totally different twist having Spike not caring about Joyce. Great job!
Author's Response: That's what I was going for. Thanks bbe!
Date: 09/23/2012 - 12:33 am Title: Melissa.
Hi again,
Yes I noticed you have named your chapters and I love when an author does that.
Especially this story where I have a chapter named after ME!!!!!!
An it's chapter 7 (My fav number)
So BIG HAPPY!!!! :-)
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked that and it's cool it's the chapter of your favorite number. I love reading your comments. Thanks so much. Talk to you next time.
Date: 09/22/2012 - 05:41 pm Title: Murder.
Hi hun,
Sorry it has taken me so long to review. I read this the day you released it but due to commitments was unable to post until now. (When today I re-read again...twice)
hee hee
I'm hooked what can I say? ;-)
Another fantastic chapter.
And 'Oh My!' Isn't Spike a blood thirsty lil bugger?
I love how you have painted this picture for us. Divulging into his mind explaining his reactions - his excitement, his joy, his arousal and thrill of his hunt - his kill. For us to be able to see into his character and perhaps into his soul allowing us to get a true feel for this story. For him! I get the sense Spike perhaps is trying to prove himself or his worth to his father. So suspect more will come later from this? Also WOW Descriptive bloody death scene love!!
(or should it be luv?)
I believe poor innocent little Buffy is in for some interesting twists and turns. Spike is obviously a master in the art of women possible, manipulation and I can just imagine poor lil Buffs head will soon be spinnin' trying to keep up. Though I have faith that in the end this powerhouse will no doubt be able to hold her own and dish out her own brand of attitude, snark,pack a punch and likely 'slay' him where he stands.
Yeah I really cannot wait for more.
Wonderful job as usual darling and I'll be back to bug you for more. :-) :-)
melissa (girlie_mel)
Author's Response: I adore you. How did you know I was wondering about you? I was thinking, 'Melissa hasn't reviewed. What if she didn't like it?'
I really want to portray Spike as a sick criminal. He's been killing since he was twelve; he enjoys killing. So, you could say, he is evil with a soul. He has a conscience though, so he does know right from wrong. Does he enjoy killing because it's all he knows or deep down does he really enjoy it for his own reasons? Time will tell.
I'm glad you liekd that scene. I wanted to make it more descriptive but was worried I'd scare people off. I can be pretty morbid. I'm happy you noticed that he gets off on the hunt-the kill. Very good.
Buffy is in for alot! She will be kept in the dark, but secrets can't be kept forever. Her character is really going to develop as the story goes on. Spike is so bad, just in the way he acts with her, that it's bound to rub off.
I have the ninth chapter sent out for a second read so I'm just waiting for it to be returned.
You are so sweet and thank you so much for your consistant reviews. They make me so chipper.
Author's Response: And did you notice I named the chapter after you. ;-) Also, I have no idea what's with the backslashes. I did not type them out...wierd.
Author's Response: Okay. Backslashes are only there when I'm in 'response mode' for some odd reason. So you wouldn't see them. I'm not crazy. LOL
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2012 - 07:02 am Title: Murder.
OK, she's 16 but come on, that's Spike !! ;)
Author's Response: Exactly!...a very naughty Spike. Thanks again, Lucy!
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2012 - 04:21 am Title: Murder.
This is turning even darker than I thought it would, and I'm interested to see how Spike will reform (if he even will!). Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: This is gonna get dark...Hope you like dark fics? I'll be writing either tonight or tomorrow. It's all in my head just gotta type. Thanks for stopping in, Michele. I really appreciate it.
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