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Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2012 - 12:36 am Title: You Don’t Care About Us

I really enjoyed Dawns POV in this chapter. Like I said, spuffy really need to worry about their own feelings right now. It looks like Dawn has Janice right now and she can stay and cool down with her.

I do want to hit Buffy over the head. She can be so bipolar. I'm looking forward to the angst that will come up because of this chapter.

Update soon.

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can :)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 10:42 pm Title: This Picture

Angst is definetly for me so bring it on. Dawn can act like such a child at times, and thats a compliment to your writing because thats exactly how she'd act. Spike and Buffy are adults and they are not related by blood-and if they were I'd still be okay with it, LOL, just cause it's fiction. Anything can happen in fiction.

Anyway, Dawn needs to realize they can make their own decisions. Buffy and Spike need to talk about it themselves though. They need to come to terms with everything, not worry what Dawn thinks.

Author's Response: Glad you like the angst, I know my favourite angsty stories tend to give me an ache in my chest and thats when I know they've really made me feel something. It doesn't really happen with any other genre, so maybe thats why I lean towards the angst. I'm thrilled with all your compliments about the story and characters, thank you so much for reading :) x

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 10:37 pm Title: I'll Be Yours

Holy Heck, that was so f'ing hot. You're a wonderful smut writer. It was sexy and romantic and....gah...seriously need my hubby to come home. Too much information?

Really good cliff you have, too. What is Dawn going to think?

I haven't stopped reading, just been busy!

Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you enjoyed the Chapter as much as you did! Lovely reviews from you so far :) x

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 10:33 pm Title: Speak In Tongues

I'm really enjoying the plot to this story. And yay for Spuffy smutt!!

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 10:32 pm Title: Teenage Angst

Ouch. Buffy blaming Dawn for their Mother's death was harsh. I can kind of understand it, though. Dawn is closing herself off and starting to get into trouble. Buffy doesn't know how to deal with the death either. Someone was bound to snap like that.

I'm glad they connected at the end of the chapter. I'm looking forward to reading where that goes.

Author's Response: I'm glad you can see both sides of it, they're both hurting, but in different ways and thats causing the clash. Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2012 - 10:51 am Title: This Picture

Buffy has a martyr complex. To bad she doesn't realize that love doesn't come along that often and when you find it you hold on to it. Her mother's death should have taught her that life doesn't last long. Not nearly long enough. So to throw away love? Especially to make others happy? It's the worst thing you can do.

Author's Response: I agree completely with everything you've said, even as I'm writing her I want to shake her! But I meet people all the time like the Buffy in my story, too many people let the good things slip through their fingers for one reason or another and come to regret it, even I am guilty of this in the past. Thank you for an insightful review :)

Reviewer: PunkittenSIn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 - 04:43 am Title: I'll Be Yours

Ha! Love the surprise ending, cant wait for the next update. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, another update coming at the end of the week!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 - 06:00 am Title: I'll Be Yours

I thought it would be Dawn. That was an evil cliffhanger though.

Author's Response: I do like to be evil!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2012 - 11:33 pm Title: Speak In Tongues

I loved the angst mixed in with a little smut.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2012 - 10:18 pm Title: Teenage Angst

It's good to see Buffy and Dawn made up for now. I can't imagine being in Buffy's position right now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 - 07:11 am Title: Breathe Underwater

I know what it's like to have panic attacks. I feel So bad for all of them. I love this story.

Author's Response: I used to have them too, which is why I glossed over it a little as its not a pleasant thing to remember, but I tried to describe how I felt briefly. I'm glad you like this story, that's a lovely thing to hear! I hope to post an update soon, but at the latest this weekend!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 11:58 pm Title: Breathe Underwater

Dawn is reallu taking the death of her mother the hardest. I hope that either Spike or Buffy or Giles says the right thing soon. Because they all need eachother. Poor Giles is drinking himself to death.

Author's Response: If you keep reading there will be a little hope for Dawn soon, but unfortunetly there are more downs coming with ups so its not smooth sailing for any of them!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 11:51 pm Title: Swallow

I don't know how I felt about this chapter...I think Dawn was so in the right to tell those people off. I know I would do the same thing. I didn't like that Buffy wasn't sticking up for her...

