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My Elizabeth by Puddinhead

Rated: NC-17 • 298 Reviews Liked
Summary: A 2011 Buffy back in 1880 along with William Pratt. After an ocean voyage and a stop in New York City, our couple sets off across the American West.

There are showdowns, riots, murder and olde tyme bathing suits. The story is also chock full of history and you'll learn all the 'hip slang' from these wacky Victorians in no time. It also features a few real historical figures, but no spoilers. I'll only say that it is NOT Genghis Khan and Amelia Earhart. Put that thought right out of your mind.

Though this is a sequel to "Yours, William," it also works as a stand alone. I had to take down "Yours" as I'm rewriting as an original. You can email me about this if you want info.
Won Round 25 of the Sunny-D Awards for Best Alternative Universe. Won Round 26 for Best Drama, Best Original Character, Best Original Character Pairing, Best Unfinished. Thanks!


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Date: 03/04/2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I forgot to say I LOVED The Oregon Trail game reference! That game was so much fun and I'd play it at school all the time! I don't think there's even a way to win damn thing because you always die. It's insane. You brought me back to good times in the computer room with that reference!

Author's Response: Oregon Trail REPRESENT! Also, Carmen Sandiego, if I can find a way to work that in, I will :) Maybe an upcoming fic



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Date: 03/03/2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh Buffy... Mad at William for not taking advantage? Silly girl! Then mad at herself for throwing herself at him. Then upset because she thinks he deserves better. Yet, as always William remains the best guy ever and comforts her through her emotional rollercoaster.

Author's Response: I wanted him to cheat at cards because it is such a Spike thing to do - but I wanted him to do it in a William way. Thus, cheating to lose was born! I used to cheat my ass off to lose at Candyland when playing with little kids :)



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Date: 03/04/2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well well... I'm all sorts of intrigued! Is Billy the William she is now after or is she using him to get to Buffy's William? Oooo! Can't wait to find out! Loved Buffy and William's sexy time! Without knowing it, William got what he's been wanting. A Buffy who loves him and shows it when making love with him! I thought it was funny that she added "by the way" after telling him she loves him. It's so Buffy to keep it light!

Author's Response: Those scenes are hard to write, to be honest. You don\'t want to cross the line into super-mush. Lucikly, Buffy won\'t let me do that very often :)



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What a nice chapter! I like hearing Buffy is cuddling with William at night and she is completely aware and fine with it! They seem well on their way to being happy once again, which makes me wonder how soon your going to bring in the bad to muck things up! Oh yes, I've caught on to your conspiring ways! ;)

Author's Response: What? Me? MOI? I am affronted! ;)



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/04/2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well I really connected with Buffy this chapter. I also woke up with a hangover and felt just as you described! It sucks. Another few great moments between William and Buffy! I loved when she got jealous on the train! The gift William got her was so amazing! I like how he celebrates that side of her and isn't afraid of it. Finally Buffy realizes she loves him and probably has for a while! Perfect!

Author's Response: Yeah, researching what a hangover feels like was just hell. Hell, I tell ya!



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

William is just the best man ever. Personally, I think he should forget about Buffy and find a girl who already loves him... gee, come to think of it I'm available.... Puddinhead, would you pass that along to William for me? Thanks! ;)

Author's Response: Sure, I\'ll tell him - just as soon as I\'m finished with him...



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so glad they had a great day together and Buffy was actually enjoying it! It's so damn cute!

Author's Response: Planning their dates was a blast, I\'ll be honest :)



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Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Nooooooooo! George?! Really?! Do I hate you for killing one of my favorites? No. But I do have the urge to shoot you with an airsoft gun. And don't be fooled! Those little plastic bbs sting!

Author's Response: I tried to avoid it! Well, you read my notes :( I loved George!



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww. I'm so glad you dedicated an entire chapter to George's funeral! He deserved it. I am so sad that he is gone, but I loved how caring the rest of the ships passengers were. They attended his funeral and even raised money for his family! Perfect. I love your history bits at the end! They are fascinating and fun to read!

