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Reviewer: Laranida Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2014 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter One

Chapter One: Still going strong, in my opinion. Spotted a typo though, there was another one in the Prologue. Don't know if you think I'm just being anal for pointing that out but thought I'd mention it.

This chapter:  It gave him a chance to thing,  (pretty sure you meant think)

Prologue: Willow’s barley contained tears (should be barely)

Both typos lead to words that a spellchecker won't catch up on as they are existing in the English language. I've had the problem myself and am thankful if someone points it out to me, so it's really not something I do to annoy.

I'll definitely be looking for updates on this one. Cheers



Author's Response: I'm always in a rush when it comes to spelling. Thanks for pointing it out though. I'll be sure to read and re-read from now on. Lol.

Reviewer: Laranida Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2014 - 11:37 pm Title: Prologue

>>play football, or soccer as they called it in England<<

You've got it backwards, hon. The sport they call soccer in the U.S.A. is called football in England while the sport Americans call football is sometimes refered to as American Football (and not just by the British).

Your story has a strong Prologue. You manage to raise interest in your story and catch the reader up on what happened since the end of the official series. Thumps up from me. :-)



Author's Response: Lol. I so didn't read this chapter before posting it. I have problems with that. I get it done and I just wanna post it. My laptop is acting like a total b-otch at the moment, but as soon as I get it up and running again I'll get to fixing it. Thanks for catching that.

Reviewer: Love to Bite Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2014 - 02:57 am Title: Prologue

This looks to be an interesting story. I have a feeling I'm going to be adding you to my favourite authors. Keep the good work coming.

Author's Response: I'm starting on the third chapter now. I know. I'm behind, but my laptops been a pain lately. I think its up and running okay now though.

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