Penname: wolffan200 [Contact] Real name: Jenny
Member Since: 03/19/2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm an Irish college student who has been addicted to Buffy since it first aired and fell in love with the stunning bleached blonde vamp the minute I set eyes on him. I lurked around fanfiction sites for a long time before deciding to start writing and I've been bitten by the bug (or vamp in this case) and become addicted.
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My Elizabeth by Puddinhead Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 298]
Summary: A 2011 Buffy back in 1880 along with William Pratt. After an ocean voyage and a stop in New York City, our couple sets off across the American West.

There are showdowns, riots, murder and olde tyme bathing suits. The story is also chock full of history and you'll learn all the 'hip slang' from these wacky Victorians in no time. It also features a few real historical figures, but no spoilers. I'll only say that it is NOT Genghis Khan and Amelia Earhart. Put that thought right out of your mind.

Though this is a sequel to "Yours, William," it also works as a stand alone. I had to take down "Yours" as I'm rewriting as an original. You can email me about this if you want info.
Won Round 25 of the Sunny-D Awards for Best Alternative Universe. Won Round 26 for Best Drama, Best Original Character, Best Original Character Pairing, Best Unfinished. Thanks!


Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 164308
[Report This] Published: 09/13/2011 Updated: 08/24/2012
Reviewer: wolffan200 Signed Liked
Date: 01/15/2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hate to have to do this on an author's review page but what I've read on it has really bothered me.

Grammar Police, I don't want you to feel attacked here, but I think the way you phrased your comments was disrespectful and not at all constructive criticism. I felt that the phrasing and the use of exclamation marks stressing your point came off as sarcastic, condescending and rude.

Secondly I think that despite your argument to the contrary, your original review did criticize the author's beta readers. "Five people read this and not a single one spotted that! Good job!" I would love to know how else this could be perceived as to me it seems like a clear dig at everyone who read the chapter and approved it.

I would also like to point out that just because people are responding the way they are under aliases does not mean it is the author. She has responded to your review and made her point. I don't think she needs to pretend to be a variety of anonymous characters just to get back at you. It's unnecessary and the fact that you review anonymously should say something about throwing stones.

Okay, this was a long review that had nothing to do with the chapter but I felt the need to express an opinion since I am not used to seeing this sort of thing and it annoys me that this carry on happens in an environment that should be creative and fun.

Wolf out.

Author's Response: I don\'t know how to respond to this. Go wolf. How\'s that?