Can you explain to me what you were meaning. Maybe I'll understand it better.

Author's Response: My meaning I guess is to show two different ways of dealing with grief that are neither wrong or right but have consequences when done side by side.. They're not working together at the moment...Buffy's trying to make Dawn act like her, and vice versa, but they're different people and are dealing with the loss differently, unfortunetly because their processess are so opposite they come in conflict here... Dawn thinks she was right to get upset and some would say right to tell them to stop, she stood up for herself and her mother (in her opinion and it seems you agree), but think about different views/different people...its basically that an equal number of people will see it from Buffy's side instead, that a funeral is not a place to shout and embarrass ones self because although Dawn is getting upset the day isn't about Dawn its about Joyce and who knows how Joyce would have dealt with it, probably in a calm and reasonable way (that is Buffy's view)...basically it is about BOTH of them dealing with grief in a destructive way...Dawn's is to alienate people actively by being aggressive and Buffy's is to alienate people passively by trying to make everyone act calm and surpress their emotions (which is why she says nothing of Giles' drinking in private)...I hope you understand a bit more, let me know if not! I don't mind chatting about my story at all!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 11:47 pm Title: The Never-Ending Why

Wow. that lady at the funeral was a total biatch. No matter what situation she is in, Buffy always cares and worries what others think. Hope her and Spike can fight the obsticles that will maybe come their way.

Author's Response: I think that is the key difference with Spike and Buffy, Spike puts a lot of pressure on himself as well, but its not because of what others think he doesn't care about that. However Buffy is obsessed with how others perceive her and it will drag her down so its good you've picked up on it as its a recurring theme. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 - 11:44 pm Title: Devil in the Details

Really great conversation between Spike and Buffy. I'm loving the interaction they've been having.

I'm looking forward to your new story...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 - 07:05 am Title: Swallow

Aww poor Dawn. Plus Spuffy too. Good chapter. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you're feeling sorry for Dawn as well!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2012 - 11:01 am Title: The Never-Ending Why

Aww Poor Buffy. I'm glad she has Spike to help. I understand life has it's ups and downs. The fic wouldn't be realistic if it didn't have them. I know this isn't supposed to be fluffy and I'm glad.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2012 - 05:19 pm Title: Devil in the Details

I'm glad to see Buffy doesn't intent to give up Spike.
But even if she said so, she still started to avoid Spike.

Author's Response: Thanx for all the reviews and I hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2012 - 05:13 pm Title: Come Undone

Seems everyone is a bit broken at the moment because of Joyce's death.

Author's Response: I think broken is a very good word, to run with the metaphore I think everything needs putting back together after something like that happens, and it isn't always easy, and the pieces don't always fit the way they were before...so we'll just have to see!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2012 - 05:08 pm Title: Follow the Cops Back Home

It's good to see a sequel (because of the cliffhanger) but it's not a good start like I expected. Too sad.

Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry its too sad for you! I did try and make it like that though, so the evil writer part of me is also a little pleased its got across!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2012 - 11:04 pm Title: Devil in the Details

I'm glad you are feel creative and can't wait for your next story.

Great chapter. I love the angst and the smut thrown in with it.

Author's Response: Thank you I realised there wasn't enough smut and it felt right to throw some in. I'm literally bursting with creative energy I just have no time! Its a shame, but the little spare time I am getting I'm writing! Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2012 - 01:39 am Title: Come Undone

Before I read these new chapters, I read the original story to catch up to who these characters are. Just as they were finally getting themselves together, in life and love, death intervened. I like what I've seen here so far, the dealings with grief and all the formalities around it. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2012 - 11:46 am Title: Come Undone

Spuffy conversation was heart felt. I enjoyed this chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, the next chapter is getting polished as we speak!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2012 - 10:39 am Title: Come Undone

I read the other story again and I'm So glad you decided to write a sequel. I love it So far. I hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thank you hopefully have an update beginning of next week :)

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2012 - 02:46 pm Title: Follow the Cops Back Home

Interesting start. Looking forward to watching this story unfold.

Author's Response: Thank you, there will be some twists and turns coming soon!

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