Penname: Serinah [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 12/09/2007
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I'm 28 and I'm an old, old spuffy fan. Right now I'm writing a dramione (Draco/Hermione) on Coloured Grey but some day I will write spuffy too. That's a promise. :)
I'm a beta, but I really don't have any credentials besides being on the 3rd year of uni, studying Eng language and literature. And well, if you haven't still got it, I'm not a native speaker.
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Summary: AU: All Human. A heated encounter with cynical stranger, William Saunders, on a winter’s night gives sensible, Elizabeth Summers a chance to act out of character and leaves her with memories she’ll treasure forever. But then, he unexpectedly reappears in her life and wants to pick up where they left off…
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65124
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2004 Updated: 04/08/2005
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Date: 02/16/2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Chilly Start

Reading for the nth time. Still loving it.

Strip Snap by Lilachigh Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Updated Summary. Buffy has gone on a ‘date’ with Spike but come home with ‘William’. And the charm to get Spike back involves the Slayer in a lot of desire, need and love.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70668
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2005 Updated: 08/20/2007
Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked
Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale

*William pushed past her, and advanced across the room, hand held out to Xander who gaped, dropped the pizza and automatically shook hands with the vampire.* I absolutely love this!

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Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale

As entertaining this chapter was, I have to tell you (which you might already know, but still) that although Victorian men didn't necessarily value a woman's mind, they valued their company and virtue. And yes, in William's eyes Buffy is not viruous nor a lady, but still, manners were the most important thing. I seriously doubt an educated gentleman would have blatantly said that he was glad to have some sensible company because there was a man present. Also I don't think he'd be ever so presumptuous as to ASK if he were to sleep with Buffy. He'd probably ask Xander very quietly, where was Buffy's room and sneaked in being dead sure he would not be denied anything.

Author's Response: I think that as in so many aspects of life, everyone has different views. A woman's role in Victorian society was complex. The whole of Victorian society was complex! These were people who wrapped their furniture legs in material so no one should have lustful thoughts about sex! And repressed sex is at the basis of all Dickens and every other Victorian writer. Their manners were not our manners and there was no mercy for a girl in any strata of society who got pregnant out of marriage. To William, Buffy is nothing more or less than a whore and he will treat her as such.

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Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chp 13 What About Me?

Not normal nor natural. I think William would be very concerned to go back, not stay.

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Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chp 14 One Solution

“Where will William go if you and Willow manage to get Spike back?” I don't understand how they can even think that. William is the only one who should have asked. Others would just presume that after the reverse spell or whatever William and Spike would be the same again. And it would have been logical to say to William that when they get Spike back, he'd be back in his own time again. Which I'm sure would satisfy him. He has a life and a mother to think of, after all.

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Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chp 15 One Little Word

*...ran away and hid. She brushed them all under the carpet and did a sort or Scarlett O’Hara act. Oh I’ll think about them tomorrow - tomorrow is another day.* I don't think Scarlett ever ran away from things. What she meant by another day was not giving up, persueing what she wanted tomorrow, because today she didn't succeed. Well, perhaps she ran a bit from her feelings to Rhett, but it wasn't what her famous words generally meant. Well, that's what i think.


Author's Response: Well, that is one way of interpreting Scarlett's words! I'm afraid I can't agree with you. Scarlett had the ability in every walk of life to push bad things, or things she didn't agree with, out of her mind. She would think about them tomorrow, deal with them tomorrow. Not quite running away, perhaps, but denial with a capital D. Scarlett insists that the world is fashioned to her views and when it doesn't fit, she just ignores it. Is Scarlett brave? Well, that's a whole essay's worth! A survivor, definitely.

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Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chp 15 One Little Word

One more thought. I'm curious, what is really going on with this W/S thing. It still seems to me, that they have both always been there, inside the same body, I wonder when Buffy will stop talking about getting one back without having the other. I'd rather think of this William here as Spike who's lost his memory, nothing more.

Summary: Four years after the murder and Spike still can't talk about it. Will the arrival of Buffy Summers at Sunnydale High change that? Buffy and her brothers are new to the small town and she is certain Spike Giles has something to hide. Though perhaps Buffy does as well?
*Winnner: Bloody Colonials Award (Alternative Universe) @ the RWS Awards*
*Winner: Lonley School Award (Best High School fic) @ the CoH Awards*

Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50695
[Report This] Published: 01/05/2006 Updated: 04/12/2009
Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked
Date: 03/07/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Taking the Field

ha! love finding new writers to read. the 1st ch is a blast. thanks for postingit here. :)

Author's Response: your welcome love... thanks for reviewing... if you liked this you should check out my new fic i just started writing Tears in Heaven! hope you keep reading!

Summary: Response to a challenge set by anon462 on Elysian Fields. Set post season finale of both AtS and BtVS. Spike has shanshued but hates it. Angel tries to help him adjust but Spike resents it. One day he is seriously injured in a fight with demons and Angel turns to the one person who he knows can help Spike recover - Buffy - how will she react to the news that Spike's alive?---------------------------------------------------------WINNER OF BEST WIP AND RUNNER UP BEST POST SEASON FINALE FIC AT SUNNYD AWARDS - RUNNER UP BEST ANGST AT INDIGO CRYPT AWARDS thank you! Nominated currently at Fang Fetish Awards
Categories: General/Canon
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94871
[Report This] Published: 03/05/2008 Updated: 05/13/2008
Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked
Date: 04/06/2008 Title: Chapter 21: You'll Never Be Normal...

oh, god, update, ye sod!! lol. Anyway, I'm afraid I've been betaing all day straight yesterday, so sorry about this but I have 2 comments.
1- I'm not sure that Daniel using words 'attempted suicide' in front of Spike was professional. Unless he did it on purpose to make him feel sth or other. But even then it should be Moira's work I think. But maybe it just shows what I know.
2 - I expected the Rosendale building would have plenty of large windows. Or at least normal windows. How come Angel is there during the day and walking around as he wishes?
On that note let me assure you that you are still a good writer and I love your stories. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: hi there! Fair comment about Daniel the doctor - but just figured he was a professional and was just commenting on what had happened but yeah - not big with the bedside manner! lol!! As for Rosedene - the rooms are huge like an english stately home so have lots of dark spaces and corners! and i did say that Spike's room was at the front and the front is shaded in the morning so that would help the dimness. sorry i didn't say that Angel sat in a shadey spot - just took that as a given, bad writer to presume anything! that's also why he can get in in the mornings without trouble as mentioned in previous chapter.glad you still think i'm okay! :) thanks for your comments!!! See you in the next chapter I hope!! :) couldn't resist the cliffie!!

Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked
Date: 04/26/2008 Title: Chapter 34: Safe?

I forgot to mention that turning Laura into a seer is brilliant!

Author's Response: cheers Serinah!!! :) figured I needed a 'normal' to be a bit different!! Tee hee!! :)