Date: 07/02/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
I wish I could write "utter drek" like that. The build up to the kiss was incredibly intense. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
Date: 07/02/2005 - 01:33 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter also it was soooo great more soon plz its amazing!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/02/2005 - 01:22 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter too please keep on writing you are doing such a great job!!
Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter. no need for performance anxiety, this story is awesome. cant wait for more
Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Drek? NO! Not drek!! Kiss? Mucho caliente! ***fans self and drains half a bottle of water*** Um...GAH! That was..just...yeah! **runs and pounces dirty laundry in excuse to escape for a moment and regain some composure***More, please? :-D
Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:30 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
LOVED this chapter. Can hardly wait for more!
Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Nicely chorographed. The dance they did with one another,both thinking and hopeing the same things. Will is so componsionate. He is the being the one stable person in her life. He accepts her as her. She can just let go with him. the dinner scene was great both of their inner dialouges going on and yet the conversation could of gone on forever. wonderfully done. The kiss was so wanted, needed, complete. As if they both knew, that it was right. Besides she won't be 17 forever. Either way, I am really enjoying how you are taking this one step at a time. Formulating a relationship. Though I figure the bumps in the road to be rotten in a few chapters.
Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:04 am Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
This chapter was very good. The ebb and flow of emotions, action and dialogue came together seamlessly. You're making their feelings for one another believable and they're both sympathetically written. Having Buffy tell Will he had to go was the perfect call. The action put her in control and let him off the hook for needing to leave. Nice job with this chapter.
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
of course I loved tht chapter.....who wouldn't its got spike kisses in it...awesome update..can't wait for the next update
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
I liked this chapter too. It truly was about courtship, just finding out personal items about each other. It was sweet.
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:30 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Omg!! I loved this chapter. Spuffy loving at last. Lol!! It rocked!! Continue please!!
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
yes it was very good, more
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:50 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Absolutely loved the chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Awesome awesome chapter!!!! Can't wait for more
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Not utter drek at all! Whatcha talking about, girl? You rock with this story and, hey, smoochies! Always a plus! I agree with the rest of the ladies, I want one like him or Spike in Origins (hint hint) Conjure one for me, purty please?
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Finally. Smootchies! I think this chapter was the bees knees. Just perfect. ::sigh:: I want my very own Will. Could you conjure one up for me? Pretty Please?
Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
This chapter was way awesome...can I have him??
Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Aww!! How sweet! Lovin' it, update soon!
Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
very nice!! not utter drek. Keep up the good work.
Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:37 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved it and i am glad that they finally shared their first kiss....you did a wonderful job please keep up the good work