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Reviewer: Gimme Shelter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2024 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 25

It’s great to see this updated. I am worried about Buffy bring sucked in by Irina. After the whole thing with Xander sending the video to Will I would like to think Buffy would stay well clear of anything to do with him (including looking out for his girlfriend). If they could work together to bring Xander down that would be great though.

Author's Response: Keep reading!

Reviewer: Stormisin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2024 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 22

I love the update but i do wish there was a but more when Buffy wanted to do it again She was just first doing it for revenge but then she let go and liked it im curious what happened the rest of the hours and even curious about Faith and Spike

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! I really appreciate you taking the time. I wish there were more too as I had great fun writing it. But I don't think poor William could have taken any more to be honest. His jealousy and his need to know ended up really hurting him. Besides, Buffy answered the question in Chapter 12. They were up all night. Doing every nasty thing they could think of.

Reviewer: shithappens Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2023 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 22

Love love love love the update about the night in question! Could feel poor Wills pain and heartbreak listening to Buffy and Xander getting intimate and worse, sounding like they were having loads of fun together! No wonder Buffy didnt want to fess up to her husband LOL

Author's Response: I based this story based on the movie Indecent Proposal and not the book. What I learned only recently is that the book also has the billionaire making a sex tape of himself with the man's wife and showing it to him!

Reviewer: Asharah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2022 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 21

Xander needs to be committed.



Author's Response: *Most* billionaires are sociopaths

Reviewer: purpleispoetic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2022 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg this is so good!!! So many times I found myself gasping out loud I feel like I just never was quite able to see what was coming! Are Xander and faith somehow working together? Idk how their marriage would ever be the same maybe if they were both bamboozled by Xander and faith and could bond and come back together through that! I hope this gets an ending because this is SO GOOD!!!

Author's Response: It absolutely will.

Reviewer: purpleispoetic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2022 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg this is so good!!! So many times I found myself gasping out loud I feel like I just never was quite able to see what was coming! Are Xander and faith somehow working together? Idk how their marriage would ever be the same maybe if they were both bamboozled by Xander and faith and could bond and come back together through that! I hope this gets an ending because this is SO GOOD!!!

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2016 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for the update! Well congratulations to Faith coz she got what she wants or what sge was jealous of anyway. Hope you update soon. 



Author's Response: Updated. :) Love to hear your feedback. I guess you should save your congratulation for Xander. Actually, hold that horse. There's plenty of plot to burn through.

Reviewer: Gimme Shelter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2016 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 13

Great update. I think having Tara as a marriage counsellor is a great idea as it gives the reader more of an insight into what Buffy is thinking. The scene with Buffy and Xander was tough reading but so realistic. People do stupid things when they are upset. I really want Spike to point out to Buffy that he and Faith would. never have happened if Buffy hadn't ran off to Xander's for the weekend. Great to see this fic back.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2016 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 12

IIs this fic still goin ?



Author's Response: Yup

Reviewer: Gimme Shelter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2016 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 12

Ouch, that was hard reading but brilliant all the same. Can't wait to see how this whole mess gets sorted out.

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2016 - 07:18 am Title: Chapter 12

Xander should be punished or if not at least pay for the consequences of his action. Because if not, its like he's a god who do not suffer for the hings he did and does just because he can.  Impunity. Thats what he's doing.  And no one really does that. Always we have to get our due.  Same with him. Xander harris needs to be brought low for all the things he did--destroying marroages and lives. I bet he was the one who manipulated so that buffys gallery tanked and william lost his job the first time.  I want xander to not only feel and have broken bones. But hit where it hurt the most.  Which is everything--his business empire, his wealth, his name and reputation and finally his looks.  He should have boils all over his body actually! When that day comes, you know when ypu write whats coming for him, then i'll really cheer you on!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2016 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow thanks for the update. It was really enjoyable. Don't think we don't appreciate your story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! I appreciate it. I'd love to hear more about what you think

Reviewer: Gimme Shelter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2016 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 11

Brilliant updates. I love all the twists and turns you are putting into this. It's far better than the film it's based on. I do hope Xander gets his comeuppance though as he has created this shitstorm and it seems like he's about to get exactly what he wanted.

Reviewer: mscecilyunderwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2016 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh  crap!  I do hope Xander gets his due because he started all this misery and destroyed a good marriage just becaus ehe was slighted and jealous and a predator. Xander actually is a depraved man here. Despite his wealth he's no better than an a stray dog--want, take, have. Then to hell with all of you.  

I dread what happens next. Both here and your other story Electra complex. Although in Electra, I want to see Buffy gettin some of her own back. She was being cheated on right under her nose, in her own house by someone she considered family! How demeaning is that? And omg the 2--dawn and spike didnt even have the decency to be discreet about it. Its like subconsciously they wanted to be caught. Dawn is definitely for it, the slut! 

Definitely looking forward to your updates! Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2016 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Well that chicken came home to roost a lot sooner than I thought it would. But thanks for the update. Ive  been stalking the site for this



Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review :)

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2016 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 9

Finally I only check this site out know for your fics love the twist dont keep us waiting so long please ;-)

Reviewer: Gimme Shelter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2016 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great to see an update and what an update. What a great twist. Spike is going to have some explaining to do. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Glory78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2016 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 9

Ménage à trois  please!!!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2016 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Please update you other fic.

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2015 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter 8

Man you suck!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2015 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 8

So where update?

Reviewer: Ruby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 8

The Electra Complex update pretty please!!!!

Reviewer: Lollypop Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 8

I hope Spike have a balls, because Buffy just whore.



Author's Response: That's harsh

Reviewer: Madmax Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2015 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 8

Did she really thinks
 their marriage can be normal again?



Author's Response: Perhaps she thought their love was strong enough to survive any lasting damage

Reviewer: kennyboy84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2015 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 8

More Smut and sex :)



Author's Response: More reviews :)

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