Penname: twilightchild [Contact] Real name: Eliza
Member Since: 10/24/2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm not exactly new in the fanfiction world. I've been around for a little while. However, I just published my very first original erotic scifi novel, The Unnamed, which can be found here: http://www.excessica.com/books/index.php?main_page=product_info&products_id=1379
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Reviews by twilightchild
Summary: A Slayer. A vampire. A 1959 DeSoto. Spike kidnaps Buffy and heads back to Brazil in a misguided attempt to appease Drusilla. What starts out as revenge turns into an experience neither will forget. If they don't kill each other first.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47119
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2006 Updated: 11/26/2006
Reviewer: twilightchild Signed Liked
Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One

I think I love the story already ;) very hot and wicked.

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Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Loved the image of Buffy hopping down the street all tied up with breasts bouncing. This looks like it's going to be beyond amusing.

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Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Five

Molesting Spike is always a fun idea.

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Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 6: Six

You discribe the chaos very well, and everything is well written and flows. I got a good mental picture of their fight.

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Date: 11/27/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

I can't help but wonder how long Spike's had that car, and yet as soon as it's within Buffy's reach it falls more and more apart. Poor Spike. He can't hold on to anything long term around her.

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Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

A literal roll in the hay, always fun.

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Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

Wonderful way to introduce Xander into the mix, lol.

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Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen

This story certainly doesn't stop getting amusing. It's rare that you get to see Buffy and Spike in a carefree invironment, especially when some of her friends come along.

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Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 18: 18

lol, very funny stripping Xander scene.

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Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

lol, I absolutely loved the scene with the kitten laying on Spike's parts. Very funny.

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Date: 11/29/2006 Title: Chapter 22: Twenty-Two

Love the ending with them screwing against the wall. It's how they began their time together in the show, only the ending to this story is how it should have gone. Hot and passionate, but tender and loving at the same time. Good job with this story, it was an original idea, and I hope you write plenty more.

Summary: Response to Challenge #195 at BSV. Early Season Four, Giles finds an ancient ritual that may solve their problem of what to do with the recently chipped, but not-so-harmless William the Bloody...but Buffy gets a bit more than she bargained for in the process....
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 109 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 335000
[Report This] Published: 03/18/2006 Updated: 11/11/2006
Reviewer: twilightchild Signed Liked
Date: 10/26/2006 Title: Chapter 9: The Struggle

I love the way you kept us guessing at who was going to win. You could never really tell for sure either way.

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Date: 10/27/2006 Title: Chapter 29: Confessions

I like the way you introduced Dawn in this. Even if Dawn wasn't always the best of characters, I always loved the relationship that she and Spike shared. I love how much more detail you bring to the relationship between Spike and all the Summer's women, too.

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Date: 10/29/2006 Title: Chapter 78: Mastery

At least you acknolwedge that everything between Buffy and Spike isn't going to be all sunshine and roses after everything that's happened. Something like that takes a toll, and unfortunately that's something that some authors tend to ignore. You've got your readers feeling the stress, and that's something that makes it a good page turner.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: twilightchild Signed Liked
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Her reaction was very realistic. It wasn't the extatic that alot of people like to write, and wasn't blindly furious.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Uh oh, poor bitter Spike. He's going to screw something up, I just know it.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

The beginning was beautiful, very touching memories put together in a way that almost brought tears to the eyes. Spike's done major wrong, here. Will he ever be able to make up for this?

Reviewer: twilightchild Signed Liked
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Now this is an interesting mystery.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Very emotional, love the story.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Poor Buffy, how horrible that she's without her memories. This is a very original story line, I haven't read many like this before. I hope they find her.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Ah, the tension! I really hope they get Buffy back soon!

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Yay! He has her! The emotions you portray are very intense, very realistic and true to their relationship.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Very sad, touching scenes.

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Date: 02/17/2007 Title: None

Ahhh, and more mystery. Love this story. I need more, more more! It's definitely original, and emotional: one to be proud of.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: twilightchild Signed Liked
Date: 11/22/2006 Title: None

It needs a bit of beta work, but it's definitely a great idea. I always thought Spike deserved much better than Buffy had EVER given him, in any part of the show. Rubbing in the fact that someone could actually treat him decently might be the perfect way to go.

Author's Response: Up till this chapter I have not had it completly beta'd. But this chapter was looked over, and hopefully I will get the first few chapters betad. Well in the upcoming chapters we might just see how much better things might be if he stays with Katie. But honestly can Spike stay away from our leading lady?