Date: 01/10/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: 1
Great beginning. I'm enjoying the way this is going so far.
Author's Response: Thank you, Tuesday! Hope you continue to enjoy and review.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: 1
this is exciting i can't wait for more! what a twist, and what great dialogue. i can easily see this as a realistic alternate reality.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! Hope you will continue to enjoy and review.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: 1
for a first fic this is shaping up to be really good! update soon, because i am really looking forward to more. good job!
Author's Response: Why, thank you, Carol! Glad you are liking so far and will be updating next week. Hope you will like the next bit too.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: 1
wow. are you sure this is your first fic. i love it so far, and can't wait for more. please soon
Author's Response: Why, thank you, daisy! Just goes to show how good betas can help - and I am fortunate enough to have two wonderful ladies! More next week. Hope to see you again then!
Date: 01/10/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: 1
Make you cry? Why on earth would we do that? Your fic is fantastic! This is a very original idea and I like the concept a lot. Spike as a slave... hmm... *licks lips* *LOL* Keep them coming, sweetie! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, luxferi! I have a suspicion that you wouldn't mind taking care of him in Buffy's place! Minx! Look for more next week -maybe sooner on my LJ.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: 1
This is a very interesting idea. Looks like it's going to be a good fic!
Author's Response: Thank you, Noelle. I'm hoping it'll be good - only time will tell . *gulps*
Author's Response: Thank you, Noelle. I'm hoping it'll be good - only time will tell . *gulps*
Date: 01/10/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: 1
Wow..This doesn't seem like someone's first fic. So far it's really good. Also a great idea : D
Can't wait to see what Spike is like after all these years of being chipped and with the initiative. Will he hate Buffy for picking him?
I'll be watching for any updates!
Author's Response: Thank you, DaniD, for your kind words!
Expect their different experiences to have produced a few changes in both Buffy and Spike. Hate Buffy? Wait and see - gotta tempt you back somehow!
Date: 01/10/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: 1
Fab approach to writing your story...very intriguing cant wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, bob! I hope you'll enjoy the next chappie as much - fingers crossed!
Date: 01/10/2006 - 01:03 pm Title: 1
I like your approach. You set up the premise very well. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, ace! Hope you continue to like as it goes on.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 12:57 pm Title: 1
I like this, it has a very differnt twist. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I hope future chappies don't disappoint.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: 1
good beginning. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, jeanie! More next week - with Spike!
Date: 01/10/2006 - 12:37 pm Title: 1
Interesting. I like it.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks, Raspy_Luv. Hope you read more next week and still like.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: 1
I realy like the idea! and thise chap was a realy good start! i bet thise is going to be a great story!
kisses Lara
Author's Response: You're very kind, lara! I hope you'll continue to like with next week's chappie. xxx
Date: 01/10/2006 - 11:42 am Title: 1
It started off pretty good. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Ryan! More will be posted next week and I hope you'll like that too.
Date: 01/10/2006 - 09:40 am Title: 1
This sounds like a pretty good beginning. Poor Spike! That chip really is like enslavement.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please make it be soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Unlife has not been kind to our boy in recent years - more next week.