Reviews For A Second Start
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2014 - 04:57 pm Title: First Impressions
Date: 11/16/2014 - 04:57 pm Title: First Impressions
Grammar errors (there are a couple of "yours" here that should be "you're." And Buffy sounds British. :-)
Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2013 - 06:22 am Title: First Impressions
Date: 01/04/2013 - 06:22 am Title: First Impressions
I like your writing style. Dialogue is good.