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Reviewer: SANDRAMUST Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2014 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

Re-updated chapter 3 so hot . But i hope in chapter 5 you did more Spike/Dawn scene.

Reviewer: Hamster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2014 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3

Please give more Spike/Dawn smut!!!!

Reviewer: quir Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2014 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

I believed it ! I felt it! Very hot, very arousing and very inspiring. A swapping story of great sexuality, realism and quality. Well done.

Reviewer: Spiky57 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

I am really love Spike/Other sex but Buffy/Other not so much.

Reviewer: layed_back Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really liked this story. Good detail got me very horny.

Reviewer: willow23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't you post these a little faster? This is some great porn!

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2014 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.

Reviewer: Wolfram Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2014 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nice work. Hope you do more.

Reviewer: YamiBoy2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2014 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just wanted to say that was hot.  Keep up the writing, you definitely have a gift for it.

Reviewer: jpb531 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

So hot!!! shower now...

Reviewer: v1221 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh can you write more Spike/Dawn in bed o on table!!! Oh forgot  hot tab!!!

Reviewer: xan1der Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

story !! VERY well written and SO erotic and sensual. Thanks

Reviewer: Savini Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Spike/Dawn its so hot . but threesome Spike/Dawn/Buffy hottes and without Xander!!

 

Reviewer: Rogueslady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THE SPAWN SCENE! But Buffy/Xander not so much.

Reviewer: SANDRAMUST Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow... that was hot.. you never cease to amaze me when I read your smut scenes. Very sexy and hot. Need more!!!!!!



Author's Response: Hey thanks, I really appreciate all of you guys writing your reviews. It pumps me up to keep going. Feel free to even give me suggestions for where you think the story will or should go or if you just wanna have a chat. I'm levisobyeah@gmail.com

Author's Response: Hey thanks, I really appreciate all of you guys writing your reviews. It pumps me up to keep going. Feel free to even give me suggestions for where you think the story will or should go or if you just wanna have a chat. I'm levisobyeah@gmail.com

Reviewer: Sallydi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

Whew! that was hot. good stuff, very sexy!

Reviewer: Wbrcafe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Excellent start. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Billr26 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2014 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to read more. Such a realistic portrayal of many relationships & people. It had titalating elements, that beg for more graphic detail when the time is right for the main characters.

Reviewer: NikkiHit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Excellent story!!!

I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was really good. Enjoyed it very much and thought it was very sexy. It certainly got me hard!

 

Reviewer: v1221 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

I believed it ! I felt it! Very hot, very arousing and very inspiring. A swapping story of great sexuality, realism and quality. Well done.

Reviewer: Madmax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

So fucking hot need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sandi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can you write next story spike/buffy/cordy its hot.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 10:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Damn the wickedness of women, what is a poor man to do :D
This is great.

Author's Response: Haha. I know you're kidding about Dawn and Buffy being wicked. They aren't. As you'll see once i get into the backstory of WHY they're here in Vegas and swapping partners. Thanks for the review. :)

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