Author's Response: Thanks. Now that I\'m writing a book to try to publish, I can\'t write those and I miss them! Wish published books had footnotes in every chapter! I\'d abuse the hell out of that



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am loving the wealth of knowledge in this story and in the author notes! Fantabulous! My god William is a patient man! I couldn't handle Buffy and her moods, but William does it flawlessly! Plus he does it without backhanding her at every turn! That deserves an award of some sort!

Author's Response: Huzzah for that! All my research isn\'t just putting off writing when I\'m stuck! Really!



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ahahaha! The penis contraption returns! And why he used it was so endearing! lol. I'm so happy to see Buffy falling in love with William, but I hate that they won't have what he and Elizabeth had. Buffy still hasn't said sorry for punching him in the nose and gashing up his temple! And poor Dru! Gosh, I was feeling so bad for her when Warren was adding to her mental torture. Great chapter!

Author's Response: The penis prison was too much fun in the first story - I had to bring it along in this one.



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I know it's just how Buffy is, and you're writing her fantasiclly, but her always being the emotionally distant fruit loop that she is makes me want to strangle her! I like how you touched on the "I'm cookie dough" thing! It's true that her being fully baked is the complete woman, but it's sad even William knows he had her and this Buffy is not there yet. :( Everytime I tell myself "just one more chalter, then I'm going to go be productive today." you suck me with with these little cliffhangers. Dru is outside their room?! Looks like I will be reading on!

Author's Response: Thanks. Your reviews are really thoughtful and its helpful to know what works in a chapter. I appreciate your feedback so much



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's so cute watching Buffy fall in love with William all over again! She getting all insecure and protective! Poor William. Trying to take on Dru for the sake of Buffy's safety... I adore him and I wish I had a William! Okay, seriously when I read the Miss Cleo tid bit in the end notes... I got all giddy! When I was a kid I watch The Jenny Jones show all the time in the summer and Miss Cleo would guest appear! She was ridiculous and I loved it!

Author's Response: I have no idea why I remembered Miss Cleo! I had to youtube a bunch of her old stuff just to remember how ridiculous she was :)



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Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well there you have it! Buffy is gonna attack William via penis! That made me laugh! But I still find that machine to be so nasty. It's been in all sorts of hoohoos! It's like buying a vibrator at a garage sale! blah!

Author's Response: Yeah. And I\'d be scared it would short circuit and burn the ship down!



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Why can't we all have a William?! He is so patient and simply wonderful! I love George too and I think he should go with them to California!

Author's Response: In my fantasy world, George and Jenny hook up. To hell with Jack the stable boy



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well that's not the naughty fun they should have been having! Poor William....

Author's Response: He\'s abused so he can later be soothed...



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Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank goodness Buffy busted in there! And she called William her husband! Woot Woot!

Author's Response: Hurrah!



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Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm so happy to see Buffy coming around! I love the way you are writing Dru. It's so her! Great jobx

Author's Response: Thanks so much



Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked
Date: 03/02/2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so glad to see William is gaining back his confidence! I am intrigued with his needing fool Buffy so he could have time to himself... I am thinking he will set up a romantic something or another.... just because he is such a sweetheart! Lastly, I love the little bits of history and facts we are learning! Thanks!

Author's Response: I hope you found the reason --- reasonable



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Date: 03/01/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy moly. I don't see why Buffy would object to such a machine.... Am I being sarcastic? Yes! That is insane, but so fantastic that it really did exist! I feel so awful for William! And now he is going for a walk... where it's night... and a certain somebody is loose!

Author's Response: I love that electric vibrators came along before electric vacuums. And ppl think Victorians were prudes... ;)



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Date: 03/01/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

2001 Buffy is ruining everything! William wasn't supposed to know so much about Spike! At she calmed down enough to listen to William, but she better apologise soon for being such a crazy ass bitch to him! And now Dru is wandering about...great....

Author's Response: Dru was too much fun to write tho! Don\'t hate! :D



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Date: 03/01/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Grr! I wanna punch Buffy in the face! Why does she always have to jump to conclusions and refuse to listen to anybody?! I'm getting so worked up, which means I'm loving the story!

Author's Response: Gotta keep her in character! Pain in the ass that she can be