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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 24

such a pity this was never finished - i truly enjoyed reading about spike and rebecca, and anya and giles. the xander stuff - well, i'm not surprised the spell manifested itself the way it did - his hatred and jealousy of angel and even spike.

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Date: 09/12/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad that you've decided to give Xander a chance, instead of marginalizing him like many Spuffy authors do. Although, given his past, he may have found the one non-good demon in the village.

Reviewer: icemink Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2005 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

I like your explination for what a soul is, and the three parts to a person. Reminded me of Freud. And Anya as the emissary, priceless.

Reviewer: icemink Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, that's just convoluted enough a plot to be an actual Joss plot. Eagerly moving on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 24

:) Spike with Stacy is really cute *smile* The spell worked well. Now we'll have to wait if Xander had learned something :)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter 24

I really like the idea of letting Xander work through th scenarios by magic, but of all the ones I can't fathom, it's Buffy with Jesse. I just can't see that one. Great chapter nonetheless. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 23

HI, I WAS ENJOYING THIS STORY .I CHECK EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU HAD ADDED ANY NEW CHAPTERS I HOPE YOU WILL SOON .GREAT READ MORE SOON PLEASE ..THANK YOU MAGGIE

Author's Response: Hi Maggie, so please you like the story. A new chapter is with my beta now, so hopefully will be up soon.

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter 23

GREAT STORY SO FAR HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON. IF YOU CAN COULD YOU LET ME KNOW WOULD LIKE TO KNOW .......THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL READ............MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COM

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 21

I hated Spike with Rebecca and I am thrilled that she's gone but turning her into a brood mare and then letting her die in such manner was a bit harsh. If you finish writing this story I will make myself read it because I have this weird love/hate thing going with it so please finish it soon and end my torment!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 23

yay!!! an update!!! wonderful!!! at least Samuel spared them the long explanation they were supposed to tell him... waiting for more!!

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter 23

great update! That was rather sad about the slayer pictures versus the watcher pictures. stupid men! can't wait for more

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Wow! Update! Loved the crystals (Solartians). And Ruperts Uncle was fun, too.

Reviewer: Nic (Smitten) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 23

This is a awesome story was alittle ugh with all the not Spuffyness LOL but once the friendship between the 3 of them started I was in a awe ever since.. Very well written

Reviewer: Shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm not a reader of this story but I know it contains major Spike/other and that the story might not really even be spuffy. That's not my problem but now that there is a Spike/other warning available I think it would be a good idea to use it.Please don't take this badly as I said I could never read a fic like this but I wouldn't want others like me to be hurt. I love your other stories, btw.

Author's Response: Your not a reader but you feel the need to review something that you HAVEN'T read. Otherwise you just want the opportunity to complain. If you read Pari's earlier review/comment you will see that it dosen't have to be spuffy in the sense of a relationship just have them as central characters. My summary also contains a warning that ithe story will EVENTUALLY work up to spuffiness. It's what is commonly known as a plot and character development. Perhaps a good idea would be to actually read what you are reviewing, and read what intrests you, not read something you don't like just so you can give the author a BAD review.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 22

Loved the last chapter. Beautiful. Now we're up to date and I hope you'll update soon! *smile*

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 21

*hugs Tara* She has seen that something is wrong with Xander *sniff* loved the flowers forming a blanket on the grave. Loved bringing Anne and Joyce in.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

Yes, I think Rebecca knows everyting! And Xander - he really only hears what he wants *sigh* Yes, she knew I'm sure... And what will happen to the baby too

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 19

I wonder how much Rebecca does know of the future - including Buffy that much in their relationship with Spike as she does...

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 18

Coming to think of the claim again :) - I don't know if it would be fun to know all what Anya is thinking by example *grin* Sometimes it's better not to know too much . When you have to hear it, it's enough ;-) *reading on* Oh - they'll learn to block it. Really clever idea, that familial claim

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2005 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 17

Awe, the plot thickens - the baby is alive! And a family claim (I love the idea)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 22

Well, that was beautiful and you've got to love the time allowed by Midian. It didn't rush the story, but it allowed us not to have to witness all 24/7 of the grief they feel.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2005 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 21

Another GREAT chapter!!!! LOVELY!!! WOW! cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

OH MY GOD!!!!!! WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!! I cant believe how good this story is heading. I mean it is sad that Rebecca had to go....but i seriously thought that the baby would too...... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon......

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 20

OK that's better. I thought this chapter was going to be horrible. I always had the idea that Rebecca wasn't around to stay, but I also thought she was priming Buffy to be the surrogate mommy. If the baby was gone too, I was going to be very upset. But this is good and specter Joyce is always good.

Reviewer: Ebontier Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 20

evil evil cliffhanger....update soon!!!!!

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